The raft, the river and the rainbow: Image
Inspired Storytelling for the 21st century in
Middle Years English Classrooms
Lizzie Chase
 Elizabeth.chase@det.nsw.edu.au
 http://pinterest.com/lizziemchase
Amy Krisenthal – Chifley College, Shalvey Campus
 Amy.krisenthal@det.nsw.edu.au
Join Hotmail first to get an account to access
Skydrive.com and get all our teaching resources:
https://skydrive.live.com/#cid=985D506652839C93
Outline of this session
Image-based writing resources + process
writing approach workshop
 1. Fiction with a twist – Foundation lessons
 2. How to blog: Hats, boxes example
 3. Raft, river, rainbow
 4. Band of heroes
 5. Super 6 plus + Hats, Boxes, magic, moon
Term 3 elizabeth.chase@det.nsw.edu.au
 6. Participants will work as writing partners
Image-based + blogging: Why?
 Image-based blogging inspires great ideas
 Blogging is a sure-fire way of engaging students
because they are publishing for an audience
beyond their own classroom
 Even reluctant writers enjoy writing in pairs
 Approach uses „writing partners‟ sharing
 Blogs feature comments by author Deb Abela
 Bloggers also appreciate each other‟s ideas
 5 writing tasks: one every week for 5 weeks
 Feel free to use the tasks at your school, in a blog
of your own, such as an Edmodo.com blog
Cyber safety & blogging preparations
 Find out which students are blocked from
appearing in the school newsletter because of a
media ban / custodial dispute
 Train all students never to use their real surnames
online – they may use fake first names, tell you
these
 Train all students not to give their address and
other identifying details
 Explain about „flagging‟ problems – tell teacher if
any problems occur – explain „moderated‟ blogs
 Prepare writing in Word documents beforehand –
copy & paste these into blog
Teaching occurs first - away from screens
 Read a great example first: As with all good teaching, show
students excellent writing featuring the writing focus for the
task – modelled, guided, independent
 Writing focus options: Show not tell, actions & expressive verbs,
dialogue to show dynamics, show a person‟s essence through
their behaviour, clothing, reactions, physical appearance – so
readers can read between the lines, by following writers‟ clues
 Share writing aloud: Teach students how to work in partners &
give feedback that is positive and encouraging
Resource 1: Fiction with a twist
 Teaching resources downloadable from:
www.schools.nsw.edu.au/raps/twist12/teachingid
eas.htm
 See 2012 student blog at
http://rapblog13.edublogs.org/
 Great examples of feedback, by Deb Abela
 Over 1000 comments by students all over NSW
 On again in Term 4, 2013, at
http://rapblog16.edublogs.org/
Writing focus areas & resources
 Promotes inferential reading & evocative writing
 Promotes students developing a strong writer‟s voice
 Character sketch: essence through description
 Character in action – expressive verbs
 Symbolic objects to represent memories
 Dialogue to show relationships and reactions
 Responding to a picture in a story – visual literacy
 Focus on high quality: 1-3 paragraphs
 Resources include high quality Australian fiction extracts, a
10 week teaching unit, tasks, Web 2 options, worksheets &
student writing samples written by talented writers
Fiction with a twist: Task 1
 Introduce yourself - let us know about your
interests
 Create an online poster to express who you
are [optional homework at
http://edu.glogster.com/ Click on Try to
create yours] Describe why this poster reflects
who you are...
 Paragraph writing task: Introduce a character
in a brief character sketch
Fiction with a twist: Task 2
 Write about what you believe are the big issues -
at home, at school, in Australia, in the world. NB
These issues will appear in novels as themes...
 Create an online Wordle at
http://www.wordle.net/ featuring your big issues.
Paste your “big issues” writing into Wordle to
create a themed word cloud.
 Paragraph writing task: Write a paragraph or two
showing a character through their actions.
Ten things I know are true
o I believe
o I know that
o I value
o I care about
o I treasure
o I feel strongly about
o I declare that
o I hope that
o I work hard in my own life to
o The world would be a better place if we all
Fiction with a twist: Task 3
 Name your 3 favourite novels and explain WHY
you like them.
 Paragraph writing task: Write a paragraph which
includes a description of a place, object or
situation that is functioning metaphorically to
express a THEME or MOOD. Memories…
 Create an online story at http://storybird.com/
and explain why it acts symbolically to represent
themes you wish to communicate.
