3. WHAT YOU ASKED FOR
• Tailoring a briefing note for the
audience;
• What are they looking for?
• What is useful when it comes to
background information?
• How much is enough, how much
is too much ?
• Refresher on how to organize
information for a briefing note
4.
5. SINCE YOU ASKED…
• We have problems writing clearly and communicating ideas to external and
internal audiences;
• Those problems are a symptom of a much larger issue—lack of training and
appreciation for critical thinking;
• We never imagine what might be useful for people trying to make a decision;
• We are a hierarchical, president driven organization, fearful of change. So
we keep writing the same kind of briefing notes, over and over again;
• Employees need more of our support.
6. APRIL 2016
MESSAGE FROM CABINET
• Documents are too long;
• Documents are often poorly
structured, meaning that we
have to hunt for important
information;
• This wastes time;
• Please share this.
12. WE ARE NOT HELPING
OUR AUDIENCE OF
DECISION-MAKERS.
13. IT’S TIME TO RADICALLY RE-
IMAGINE HOW WE WRITE IN
GOVERNMENT.
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14. TODAY WE WILL…
• Survey the current state of briefing notes the Government of
Saskatchewan;
• Introduce a performance standard designed to tell you where you are
at;
• Point towards areas of improvement;
• Talk about clear writing, logical organization, a point of view and
concrete examples;
• Talk about anticipating the needs of your audience.
15.
16. THINGS TO REMEMBER WHEN WRITING
• Stop talking about us. Start talking about the people we serve.
• Stop talking about our interior, organizational processes. Quite literally,
no one cares.
• Move from the abstract to the concrete.
• Start looking at things through the eyes of the customer
• Sleep in their beds to know their dreams.
18. A briefing note is…
❖ Part of a broader comms strategy;
❖ Part of an issues-management strategy;
❖ A tool for risk mitigation, record-keeping.
❖ A tool to assist in decision-making.
19. Uses
❖ To communicate a message/values/rationale to an
internal or external audience.(CII)
❖ To provide decision-makers with all of the relevant
information needed to make an effective policy decision.
(CDI)
❖ To explain a past decision in the context of current
information and future predictions.
❖ A template for a change process.
20. What should be in a good
briefing note
❖ Public policy (and by extension, briefing notes) must be:
❖ Forward looking-include statistical trends and informed
predictions;
❖ Outward looking- illustrate the factors in play at local, national and
international levels;
❖ Innovative and creative (questioning the established way);
❖ Empirical-using evidence;
❖ Evaluate-contain a systematic assessment of early going, for use
in self-correction.
Source: UK Cabinet Office, 1999
21. Questions to ask, before you start
writing.
❖
❖ 1) Who is the audience? What do they need? What information
would be useful to them? How could I structure this information to
make it most useful?
❖ 2) What is my hypothesis? What evidence exists in support of that
hypothesis? What hidden assumptions must be explored?
❖ 3) What is this note being used for? To help decision-makers arrive
at an informed decision? To justify a decision that has already been
made? To survey the rationale of past decisions and place them in
context?
22.
23. ❖ A short paper that quickly and effectively informs senior
executives about an issue.
❖ Distillation of complex information into a:
❖ short;
❖ well-structured;
❖ document.
24. Characteristics
❖ Short-one or rarely—two pages.
❖ concise: every word used as efficiently as possible.
❖ clear: what matters to the reader, organized effectively.
❖ reliable- accurate, sound, dependable.
25. Structure
❖ Issue: one sentence, why this matters.
❖ Background: A quick history, evolution.
❖ Current status-last decision made.
❖ Key considerations: Players and alternative points of
view. Why we disagree.
30. • A brief, one sentence description of the issue that your note is
addressing
• Non-prejudicial, objective statement of the circumstances
• Should clearly state the subject matter
• Must anticipate that any option could be adopted.
42. ❖ many issues, most unrelated.
❖ no background or familiarity with most issues.
❖ cannot spend the time doing their own research.
❖ need a capsule version of key points and
considerations.
Your Audience — Decision makers
43. Have Empathy
❖ A good briefing note (CDI, CII, news release, speech)
myst synthesize information in a way that makes it
useful for people making decisions or defending
decisions already made.
