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1. Feedback from
Detailed...

2. Chris's Response
Like­ Fits in well with the genre
and is exciting.
Like ­ Regeneration of plot
from Janet's story to Jake's.
Sally's Response
Francesca's Response
Like­ Has a significant arch
behind how Jake got the
doll.
Chloe's Response
Like­ Builds up a sense of
realism.
I asked the following four people what
they like about my detailed plot. They
responded with;

3. Chris's Response
Dislike­ Nothing. Dislike ­ Don't know much
about the other characters.
Sally's Response
Francesca's Response
Dislike­ Nothing.
Chloe's Response
Dislike ­ The females seem
stereotyped.
I then asked what they dislike about
my detailed plot and they said;

4. Summary of Feedback
Overall, the feedback was
helpful and I will try to
improve my character
construction. However, the
stereotypical representation of
female's is key in the horror
genre and I will not change
this.