Fiction with a twist: Task 4
 Create a blurb for a book you would love to see in
print.
 Show us the plot outline - chapter by chapter -
online at www.timetoast.com
 Paragraph writing task: Write a paragraph,
featuring dialogue, expressing a power dynamic
between characters.
HOW to blog: Hats, boxes, magic, moon
 Image-based resources, story starters are at
http://imagesandwritingideas.webnode.com
Term 3: Blog at http://hatsboxesmagicmoon.edublogs.org/
In Week 1 of the blog, Click on 1.Hats and SCROLL right
down the page
In Week 2 of the blog, Click on 2.Boxes and SCROLL
DOWN etc
How to post on the blog
http://hatsboxesmagicmoon.edublogs.org/
Contact elizabeth.chase@det.nsw.edu.au for further
information
You DO NOT need to sign up for Edublogs…
How to copy writing into blog
First name only
Email address
Leave this blank
Paste writing in
here
Copy anti-spam words
Click SUBMIT
Save Lizzie‟s online resources
 Join Hotmail for free, so you can use your
user name and password if Skydrive.com
requests it.
 For example: Click on the folder on the
DOWNLOAD page at
http://imagesandwritingideas.webnode.c
om
Downloading from Skydrive
When you are into Skydrive, you look up to the top menu and
CLICK on the down arrow next to FOLDER ACTIONs to
DOWNLOAD all the files as one zipped file.
Image-based tasks: Sets
Flickr Creative Commons Images
 It shuffled towards me…
The portal pulsed with a red light and he stepped through…
Google: Advanced images search – top box – put TOPIC eg
HAT
SCROLL DOWN – USAGE RIGHTS
Change to FREE TO USE OR SHARE
Task 1: Hats options
Task 2: Boxes options
Task 3: Magic options
Task 4: Moon options
Task 5: CBCA people‟s choice
CBCA Super 6 Fun
http://lizziechase.wix.com/cbcasuper6fun
Birrong Girls‟ HS & Victor Davidson
 http://peppercornsandnuggets.weebly.com/
 http://peppercornsandnuggets.weebly.com/julie.
html
Raft, river, rainbow image cards
 www.raftriverandrainbow.com – ALL RESOURCES
 Image cards to support writing
 Raft, river, rainbow modes of responding – do,
flow, plug in…
 A fiction blog for students at
http://raftriver.edublogs.org/
 An autobiographical blog for students at
http://rapblog14.edublogs.org/
 A community life writing blog at
http://raftriverandrainbow.edublogs.org/life-
writing/
Fiction blog tasks
Autobiographical tasks
Writing tips – cards
Band of heroes writing quest
 http://bandofheroes.weebly.com – IMAGES &
RESOURCES
 http://rapblog15.edublogs.org – Student blog
Fantasy quest - tasks overview
Amy‟s perspectives & resources
1. Structure
2. Writing Partners
3. Mapping Success
Units of work
Learning Spaces
Writing Partners
Mapping Progress
Enrichment Web 2.0 tasks
http://bandofheroes.weebly.com/web-2.html
Damien‟s story cube
http://bandofheroes.weebly.com/blog.html
Rhianan‟s Photopeach slideshow
http://photopeach.com/album/yc2mtx
Chantelle‟s glog
Journal entry about the final battle
Codey‟s Animoto book trailer
http://animoto.com/play/cK6ihAON5eYaVsGK1rEMfg
Rhianan‟s ebook taster
www.mixbook.com/photo-books/interests/campground-adventures-8963841?vk=mK4wXkUjgU
The best feedback
 “Oh Miss, I don‟t want to make a poster
for my assessment task! Can‟t we just write
another story instead?”
– Year 10 boy
Blacktown Boys‟ HS – Trio
 http://laurenceandkaramandhuzaifa.weebly.com
/
Which is your favourite piece & why?
https://www.box.com/s/c5tjmzkkozk209f8mol0
Participants write a blog post
Choose a task & write a short piece:
 Hats, boxes, magic, moon
 Raft, river, rainbow
 Demonstration of partner conferencing
by Lizzie and Amy
 Share your draft now with a writing
partner
Writing session leader - cards
Partner conferencing skills
https://www.box.com/s/2le4fewrju6xg13cptjd
Personal challenge checklist for talented writers
http://sdrv.ms/Z7sJ8a
Super 6 plus blog
 Resources: http://celebratingus.webnode.com
Super 6 Plus Blog – Starts August
Students will blog at http://super6plus.edublogs.org/

Image basedwritingsessions

  • 1.