❖ Reading your briefing note should not be a chore
❖ People should want to read your document.
❖ People should feel the need to read your document.
56. FOR SASKATCHEWAN’S PUBLIC SERVICE
NEW TARGETS
• A Flesch-Kincaid readability score of 50 or
greater;
• A grade level between 6-8;
• 12 to 15 words per sentence.
57. “IAN, GRADE 6 LEVEL IS
HARD TO ACHIEVE,
WITHOUT DUMBING DOWN
THE CONTENT
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58. MORE THAN 40% OF NORTH
AMERICANS HAVE ONLY
BASIC LITERACY SKILLS.
59. IMPROVE YOUR NOTES THROUGH…
• The use of concrete language;
• The use of superlatives;
• The use of comparison;
• Special attention to narrative
structure;
• Keep sentences short;
• Use a readability index.
81. Positioning statement
exercise
• Go back into your groups;
• Use positioning statement to review release;
• What’s this really about ?
• Can it help you make things better?
83. THESIS
• Storytelling is the key to getting your message across
• You need a narrative structure for your
• writing
• presentations
• conversations
89. WE SPEND A LOT OF TIME IN GOVERNMENT
• speaking to people who are not listening
• writing reports that never get read
• failing to engage people.
90. WE SPEND A LOT OF TIME
IN GOVERNMENT…FAILING
TO TELL A STORY.
91. WE SPEND A LOT OF TIME
TALKING TO OURSELVES
ABOUT OURSELVES.
92.
93.
94. “Stories are the most powerful
delivery tool for information.
The best way to unite an idea with an
emotion is by telling a story.”
95.
96.
97.
98.
99.
100. — Alex Frankel, Guardian,
27 November 2016
YOUR POLICY IS ONLY AS
GOOD AS THE NARRATIVE
OR PUBLIC DISCOURSE YOU
HAVE HUNG IT ON.
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101. Nancy Duarte—Resonate.
• Every story needs a big idea;
• A unique point of view, rather than generalizations;
• Convey what’s at stake;
• Make people care about your perspective.
pg. 78
102. Point of view versus topic
• Governments write about topics;
• People write with a point-of-view;
• One builds a story, one doesn’t
103. The fate of the oceans is
a topic.
Climate change is killing
sea otters expresses a
point of view.
104. — Nancy Duarte, Resonate.
YOU CAN HAVE PILES OF
FACTS AND STILL FAIL TO
RESONATE.
”
“
105. —Resonate, Pg. 14
USE PLENTY OF FACTS, BUT
ACCOMPANY THEM WITH
EMOTIONAL APPEAL.
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“
106. • Information drives action
• Action has to be explained
• The end result of a decision, inevitably, is the exercise of power.
• The end result of that intersection is story.
107. WHETHER YOU KNOW IT OR
NOT, THE GOAL OF YOUR
STORY IS TO EVOKE A
RESPONSE.
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“
108. “I’ve learned that people will forget
what you said…
…people will forget what you did.
118. • Only 5% of US flights have an Air Marshal;
• Since 9/11, there have been no hijackings;
• There have been more arrests of Air Marshals
• than by Air Marshals since 9/11.
Here’s some other
stories…
131. Why this worked..
• Clearly written, concrete language;
• Well organized;
• Articulates a point of view, with consequences;
• A simple, defining metaphor (car).
134. “If we read every sentence aloud carefully…and
if we then fiddle and adjust our words until they
feel right in the mouth and sound right in the
ear, the resulting sentence will be strong and
clear.”
–Prof. Peter Elbow
135. Questions
• Do you write multiple drafts ?
• Do you read them out loud to someone else ?
138. “If we read every sentence aloud carefully…and
if we then fiddle and adjust our words until they
feel right in the mouth and sound right in the
ear, the resulting sentence will be strong and
clear.”
145. We had a big idea
• It’s important because—
• This idea came from—
• We talked to these people, and they said—
146. Here’s how our big idea
changed
• We were surprised to discover—
• New information created these new insights—
• Here’s why these insights are valuable—
147. The value proposition
• Our big idea will improve a process/save money/
• make life better for people in the following ways—
148. Rejected opportunity cost
• If we do nothing, here are the consequences—
• Here’s what they are doing on other jurisdictions—