This document evaluates how the media product uses, develops, or challenges conventions of real music magazines. The author created a music magazine focused on classic rock with influences from magazines like Uncut, Mojo, Q, and NME. Elements were borrowed from these magazines, such as fonts, layouts, and styles, but adapted to suit the intended younger audience and genre. Conventions like track listings, reviews, and interviews were included, while unconventional elements like whimsical subtitles and band names were used to attract younger readers. The design drew from real magazines but made deliberate changes to appeal to its target demographic.

1. Evaluation
By Eleanore Ramsey

2. In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and
conventions of real media products?
The genre of music for my music magazine is classic rock with
a touch of other sub genres such as rock n roll and alternative
rock. In order to create my music magazine I looked at four
other magazines which were similar to the style of genre of
music that I wanted to represent. These magazines being
Uncut, Mojo, Q and NME. I picked various parts of each
magazine and used it in my own magazine. The reason why I
picked out individual pieces from each magazine and styled
them in my own was because I felt that certain parts
represented my intended audience in a better way, also as I
was trying to aim my magazine to a lower age range that
usual classic rock magazines were aimed at, enticing a
younger audience and inviting them to appreciate an older
generation of music created with intense passion and care.
For my masthead, I used the font style “Capitals”. It replicated
the Uncut magazine masthead and stood out. I used the same kind of colour, however my shade is dimmed down
slightly. The reason that I used the same style of font to Uncut magazine was because I was going for a classic rock
kind of look. However, I used outer glow around the title in order for it to stand out against the grey brick background
a lot more effectively. This makes it a lot more eye catching like other music magazines mastheads are.
And I also thought that the other varieties of magazine shared a similar and bold masthead, using the colour red to
stand out and appeal to it’s intended audience.

3. I decided to use the sell line “your original supply” to represent that the magazine has a variety of different sub
genres as well as classic rock, however they share a similar style to classic rock. By using the word “original”, it’s like
using a hook to pull readers in, indicating that the magazine is original, and that it isn’t obtainable elsewhere. It could
also be used in the way of drug use, insinuating that the magazine is so good and addictive to read, that it’s like a
drug, and people will keep coming back for more. I chose to use a font similar to Mojo magazine’s sell line, and place
it under the masthead instead of over the masthead. The reason I did this was because for the way I have placed my
masthead, the sell line was more eye catching to put it below rather than on top. I have also used opposite colours
e.g. a red masthead with a white sell line, this is so that it sticks out more.
As classic rock magazines tend to offer free CDs with their magazines, I also offered one with mine. This may be seen
as appealing to an older generation as they went from vinyl’s and cassettes to CDs. And there are a large amount of
young adults who download and listen to their music via MP3s, however most young adults own computers/laptops
or DVD players, where they can play the CD, or even rip the songs on the CD to their Windows Media Player, or even
iTunes. Like Uncut magazine, I have put a circle in the corner of the magazine saying “FREE classic rock CD!” The
boldness of the white colour against the teal background contrasts and makes it stand out. Uncut magazine have
overlapped their masthead over their “free CD” logo, so I have also done this in order for it to look like a more
realistic magazine.
Similar to Uncut magazine, I have placed a few bands/artists next to each other. To break them apart I have used
spaces instead of arrows because I thought that this would make them stand out better, and they wouldn’t all be so
squished together and cramped. I have followed the codes and conventions for the colour that the band/artist is in,
however I have written a sub-heading below, a bit whacky to attract the audience, e.g. “Yorke &his weird
obsessions”. I have chosen to use yellowish as the sub-heading so that it stands out against the name and it’s easy to
tell what’s the band name and what’s the sub-heading.

