1. One reliable survey claims Jakarta as the most corrupt place in Indonesia. 2. Tanjung Priok port smuggling is common and entrepreneurs often bribe officials to minimize tax payments. 3. Everyone should be involved in eradicating corruption starting from schools, without distinction.

1. 1. Ade Natasya Melani H
2. Ayu Dinda Hadriyani P
3. M. Hanif Fadilah
4. Tri Fuad Azis

2. To persuade the readers or listeners that something
should or should not be the case.

3. Thesis
Arguments
Recommendation

4. Statement or announcement of issue concern

5. Reasons for concern that will lead to recommendation

6. Statement of what should or should not happen or be
done based on the given arguments

7. Do you know what the meaning of corruption is? What
is the relation between money and corruption? Well,
corruption is common everywhere in the world, even in the
United States. It’s just a matter of intensity. However, it is quite
shocking when one reliable survey claims Jakarta as the most
corrupt place in Indonesia.
As most people know, Tanjung Priok port smuggling is
not a new thing at all. Entrepreneurs who want to minimize
their tax payments tend to do such a thing more often. They
even bribe the officials.
We have to prevent the younger generations from getting
a bad mentality caused by corruption. I believe we should start
at the earliest stages in school and I think everyone should be
involved in the effort to eradicate corruption. We must not
make any distinction.

8.  Thesis
(Announcement of issue concern)
One reliable survey claims Jakarta as the most corrupt
place in Indonesia.

9.  Argument Elaboration
(Fact)
As most people know, Tanjung Priok port
smuggling is not a new thing at all. Entrepreneurs
who want to minimize their tax payments tend to do
such a thing more often. They even bribe the officials.
Elaboration
Point

10.  Recommendation
1. We have to prevent the younger generations from
getting a bad mentality caused by corruption.
 2. I believe we should start at the earliest stages in
school
 3. I think everyone should be involved in the effort to
eradicate corruption. We must not make any
distinction.

11. The last paragraph is reiteration, contains the
conclusion
• Analytical
The last paragraph is recommendation, contains
the suggetion
• Hortatory