This document provides feedback on essays and expands on an American identities essay. The feedback addresses the need to expand certain essays by a page and add more transitions and conclusions. It also provides a summary of an essay on economic inequality exploring how wealth is concentrated among the top 1% and how this impacts society. The identities essay discusses the author's experience in America and perspective on concepts of race, gender, sexuality, religion and class in American society. It reflects on core American values of liberty, self-governance, equality, individualism and diversity.