4. Similar to how Uncut have, I have used a banner to hook people in saying “fresh interviews” instead of just exclusive. I
felt that the word “fresh” was a more welcoming word to invite people to read about certain bands and artists and how
they’ve made their music or other things that they have done. I have used a yellow colour similar to Uncut, but dimmed
it down a little, I did this because it fitted well with my colour scheme and made everything come together a lot better.
Although I haven't put the banner directly under the masthead, I have put it slightly lower. The reason behind this was
that I didn’t want the magazine front cover to look over crowded, as generally majority or classic rock magazines have a
more simplistic and clean cut lay out, I didn’t want to go against this as it suited the genre of music very well.
I have used the left-side vertical third because the important information is usually displayed here on a magazine and it
attracts potential readers. Also, it is displayed this way just in case the magazine is displayed in a horizontal shelving
system. Uncut magazine have displayed the band names and artists featured in their magazine on the right. However I
thought for my magazine it would be more efficient to place it on the left-side third in order to attract more potential
readers. I have ensured that the artist/band name stick out in a white colour, contrasting with the background, making
it stand out, I have used the font “Impact” as it is a very bold font. I have used a sub heading below each band/artist. I
did this so that the reader had a better idea of what was featured in this article about the certain artist/band. Uncut
have only used a sub-heading for one band. However I thought by using a sub-heading for each heading that it would
interest more readers because they would know more about what was going to be featured, especially for young adults
that might be unsure of bands/artists they may not have heard before. A whacky phrase such as “jellyfishing cove” may
appeal, and it also fits in with a song written by the band “Gorillaz”

5. I laid my headline out similar to that of Mojo and Uncut. However I have used a more bold font, the reason that I did
this was because I wanted the name to stick out more to the intended audience and catch their attention more, as it
is aimed at young adults rather than people ranging between 30-40. Also the teal like colour that I have used fits in
with my colour scheme that is red, yellow, white and teal. The colours stand out against the background more, making
them contrasting colours and more appealing to younger people who have quite an eye for colour things e.g. sweets.
Although I made my headline bold, I shared a similar sub-heading which is placed below the headline. I have used a
quote from the article on the double page spread, which is what Mojo have done. I did this because it shows the
intended audience what the article is about, and also an insight into what type of artist that “William Stone” is. I
placed the sub-heading below the headline, this is because it fitted better with the title and settled in place there.
Which also added to the house style of typical classic rock magazines. I have also placed the headline more towards
the bottom of the page . I have done this because I have seen this feature in classic rock magazines, and it also sat
with the image that I used on my front cover well, and fitted in with all the other little details dotted around the page
such as bands/artist of the left-side third and the mast head.
Like Uncut magazine, I have used a small image of someone and then included “EXCLUSIVE INTERVIEW:CITRUS
CREAM” I have also included a border around the image, the teal colour, fitting in with the rest of my colour scheme. I
have used the puff “ALSO!” to catch the attention of readers. The image I used is a playful one, which represents the
band “Citrus Cream” as a bit whacky and exciting. This stands out against the background as the image and text are
contrasting. By using the band name “Citrus Cream” on the front, it may catch people’s attention more as it’s quite an
abnormal band name.

6. I have followed the codes and conventions for NME magazine with the barcode here. I felt that there design was good as
it contained not only the bar code, but the date and price, and price in a different currency too! (US dollars) I have
followed this because I felt that it would fit in with my clean cut design, and have less pieces of text flouncing around the
page, it would just be better to have it all in one place, neatly. NME have rotated their barcode to a 90 degree angle. I
have not done this. This is because I thought it would be easier to see the price and date, maybe enticing people to buy it
more if they can easily see how much it is. They have also included a website on their barcode. I have not done this, I
have instead included a Facebook page instead on the bottom right hand side of the magazine. The reason for doing this
is so that the Facebook logo catches more attention of the younger audience as opposed to an older audience. They
would also be able to follow the magazine and the current events of it if they “liked” the Unchained page. This is a more
recent idea of marketing and is a clever way in order to open up the audience and keep them informed and entertained
as to what is going on with the magazine e.g. updates, what will be featured in the next magazine and what certain
bands/artists may have to say about the magazine, maybe fresh interviews.

7. The image that I have used has followed the codes and
conventions of similar magazines such as Mojo and Uncut. I
have used a mid-shot photo as have many other classic rock
magazines. I have chosen a male model with mid length hair
and he is wearing a military style coat which is in black. He is
also wearing a beanie type hat, which is typical among classic
rock lovers. The image has been shot against a church wall as
many classic rock magazines have a more plain look to them
rather than having a busy background. Also, by having the
image taken against the church wall, it was a good look for the
image, especially when I changed it into a black and white
photograph. I have then edited the photograph in Photoshop in
order to make it black and white, which is the house style of
classic rock magazines. I have made sure when placing the
features of the magazine on the front cover not to cover the face of the model and
surround the model with the text more than cover the model in text.
However, I have displayed the masthead over the top of the models head, so that it isn’t
hidden, making sure that people understand what the music magazine is as it is a new
magazine coming out, rather than Mojo which has been out for a while and most people
who enjoy the genre of classic rock are familiar with it.
The language that I have used is typical of classic rock magazines, using puffs such as “fresh interviews”, “”free CDs” and
“Also!” to catch the attention of the intended audience and entice them to read the magazine.

