The documentary evaluation provides feedback from the audience to improve the film. It recommends that the filmmaker get archive images that are more focused, as some images were difficult to understand. It also suggests adjusting sound levels so interviews are clearly heard over the soundtrack. Adding the names of professionals interviewed and improving the mise-en-scene to make it more relevant to the production are other recommendations.

1. Evaluation- Preliminary
Documentary.

2. Even Better If. (Numbers Link with
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 Due to audience feedback I understand that my documentary would be
better if I did the following:
1. Got archive images that were more focused due to some images being
hard to put together and the audience struggled figuring out what it
was.
2. Adjusted the sound levels in order for the audience to hear all interviews
clearly over the soundtrack.
3. Add the name of the professional being interviewed.
4. Improve the mise-en-scene to make it more relevant to the production.
5. Changed the editing as the cuts are quite jumpy.

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