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Write in first person 
• I 
• Me 
• We 
• My 
Write in third person 
• She 
• Her 
• He 
• His 
• Their 
• Him 
• Them 
• They
Write mainly in the past tense 
Add ‘ed’ to most words to make them past tense
Mum 
Dad 
Sister 
Brother 
Teacher 
Friend 
Aunty 
Uncle 
Cousin 
Policeman 
Fireman 
Next door neighbour
Yesterday 
Last week 
Last night 
An hour ago 
Last year 
At 2.30 pm…
Home 
School 
Playground 
Supermarket 
Rainbows End 
The Town Centre 
The school field
Birthday 
Special day or event 
Wedding 
Holiday 
Christmas 
Easter 
Ceremonies
What was happening?
• What happened first? 
• What happened next? 
• What happened last? 
We got on the bus 
We 
arrived at 
the zoo 
We saw the giraffes
• A few minutes later 
• Meanwhile 
• Afterwards 
• Then 
• Next 
• Finally 
• After that 
• First 
• When 
• Later 
• The next day 
• After
The dog ran after me. 
The ferocious dog ran after me. 
Pleasant 
Delicious 
Tender 
Lovely 
Gentle 
Special 
Sweet 
Cute 
Kind 
Fine 
Excellent 
Brilliant 
Outstanding 
Tremendous 
Okay 
Terrific 
Dazzling 
Marvellous 
Amazing 
Incredible 
Great 
Awful 
Terrible 
Dreadful 
Shocking 
Ghastly 
Horrific 
Unpleasant 
Poor 
Frightening 
Horrifying 
Horrible 
Great 
Wonderful 
Awesome 
Fantastic 
Brilliant 
Depressing 
Miserable 
Unhappy 
Dejected 
Gloomy
• WWhhiimmppeerreedd 
• IInntteerrrruupptteedd 
• SSoobbbbeedd 
• MMuummbblleedd 
• SSqquueeaalleedd 
• AAsskkeedd 
• EExxppllaaiinneedd 
• OObbjjeecctteedd 
• WWaarrnneedd 
• CCoonnttiinnuuee dd 
• PPlleeaaddeedd 
• SSccrreeaammeedd 
• WWhhiissppeerreedd 
• SShhoouutteedd 
• YYeelllleedd 
• RRooaarreedd 
• SSttaammmmeerreedd 
• BBeelllloowweedd 
• EExxccllaaiimmeedd 
• LLaauugghheedd 
• AAnnsswweerreedd 
• RReepplliieedd 
• TToolldd 
• TTeeaasseedd 
• AAddddeedd 
• RRaavveedd 
• GGaassppeedd 
• YYeelllleedd 
• DDeemmaannddeedd 
• RReessppoonnddeedd 
• MMuutttteerreedd 
• AAddmmiitttteedd 
• MMooaanneedd
• What was the 
last thing that 
happened? 
• How did it finish?
Self Assessment 
I have written in first person by using words like I, me, we, you, she, 
he, 
I have written in third person by using words like them, they, him, their, 
she, her, his 
I have written mainly in the past tense using words was, were, saw or 
words that end in ‘ed’ 
I have written an introduction that has told the reader ‘who, when, why 
and where” 
I have written all the events in order of time that they happened in 
I have used interesting adjectives to create a picture for the reader 
I have used strong verbs to describe what happened in the story like 
scream, plead, shout etc 
I have described the feelings of the person telling the story 
I have written a conclusion that says how the writer feels, how things 
went and have mentioned something that might happen later

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Junior recount-powerpoint-2003-version4713

  • 2. Write in first person • I • Me • We • My Write in third person • She • Her • He • His • Their • Him • Them • They
  • 3. Write mainly in the past tense Add ‘ed’ to most words to make them past tense
  • 4. Mum Dad Sister Brother Teacher Friend Aunty Uncle Cousin Policeman Fireman Next door neighbour
  • 5. Yesterday Last week Last night An hour ago Last year At 2.30 pm…
  • 6. Home School Playground Supermarket Rainbows End The Town Centre The school field
  • 7. Birthday Special day or event Wedding Holiday Christmas Easter Ceremonies
  • 9. • What happened first? • What happened next? • What happened last? We got on the bus We arrived at the zoo We saw the giraffes
  • 10. • A few minutes later • Meanwhile • Afterwards • Then • Next • Finally • After that • First • When • Later • The next day • After
  • 11. The dog ran after me. The ferocious dog ran after me. Pleasant Delicious Tender Lovely Gentle Special Sweet Cute Kind Fine Excellent Brilliant Outstanding Tremendous Okay Terrific Dazzling Marvellous Amazing Incredible Great Awful Terrible Dreadful Shocking Ghastly Horrific Unpleasant Poor Frightening Horrifying Horrible Great Wonderful Awesome Fantastic Brilliant Depressing Miserable Unhappy Dejected Gloomy
  • 12. • WWhhiimmppeerreedd • IInntteerrrruupptteedd • SSoobbbbeedd • MMuummbblleedd • SSqquueeaalleedd • AAsskkeedd • EExxppllaaiinneedd • OObbjjeecctteedd • WWaarrnneedd • CCoonnttiinnuuee dd • PPlleeaaddeedd • SSccrreeaammeedd • WWhhiissppeerreedd • SShhoouutteedd • YYeelllleedd • RRooaarreedd • SSttaammmmeerreedd • BBeelllloowweedd • EExxccllaaiimmeedd • LLaauugghheedd • AAnnsswweerreedd • RReepplliieedd • TToolldd • TTeeaasseedd • AAddddeedd • RRaavveedd • GGaassppeedd • YYeelllleedd • DDeemmaannddeedd • RReessppoonnddeedd • MMuutttteerreedd • AAddmmiitttteedd • MMooaanneedd
  • 13. • What was the last thing that happened? • How did it finish?
  • 14.
  • 15.
  • 16.
  • 17. Self Assessment I have written in first person by using words like I, me, we, you, she, he, I have written in third person by using words like them, they, him, their, she, her, his I have written mainly in the past tense using words was, were, saw or words that end in ‘ed’ I have written an introduction that has told the reader ‘who, when, why and where” I have written all the events in order of time that they happened in I have used interesting adjectives to create a picture for the reader I have used strong verbs to describe what happened in the story like scream, plead, shout etc I have described the feelings of the person telling the story I have written a conclusion that says how the writer feels, how things went and have mentioned something that might happen later