8. I have followed the codes and conventions of Uncut magazine
with their contents page. I decided to follow this type of
contents page as it appealed to me the most and is the same
genre of music that my magazine is representing. It also follows
the themes of black and white images, and using bold colours in
order to attract the reader using composition correctly to guide
the eye in to certain areas from first to last. I have also used a
plain white background in order to achieve the same clean cut
look.
I used a black and white image to fill out about half the page
and then added articles and numbers, reviews and interviews
in. I also added an article and number to the bottom right
corner of the image just like what has been done in Uncut
magazine. I have used a similar image, my model has his guitar
in the same position but is turned in a different direction. The
reason that I have used this image is to show that he is a one
man band playing guitar on his own.
As his article is about being in a one man band. I have used
similar colours. I have used a teal and white to stick with my
colour scheme rather than red and white. I have used a larger
number to make the page number stick out, and the teal colour
to highlight the name and it sticks with the colour scheme on
the front of the magazine. I have also placed a sentence below
to describe what William Stone has done in order to be in the
magazine, following what Uncut magazine has done as it is of a
similar genre.

9. Following the codes and conventions of Uncut magazine for their style of contents page, I have used a similar title, the
tile for my contents page is the same font I have used for the masthead on my front cover, keeping a consistency with
house style and scheme. I have placed it right at the top of the page so it fits in with the composition and how the eyes
follow particular parts of the contents page in a certain order.
I have also followed their date and issue arrangement. Except I have used the word “issue” instead of “take”. I did this
because it is then easier to distinguish what issue it is at first glance, rather than thinking about it. This is a good idea for
younger people as they tend to want to get things done in a rush, rather than take their time to do things. I have also
written the date next to it. The issue and date have been segregated on the contents page by lines. I have chosen to use
darker lines because it’s more bold and stands out more. I have also separated the issue and date by a bold red line, like
Uncut magazine, however the red I have used is more bold, in order to stand out more and separate the two more
successfully.
I have followed the codes and conventions for the list of articles using the same sort of
colours and similar fonts. However I have changed the numbers to a bold black colour,
instead of using the same colour that they have used. This is because it stands out more
and is more appealing. I have used a smaller amount of articles in comparison to Uncut.
This is because I am aiming my magazine at a young adult audience, rather than an
audience that is between 30-40. A smaller amount of articles is more appealing and
doesn’t seem like such a chore to read through. Whereas too many articles may
overwhelm the reader and make them not want to buy it nor read it.

10. I have used a similar style box underneath the list of articles
and numbers. However I have changed their “regulars” to
“interviews”. I thought that this would be more appealing as a
starting off magazine, and then maybe after the magazine is
more known, starting to change it slightly and including more
things e.g. crosswords like uncut and puzzles. I have used the
same colours in order for the page numbers to stand out and
the band names.
I have used Uncut’s idea of the “Reviews” box . I have used it
for albums just like them, however I have changed “film” to
“venues a-z” The reason I changed it is because the magazine
is aimed at young adults and young adults tend to go out to
gigs more often as they have more free time and the
weekends and don’t have kids etc. And it’s good for people to
know where is good to go, and what bands are playing. It also
lets people explore new bands that they’ve never heard of
before and let them pick up new ones.
Like Uncut magazine have done, I have used a line to split the
image and article listings, reviews box and interview box up.
By segregating everything so clearly, it’s easy to establish
what’s what and it’s easier to read. It also follows the house
style of Uncut, with its clear cut layout.

