The document discusses feedback received on various products including two trailers and a magazine front cover. Feedback on the first trailer indicated it was too long so clips were shortened and volume was lowered on a scene. Only one comment was received for the magazine cover so it was only drafted once. Feedback was implemented to improve subsequent drafts, like adding a voiceover to the second trailer to make it seem more professional.

1. What have you learnt
from audience feedback
Evaluation Question 3

2. Feedback from 1st trailer

3. Feedback from Front Cover
This is the only
feedback I received
for any of my
ancillary products.

4. Feedback from 2nd trailer

5. What have I learnt?
After receiving audience feedback, I acted upon this to
improve my products. I only received one piece of
feedback on my ancillary products, and that was for my
magazine front cover, so I could only do 1 draft because
nobody who viewed it left feedback comments on how to
improve it, even after asking.
From the feedback of my first draft trailer, I learnt that it
was a little too long so cut down clips that were quite long.
I also lowered the volume of the scene where the girls
were talking in McDonalds, because it sounded like they
were shouting over the sound track. Also, on my 2nd draft I
had a voice-over recorded for it to make it sound like a
more professional television trailer.