The document discusses choppy writing and provides examples of choppy and corrected paragraphs. Choppy writing is characterized by short, repetitive sentences that begin with the same subject and verb pattern. To correct choppiness, a writer should vary sentence structure by using different sentence openings like introductory clauses, combining short sentences, and avoiding excessive repetition of words. The sample choppy paragraph is then revised to have less repetitive sentences that are more complex in structure.