11. I looked at a variety of different
magazines and their double page
spread e.g. Mojo, Q and NME
magazine. I took majority of my
ideas from the NME double page
spread because I thought that the
layout was straight forward, a
simple yet interesting layout and
good use of imagery. As my
magazine is aimed at young
adults rather than 30-40 yr olds
I have used the same colours on my double page spread that I have used throughout
the magazine to keep it consistent.
I have used a badge in red and yellow which is common amongst
classic rock articles, I have used the red and yellow colours to draw
the eyes to it, showing that William Stone has won 5 Grammy awards
for his talents.
I have used an introduction line below the headline in order to introduce the article to the reader. This has been used
in a variety of magazines e.g. NME. I thought that it was a good technique so that the readers are pulled in. I have used
an outer glow for the introduction as I had spotted a similar technique used in other magazines, it also makes the text
stands out to my intended audience and encourages the reader to read it.
I have used a text box at the top left side of the page, similar to what NME magazine have done.
I did this in order to catch the attention of the intended audience and point out that this artist
is upcoming. I used a silly image of the artist rotated to represent a silly and funny side to him.
Although he’s serious and dedicated to music, he can still be fun to be with and has a great
personality.

12. I have used a film strip and put pictures from the photo shoot of “William Stone” drumming. It’s like a cut out from a
film, the negative pictures that still need to be processed. The reason behind doing this was to show that William Stone
was playing all of the instruments himself and was enjoying doing it at the same time.
I have used drop capitals throughout my article. This is a common feature in articles and it helps the reader to
remember where they were reading, and also helps them to navigate around the article better. I have used the
colour red as it is bold and it stands out, it is easy to spot amongst a mass of words.
I have used a caption on top of my image as this is quite popular amongst articles. I have just written what William
Stone is doing. I have used a teal background in order for it to stand out against the black and white image, I have
used white text in order for it to stand out against the box.
I have used an enlarged quote from the text. This catches the readers eyes as they see a glimpse of
what is being said in the article, it makes them want to read more. I have used the colour red again in
order for it to stand out against the white background again.

13. How does your media product represent particular social
groups?
The particular social group I have used are people aged between 17-24. I have represented people that stand mainly
in the bracket of ABC1 majoring at 72% of overall readers. I have represented my intended audience through the
house style of my magazine. This is clean cut, more complex language, but not so much that it isn’t understandable
for young adults. I have used colours that are appealing, but they aren’t too bright, so they aren’t in your face,
they’re more settled. These colours are white, red, yellow and teal. Which would be colours worn by my intended
audience. The layout has a good composition, able to lead the eye around easily and efficiently the best parts first. I
used a bold masthead which stood out, using the font “Capitals”, which is similar to Uncut magazine. However my
magazine is different as it is aimed at young adults as opposed to between 30-40 year olds. My represented audience
wear mostly checked shirts, band t-shirts, big jackets and jeans., this may not sound too appealing, but they sure are
handsome. There is also an image of Gorillaz playing
Guitar, which represents the intended audience I have represented the social group with this
as they’re extremely interested in classic rock . picture, I feel it is a good representative as he
has mid-length hair, is wearing a long military
style jacket, a band t-shirt (underneath the coat)
and a beanie. These are the typical type of
clothes for males to wear who are into the genre
of classic rock. The image has been taken against
a brick wall of a church, so when I edited into
Black and white, it didn’t take anything away from the
model or distract, and draw attention more to the
background instead, which wouldn’t have been my aim.

14. What kind of media institution might distribute your media
product and why?
www.bauermedia.co.uk/
Bauer Media is Europe’s largest privately owned publishing group. The group offers over 300
magazines in 15 different countries; they are a worldwide media empire. They also provide for
television and radio stations. Bauer Media is a multi-platform UK-based media Group. Their two main
offices are based in London and Peterborough in the UK. Bauer distribute three music magazines:
Kerrang, Mojo and Q.

15. www.ipcmedia.com/
IPC Media produces over 60 iconic media brands. Their print alone reaches two thirds of women based in
the UK and 42% men in the UK. Overall reaching almost 26 million UK adults. They distribute two music
magazines: Uncut and NME. They compete with Bauer with music magazines as well as other magazines
such as Look and other chat magazines. Majority of magazines are aimed at women.
I will use IPC media to distribute my magazine. This is because they have similar music magazines to what
mine is e.g. Uncut and NME, which means the genre of music is familiar and would be more likely to be
bought. I also feel that there’s a gap in the market for my magazine. My magazine is aimed at a younger
generation of people who enjoy classic rock and other sub genres and have an overall deep appreciation for
music. It would be a good opportunity to unleash my magazine and enlighten young adults and give them
more information about the artists they listen to.