    The raft, theriver and the rainbow: Image Inspired Storytelling for the 21st century in Middle Years English Classrooms Lizzie Chase  Elizabeth.chase@det.nsw.edu.au  http://pinterest.com/lizziemchase Amy Krisenthal – Chifley College, Shalvey Campus  Amy.krisenthal@det.nsw.edu.au Join Hotmail first to get an account to access Skydrive.com and get all our teaching resources: https://skydrive.live.com/#cid=985D506652839C93
  • 2.
    Outline of thissession Image-based writing resources + process writing approach workshop  1. Fiction with a twist – Foundation lessons  2. How to blog: Hats, boxes example  3. Raft, river, rainbow  4. Band of heroes  5. Super 6 plus + Hats, Boxes, magic, moon Term 3 elizabeth.chase@det.nsw.edu.au  6. Participants will work as writing partners
  • 3.
    Image-based + blogging:Why?  Image-based blogging inspires great ideas  Blogging is a sure-fire way of engaging students because they are publishing for an audience beyond their own classroom  Even reluctant writers enjoy writing in pairs  Approach uses „writing partners‟ sharing  Blogs feature comments by author Deb Abela  Bloggers also appreciate each other‟s ideas  5 writing tasks: one every week for 5 weeks  Feel free to use the tasks at your school, in a blog of your own, such as an Edmodo.com blog
  • 4.
    Cyber safety &blogging preparations  Find out which students are blocked from appearing in the school newsletter because of a media ban / custodial dispute  Train all students never to use their real surnames online – they may use fake first names, tell you these  Train all students not to give their address and other identifying details  Explain about „flagging‟ problems – tell teacher if any problems occur – explain „moderated‟ blogs  Prepare writing in Word documents beforehand – copy & paste these into blog
  • 5.
    Teaching occurs first- away from screens  Read a great example first: As with all good teaching, show students excellent writing featuring the writing focus for the task – modelled, guided, independent  Writing focus options: Show not tell, actions & expressive verbs, dialogue to show dynamics, show a person‟s essence through their behaviour, clothing, reactions, physical appearance – so readers can read between the lines, by following writers‟ clues  Share writing aloud: Teach students how to work in partners & give feedback that is positive and encouraging
  • 6.
    Resource 1: Fictionwith a twist  Teaching resources downloadable from: www.schools.nsw.edu.au/raps/twist12/teachingid eas.htm  See 2012 student blog at http://rapblog13.edublogs.org/  Great examples of feedback, by Deb Abela  Over 1000 comments by students all over NSW  On again in Term 4, 2013, at http://rapblog16.edublogs.org/
  • 7.
    Writing focus areas& resources  Promotes inferential reading & evocative writing  Promotes students developing a strong writer‟s voice  Character sketch: essence through description  Character in action – expressive verbs  Symbolic objects to represent memories  Dialogue to show relationships and reactions  Responding to a picture in a story – visual literacy  Focus on high quality: 1-3 paragraphs  Resources include high quality Australian fiction extracts, a 10 week teaching unit, tasks, Web 2 options, worksheets & student writing samples written by talented writers
  • 8.
    Fiction with atwist: Task 1  Introduce yourself - let us know about your interests  Create an online poster to express who you are [optional homework at http://edu.glogster.com/ Click on Try to create yours] Describe why this poster reflects who you are...  Paragraph writing task: Introduce a character in a brief character sketch
  • 9.
    Fiction with atwist: Task 2  Write about what you believe are the big issues - at home, at school, in Australia, in the world. NB These issues will appear in novels as themes...  Create an online Wordle at http://www.wordle.net/ featuring your big issues. Paste your “big issues” writing into Wordle to create a themed word cloud.  Paragraph writing task: Write a paragraph or two showing a character through their actions.
  • 10.
    Ten things Iknow are true o I believe o I know that o I value o I care about o I treasure o I feel strongly about o I declare that o I hope that o I work hard in my own life to o The world would be a better place if we all
  • 11.
    Fiction with atwist: Task 3  Name your 3 favourite novels and explain WHY you like them.  Paragraph writing task: Write a paragraph which includes a description of a place, object or situation that is functioning metaphorically to express a THEME or MOOD. Memories…  Create an online story at http://storybird.com/ and explain why it acts symbolically to represent themes you wish to communicate.
