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THE CRUCIBLE
Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English
Writing A Top Grade Essay
Explore the ways Miller makes
the moment when Proctor tears up his
confession particularly dramatic.
www.sharemylesson.com/teaching-resource/The-Crucible-Writing-a-Top-Grade-Essay-6086770/ adapted
Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English
What Makes A Model Introduction
1.Recognition of the question to show that you
understand the question
2.Evidence that you understand the play as a
whole
3.Create a LINE OF ARGUMENT to show your
opinion in relation to the essay question.
Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English
A MODEL INTRODUCTION
Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English
One of the most dramatic moments in The Crucible is when
Proctor tears up his signed confession to witchcraft, and
subsequently, his right to life. Proctor is caught between the
decision to live, a liar under a tainted name, or to die a
martyr, with his honor and a promise of Heaven. The
Crucible is centered on issues of : morality, rebellion, an
individualโ€™s right to freewill, social conformity and
redemption. John is constantly pinpointed as a member of
this society who is unwilling to conform to the rigid way of
life in Salem. His ultimate rebellion is when he tears up his
confession, thus going against the will of the high court, and
Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English
A MODEL MAIN BODY PARAGRAPH:
Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English
A MODEL CONCLUSION:
In Act I, Abigail is shown desperately trying to regain Johnโ€™s
affection. โ€œYou loved me John Proctor, and whatever sin it
is, you love me yet!โ€ Johnโ€™s action, turning away from
Abigail could be a metaphorical way of describing his
turning away from the affair, and the sin connected to it.
This turning away could also be a display of weakness of
heart, almost shielding himself from what he lusts for.
Indeed, the affair itself shows weakness, however, I feel
that it highlights how โ€˜humanโ€™ John is, in contrast to the
more rigid, righteous Puritan residents of Salem. Proctor
embodies human fallibility, a sinner, somebody who have
Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English
A MODEL CONCLUSION:
Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English
A MODEL CONCLUSION:
To conclude, in my opinion it is the quest for the Devil
which brings Salemโ€™s residents closer to him. Satan is
eventually recognized as part of them rather than a
separate being. These people are the embodiment of the
phantom they were hunting. Like Satan, who himself was
once angelic, they fall from grace and fall from holiness to
undoubted evil, as Satan did from Heaven to Hell. This is
ironic as in the course of the outward search and those
that they believed to be in league with and corrupted by
Satan they were actually becoming the most corrupt
people in the village. In destroying his confession, Proctor

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Essay Writing The Crucible

  • 1. THE CRUCIBLE Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English Writing A Top Grade Essay Explore the ways Miller makes the moment when Proctor tears up his confession particularly dramatic. www.sharemylesson.com/teaching-resource/The-Crucible-Writing-a-Top-Grade-Essay-6086770/ adapted
  • 2. Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English What Makes A Model Introduction 1.Recognition of the question to show that you understand the question 2.Evidence that you understand the play as a whole 3.Create a LINE OF ARGUMENT to show your opinion in relation to the essay question.
  • 3. Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English A MODEL INTRODUCTION
  • 4. Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English One of the most dramatic moments in The Crucible is when Proctor tears up his signed confession to witchcraft, and subsequently, his right to life. Proctor is caught between the decision to live, a liar under a tainted name, or to die a martyr, with his honor and a promise of Heaven. The Crucible is centered on issues of : morality, rebellion, an individualโ€™s right to freewill, social conformity and redemption. John is constantly pinpointed as a member of this society who is unwilling to conform to the rigid way of life in Salem. His ultimate rebellion is when he tears up his confession, thus going against the will of the high court, and
  • 5. Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English A MODEL MAIN BODY PARAGRAPH:
  • 6. Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English A MODEL CONCLUSION: In Act I, Abigail is shown desperately trying to regain Johnโ€™s affection. โ€œYou loved me John Proctor, and whatever sin it is, you love me yet!โ€ Johnโ€™s action, turning away from Abigail could be a metaphorical way of describing his turning away from the affair, and the sin connected to it. This turning away could also be a display of weakness of heart, almost shielding himself from what he lusts for. Indeed, the affair itself shows weakness, however, I feel that it highlights how โ€˜humanโ€™ John is, in contrast to the more rigid, righteous Puritan residents of Salem. Proctor embodies human fallibility, a sinner, somebody who have
  • 7. Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English A MODEL CONCLUSION:
  • 8. Copyright ยฉ 2011 TES English A MODEL CONCLUSION: To conclude, in my opinion it is the quest for the Devil which brings Salemโ€™s residents closer to him. Satan is eventually recognized as part of them rather than a separate being. These people are the embodiment of the phantom they were hunting. Like Satan, who himself was once angelic, they fall from grace and fall from holiness to undoubted evil, as Satan did from Heaven to Hell. This is ironic as in the course of the outward search and those that they believed to be in league with and corrupted by Satan they were actually becoming the most corrupt people in the village. In destroying his confession, Proctor