16. Who would be the audience for your media product?
My target audience are female and male aged between 17-24. I have created a reader profile based on the things
that my intended audience like. They are interested in the genre classic rock and other sub genres e.g. alternative
rock and rock n roll. They like to go to festivals such as “Download” and gigs with their friends to enjoy music. They
enjoy social networking website such as Tumblr, Facebook and Twitter, where they keep in touch with their friends.
They enjoy whacky cartoons like Adventure Time and the Regular Show. They’re quite interested in computing,
games and browsing the internet. They’re in to creative things such as painting/drawing and taking photographs of
things. They welcome peace amongst their friends, but they do enjoy gore movies such as Kill Bill. They love coke,
and they sure do love their food, especially Burgerking and other various restaurants such as beef eaters. They love to
watch BBC programmes. They’re equipped with an iPhone, as they can afford this and like to keep on top of things
and have fun. They love their clothes and wear footwear such as Converse and shop at places like H&M and Urban
Outiftters.
My intended audience have an intense passion for music. Even if they’re not
attending a gig, they’re listening to music in some shape or form. It helps to
express themselves, or even just to chill out to.
I have attracted my audience by representing them in the model that I have used
on the front, by using specially selected colours which are commonly used
amongst the chosen social group, the specific bands such as Foo Fighters, Culture
Club, Presley (Elvis) and Bob Marley. Because majority of the intended audience
are creative, they are pulled in by the magazine because of the creativity used
and the imagery. Also as I am addressing a younger audience for classic rock than
usual, I have decided to use the intended audiences openness and creativity,
which is willing to try new things as they already listen to rock, they can further
their CD collection, or MP3 at that, and broaden what they already have.

17. How did you attract/address your audience?
In order to attract my audience, I used a questionnaires. I wrote the questions out on zoomerang.com and then
posted them on social networking sites such as Facebook, Twitter and Tumblr in order to target my intended
audience. I found this effective as I had a positive amount of replies from the intended audience. I was specific about
my questioning in order to get the right type of response and direct answers that I needed. I knew that I wanted to
construct a classic rock/alternative rock genre of magazine, and in order to get a good idea about what other types of
music my intended audience listened to I asked what genres they most listened to. In return they answered 65%
rock, 42% metal and other responses such as 80s/90s music. I then looked at other examples of classic rock
magazines and noticed that they were mostly aimed at an older age group. In order to attract a younger audience
that I wanted, I similarly followed the codes and conventions of magazines such as Mojo, NME, Q and Uncut for my
influence. My house style colour scheme is Red, yellow, blue and white in order to target the younger age group and
get their attention. I used these colours as they’re appealing to a young adults eye and also using an artist that is of a
young age in order to represent the audience creates more connection between audience and artist, creating a
stronger pull. I asked the question how much do you pay for your magazine and majority of the participants said
between £2.51 - £4.00. I have priced my magazine at £4.50 as it comes out monthly as opposed to weekly or
fortnightly. I felt that this was a good decision as young adults don’t want to be spending a lot of money on
magazines every week or so, and are maybe too busy with working or school work to read a magazine every week
and make more clutter in their rooms. Also the price is very reasonable as it’s only per month for a good quality
magazine which provides the intended audience with what they need to know about this genre of music and
involving the young adults in classic rock instead of excluding them from the classic rock scene. The price and per
monthly regime targets my audience well and ensures that it keeps them interested and at a lower cost rather than
buying a magazine like Kerrang every two weeks which is around £2.20 and only representing a certain type of music
which is usually heavy metal. My magazine provides more coverage on sub genres of rock and a more open minded
experience altogether. The features which are on the left side third on my magazine e.g. “Foo Fighters beard
obsessed” may be seen as funny by the younger audience because they would be familiar with the band and be
enticed to read the article in the magazine about it. I chose the name of my magazine to be “Unchained” as it was
similar to “uncut” magazine, however I feel that when the intended audience read it, they would feel like they had a
sense of freedom with their music and discovering new things, rather than the music magazines aimed at younger
people e.g. Kerrang which covers stuff that teenagers would listen to and the music just gets chucked at them rather
than given to them with passion and love.