  • 12.
    Fiction with atwist: Task 4  Create a blurb for a book you would love to see in print.  Show us the plot outline - chapter by chapter - online at www.timetoast.com  Paragraph writing task: Write a paragraph, featuring dialogue, expressing a power dynamic between characters.
  • 13.
    HOW to blog:Hats, boxes, magic, moon  Image-based resources, story starters are at http://imagesandwritingideas.webnode.com Term 3: Blog at http://hatsboxesmagicmoon.edublogs.org/
  • 14.
    In Week 1of the blog, Click on 1.Hats and SCROLL right down the page In Week 2 of the blog, Click on 2.Boxes and SCROLL DOWN etc How to post on the blog http://hatsboxesmagicmoon.edublogs.org/ Contact elizabeth.chase@det.nsw.edu.au for further information You DO NOT need to sign up for Edublogs…
  • 15.
    How to copywriting into blog First name only Email address Leave this blank Paste writing in here Copy anti-spam words Click SUBMIT
  • 16.
    Save Lizzie‟s onlineresources  Join Hotmail for free, so you can use your user name and password if Skydrive.com requests it.  For example: Click on the folder on the DOWNLOAD page at http://imagesandwritingideas.webnode.c om
  • 17.
    Downloading from Skydrive Whenyou are into Skydrive, you look up to the top menu and CLICK on the down arrow next to FOLDER ACTIONs to DOWNLOAD all the files as one zipped file.
  • 18.
    Image-based tasks: Sets FlickrCreative Commons Images  It shuffled towards me… The portal pulsed with a red light and he stepped through… Google: Advanced images search – top box – put TOPIC eg HAT SCROLL DOWN – USAGE RIGHTS Change to FREE TO USE OR SHARE
  • 19.
    Task 1: Hatsoptions
  • 20.
  • 21.
  • 22.
    Task 4: Moonoptions
  • 23.
    Task 5: CBCApeople‟s choice
  • 24.
    CBCA Super 6Fun http://lizziechase.wix.com/cbcasuper6fun
  • 25.
    Birrong Girls‟ HS& Victor Davidson  http://peppercornsandnuggets.weebly.com/  http://peppercornsandnuggets.weebly.com/julie. html
  • 26.
    Raft, river, rainbowimage cards  www.raftriverandrainbow.com – ALL RESOURCES  Image cards to support writing  Raft, river, rainbow modes of responding – do, flow, plug in…  A fiction blog for students at http://raftriver.edublogs.org/  An autobiographical blog for students at http://rapblog14.edublogs.org/  A community life writing blog at http://raftriverandrainbow.edublogs.org/life- writing/
  • 27.
  • 28.
  • 29.
  • 30.
    Band of heroeswriting quest  http://bandofheroes.weebly.com – IMAGES & RESOURCES  http://rapblog15.edublogs.org – Student blog
  • 31.
    Fantasy quest -tasks overview
  • 32.
    Amy‟s perspectives &resources 1. Structure 2. Writing Partners 3. Mapping Success
  • 33.
  • 34.
  • 35.
  • 36.
  • 37.
    Enrichment Web 2.0tasks http://bandofheroes.weebly.com/web-2.html
  • 38.
  • 39.
  • 40.
    Chantelle‟s glog Journal entryabout the final battle
  • 41.
    Codey‟s Animoto booktrailer http://animoto.com/play/cK6ihAON5eYaVsGK1rEMfg
  • 42.
  • 43.
    The best feedback “Oh Miss, I don‟t want to make a poster for my assessment task! Can‟t we just write another story instead?” – Year 10 boy
  • 44.
    Blacktown Boys‟ HS– Trio  http://laurenceandkaramandhuzaifa.weebly.com /
  • 45.
    Which is yourfavourite piece & why? https://www.box.com/s/c5tjmzkkozk209f8mol0
  • 46.
    Participants write ablog post Choose a task & write a short piece:  Hats, boxes, magic, moon  Raft, river, rainbow  Demonstration of partner conferencing by Lizzie and Amy  Share your draft now with a writing partner
  • 47.
  • 48.
  • 49.
    Personal challenge checklistfor talented writers http://sdrv.ms/Z7sJ8a
  • 50.
    Super 6 plusblog  Resources: http://celebratingus.webnode.com
  • 51.
    Super 6 PlusBlog – Starts August Students will blog at http://super6plus.edublogs.org/