This double page spread lacks text and has too much empty space. More text could be added to make it seem like a full story page. The top left could include a large quote to fill space. There needs to be a stronger link between this page and the front cover.

1. Double Page Spread Feedback
The main problem that I was made aware from is the lack of text on the page and the amount of empty
space on the page. I can add more text on the page so that it seems more like a real page that has a full
story on it. In the top left of the page I can add another feature to the page to fill space. A possibility is to
add a quote in big writing. Another bit of feedback is that there is not a big enough link between this and
the front cover.