18. My sell line “your original supply” was used to entice the audience and make them understand that their specific
age group (17-24) now had their own music magazine that wasn’t aimed at an older audience like Uncut magazine
that they could read and not feel excluded from even though they love the genre of music and love learning about
it. I felt by using a pronoun in the sell line it would make it seem more personal and exclusive, making the intended
audience drawn in to buy it and read about their favourite bands and discover new ones. I have used hooks such as
“fresh” and “exclusive” to attract my audiences attention and pull them in. I used these words so it looks like they
can’t get this type of magazine anywhere else and pull them in to buy this so that they feel part of a group and
create a hype around the magazine. I have placed a link in the bottom right corner to Facebook. I have done this
because majority of my intended audience use Facebook and it’s a good way for the audience and the magazine to
have a connection and can be kept up to date about the goings on with the magazine.

19. What have you learnt about technologies from the process of
constructing this product?
Before creating the magazine I have used the internet to research in to publishers and look at other magazine
types in order to shape my magazine. I researched Bauer media and IPC media and decided that I would go with
IPC as I felt that there would be a gap in the market for my magazine as they had previous experience marketing
classic rock/rock magazines before and would successfully distribute my magazine.
In order to research my intended audience, I had to get to them by social networking, what most young adults use
today in order to keep in touch with each other and also have a connection with other products and companies
such as Subway and Odeon. I hosted my questionnaire on Zoomerang as I could easily post it on social networking
sites such as Facebook, Twitter and Tumblr so I could receive feedback of what my intended audience thought and
to get structured answers which were direct so I could easily set out to design a successful magazine.

20. Another reason that I used social networking in order to get feedback from my intended audience was that it would
make my audience bigger because I could talk to everybody and get their opinions on certain things and to focus on
a particular social group.
I used blogger as a website to host my media work and get my intended audience to give me
feedback about my work and give me tips on how I could improve it, also what they liked and didn’t
like. I found this useful as I could see what my intended audience wanted more of and what they
wanted less of.
To take the images for my magazine I used a digital camera. I did this so that I could take a large
amount of image as opposed to a smaller amount on a film camera. It was more cost effective and
I could easily transport my images from one place to another. I could also edit my digital images
and use them more effectively.
To edit my photographs I used Photoshop. I used this as it is a largely used software by successful
publishing groups and it gives me good experience and a real insight in to editing images well for a
magazine. I found it very effective to edit my images and play around with them to get the desired
effect e.g. black and white, brightness/contrast and cropping tools. This programme was very good,
confusing to get the hang of at first, but once comfortable with it, it became easier to use and I could
work with it very well and produce quality images.
I used Publisher to analyse the front cover, contents and double page spread of other magazines
such as NME and Kerrang. I also used it to create my reader profile. I found it very easy to use
because it is a simple programme but you can create work neatly and colourfully. It helped me as it
was easy to construct things and align them correctly, as opposed to using Microsoft Office which
is difficult to use for designing low key things as you cannot manipulate text boxes or shapes very
easily.

21. These are the befores and afters of my photographs that
I have edited. I used the black and white tool to change
my original images to black and white. I did this to follow
codes and conventions of other magazines similar to
mine. As classic rock genre magazines aren’t extremely
busy and are more simplistic, the black and white adds
to the simplicity and the background of the image
doesn’t distract attention away from the main focus (the
artist). I have also used brightness and contrast in order
to create the right brightness and contrast of the image,
to make the colours more stable and determined.
Making the image darker/lighter in some areas and highlighting certain features such as the face and arrms rather
than the shirt. As the face and arms are the main focus of the image . I have also used the cropping tool so I can cut
out any unwanted features in the image, such as too much background so that the image focuses more on the artist
and not on the background. I felt that after editing the images they fit the codes and conventions of other magazines
and also looked more professional.
I used Photoshop as I could create high quality edited images as opposed to using a programme like Microsoft
Publisher as I wouldn’t have been able to get the best quality that I could with Photoshop.

22. Drafts
Before I came to my final design for my magazine, I played around with features to see what fitted best where and
tried following the codes and conventions such as the left side third and the mast head, and also including a free
CD. I did go for just the two font colours on the magazine at first, however they didn’t look right, so I changed the
colours and changed the alignment of the text around in order for it to fit around the picture more effectively to
follow codes and conventions of how other classic rock magazines had displayed their layout. I then added name
at the top of the article but decided the font colour was too bright and didn’t fit the house style of my magazine. I
then changed the colours to a more toned down colour so it wasn’t so rebel like as a magazine like Kerrang. I then
outlined the title in a yellow colour so that the masthead stuck out and caught the eye of the intended audience.

23. For my contents page I followed the house style of Uncut magazine, however I needed to tweak it a lot before I
came to my final outcome. I had to change the colour scheme around so they fit in more with my colour scheme
and carried out a specific consistency throughout the magazine to make it look more professional and authentic. I
added specific features such as the issue of the magazine. I changed the “copy” to “issue” in order for the reader
to understand easier what it meant without giving it a second thought. I added more colour to it at the end to fit
similar house styles and make it more eye catching and easier to read, and also more interesting to look at. I
added lines to section off areas in order for the contents page to have more structure to it and be more defined.
There have also been boxes added in for reviews of venues and bands interviews which would appeal to young
adults as they would want to know the best place to go for a gig. I have added “William Stone” in the corner of the
image similar to Uncut magazine, it makes sure the reader know that the image is of William Stone and his story is
on page 4.

24. I tweaked my double page spread
a lot in order to get my desired
look. I changed the fonts for it to
flow more and be more consistent
and the headline font was
changed in terms of font and
colour. I also had to had more
features to the magazine in order
for it to look more filled out
instead of spacious so there is a
lot of information on the pages
instead of blank space. I also
added page numbers for a more
official look. I coloured the drop
capitals so that they stuck out a
lot more.

25. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have
learnt in the progression from it to the full product?
I called my preliminary task “Negus
Express” as the 6th form that the
newsletter would've been distributed at is
called “Negus”. I followed a house style of
minty green, purple, white and black. The
mast head is white and doesn’t stand out
against the pale green background. There
are also too many colours going on on the
page. I have learned that the colours need
to make a statement in order for the
magazines to stand out. There needs to be
a consistent house style within the product
which I have made clear in my final
product.
I have also learnt that the images featured
need to be of mid-shot so that the facial
expressions are easily visible and can
Connect with the intended audience. In my preliminary task it wasn’t very clear about what I was trying to show to
my audience. The text on my preliminary task looks very disjointed and there are different types of font used
rather than one or two consistent fonts. The headlines are different sizes as well. I have learnt that consistency is
key for a more professional looking look for a magazine.

26. For the contents page of my preliminary
task I used the same house style that
was used on the front of the prelim
task. I have learnt that I need to make
the page stand out so that it isn’t boring
to read and entices the intended
audience. I have learnt that the stories
included need to stand out and catch
the eye rather than being simplistic and
not really seeming important to the
reader.
I have learnt that the language is a key
factor when creating a magazine as it
stands out the most to the audience
and is the reason they are pulled in.
Genre specific language is key. I have learnt you need to personalise the language to the specific intended audience
in order to catch their attention and make them interested in the magazine. E.g using an artists last name such as
“Presley” where the audience would know that I’m talking about Elvis Presley.
I have learnt that the layout is key because information needs to be laid out well in order to convey the information
correctly and simply without the magazine seeming like a busy mess.
Looking back on my preliminary task, I have realised how important it is for even the smallest detail to be done
with care and listen to the intended audience and research many other magazines properly in order to create the
desired outcome of the magazine that I wanted. These things made me understand codes and conventions of a
magazine and to follow them for a more professional outcome.

27. Overall I think that my magazine has been successful as it has followed most codes and conventions of other
magazines that are similar to mine. It shows a consistent flow of the same colour scheme and on the whole uses
black and white images apart from the small image on the front cover and on the double page spread. I feel it has
used modern features such as Facebook and Twitter in order to connect with a wider audience and appeal to 17-24
year old which was my initial intention. I fell like the model has correctly represented my genre of music and would
appeal to young adults. It has followed codes and conventions such as simplistic, black and white images and a
neat layout.
If I had to make any improvements, I would include slightly more writing on the front cover, although keeping it
simple and not making it look too busy as it would ruin the house style of the magazine.