Development pro forma

Digital Graphic Narrative
Development
Cam Stannard

Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
The only thing i liked about my image is the way
you have to warp the shapes to get the right
outcome.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would try to make the shapes more like the
original image. So it looks more like it overall.

Evaluation
I like the fact it looks like it has been drawn on
and has a cartoon kind of vibe.
I would try to show more detail if i was to do it
again, the detail was rather lacking.

Evaluation
I like everything about this image, the effects,
the text and the way the image corresponds
with the text.
I would try to improve the text, with a different
font perhaps.

Evaluation
I liked the creation process mainly but i like the
way you can use clipping masks to be able to
see through the text and an image takes the
form of the text.
I would try to change the colour that fills the
rest of the image and probably change the
background image

Evaluation
I loved adding the effects to make it actually
look like it was in a comic book.
I would probably use a lighter image because
mine is currently quite dark.

Evaluation
I like the way in this one it looks like an actual
comic book page with the layout, effects and
colour style.
I would probably add colour next time and try to
get more diverse images.

Evaluation
I like the fact it was easy to draw and is
recognisable
I would use darker colours and colour it in
better

Evaluation
Personally i don’t really like it at all, it looks
really tacky and un textured.
If i was to do it again, i would add textures and
just produce a generally better environment

Proposal
Dimensions
12 Pages and Size A4
Story Overview
The year is 2277, man has colonized space. Red has landed on the planet her
grandmother has retired too. She wishes to travel to her house in order to give her
some earth delicacies. On the way there she runs into an extraterrestrial variant of the
wolf. The wolf tries to trick her to go into the bushes but it doesn't work and she
continues to head to her grandmothers. When she arrives her grandmother isn't
acting like herself that is because the wolf has eaten and replaced her. Before the wolf
corners her a space bounty hunter blasts open the window and imprisons the wolf.
Then Red is then seen leaving for her spaceship
Export Format
PDF
Advantages: Can’t be edited. A lossless file, quality will remain in tact
Disadvantages: Hard to transfer and not readable on all devices

Deadline
3/2/17
Audience
This can be for both young boys and girls (7-9). The reason for boys is because boys
love space and aliens. The girls however stereotypically like fairytales so the red
riding hood aspect of the story will appeal to them
Production Methods
I will be drawing my characters by hand and scanning them into the computer.
Then in photoshop i will be going over them to look more digital and make them
appear comic book style.

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Original Script
Once upon a time there was a dear little girl who was loved by everyone who looked at her, but most of all by her grandmother, and
there was nothing that she would not have given to the child. Once she gave her a little cap of red velvet, which suited her so well that
she would never wear anything else; so she was always called 'Little Red- Cap.'
One day her mother said to her: 'Come, Little Red-Cap, here is a piece of cake and a bottle of wine; take them to your grandmother,
she is ill and weak, and they will do her good. Set out before it gets hot, and when you are going, walk nicely and quietly and do not
run off the path, or you may fall and break the bottle, and then your grandmother will get nothing; and when you go into her room,
don't forget to say, "Good morning", and don't peep into every corner before you do it.'
'I will take great care,' said Little Red-Cap to her mother, and gave her hand on it.
The grandmother lived out in the wood, half a league from the village, and just as Little Red-Cap entered the wood, a wolf met her.
Red-Cap did not know what a wicked creature he was, and was not at all afraid of him.
'Good day, Little Red-Cap,' said he.
'Thank you kindly, wolf.'
'Whither away so early, Little Red-Cap?'
'To my grandmother's.'
'What have you got in your apron?'
'Cake and wine; yesterday was baking-day, so poor sick grandmother is to have something good, to make her stronger.'
'Where does your grandmother live, Little Red-Cap?'
'A good quarter of a league farther on in the wood; her house stands under the three large oak-trees, the nut-trees are just below;
you surely must know it,' replied Little Red-Cap.
The wolf thought to himself: 'What a tender young creature! what a nice plump mouthful--she will be better to eat than the old
woman. I must act craftily, so as to catch both.' So he walked for a short time by the side of Little Red-Cap, and then he said: 'See,
Little Red-Cap, how pretty the flowers are about here--why do you not look round? I believe, too, that you do not hear how sweetly
the little birds are singing; you walk gravely along as if you were going to school, while everything else out here in the wood is merry.'
Little Red-Cap raised her eyes, and when she saw the sunbeams dancing here and there through the trees, and pretty flowers
growing everywhere, she thought: 'Suppose I take grandmother a fresh nosegay; that would please her too. It is so early in the day
that I shall still get there in good time'; and so she ran from the path into the wood to look for flowers. And whenever she had picked
one, she fancied that she saw a still prettier one farther on, and ran after it, and so got deeper and deeper into the wood.

Original Script
Meanwhile the wolf ran straight to the grandmother's house and knocked at the door.
'Who is there?'
'Little Red-Cap,' replied the wolf. 'She is bringing cake and wine; open the door.'
'Lift the latch,' called out the grandmother, 'I am too weak, and cannot get up.'
The wolf lifted the latch, the door sprang open, and without saying a word he went straight to the grandmother's bed, and devoured
her. Then he put on her clothes, dressed himself in her cap laid himself in bed and drew the curtains.
Little Red-Cap, however, had been running about picking flowers, and when she had gathered so many that she could carry no
more, she remembered her grandmother, and set out on the way to her.
She was surprised to find the cottage-door standing open, and when she went into the room, she had such a strange feeling that she
said to herself: 'Oh dear! how uneasy I feel today, and at other times I like being with grandmother so much.' She called out: 'Good
morning,' but received no answer; so she went to the bed and drew back the curtains. There lay her grandmother with her cap pulled
far over her face, and looking very strange.
'Oh! grandmother,' she said, 'what big ears you have!'
'The better to hear you with, my child,' was the reply.
'But, grandmother, what big eyes you have!' she said.
'The better to see you with, my dear.'
'But, grandmother, what large hands you have!'
'The better to hug you with.'
'Oh! but, grandmother, what a terrible big mouth you have!'
'The better to eat you with!'

Original Script
And scarcely had the wolf said this, than with one bound he was out of bed and swallowed up Red-Cap.
When the wolf had appeased his appetite, he lay down again in the bed, fell asleep and began to snore very loud. The huntsman was
just passing the house, and thought to himself: 'How the old woman is snoring! I must just see if she wants anything.' So he went into
the room, and when he came to the bed, he saw that the wolf was lying in it. 'Do I find you here, you old sinner!' said he. 'I have long
sought you!' Then just as he was going to fire at him, it occurred to him that the wolf might have devoured the grandmother, and that
she might still be saved, so he did not fire, but took a pair of scissors, and began to cut open the stomach of the sleeping wolf. When
he had made two snips, he saw the little Red-Cap shining, and then he made two snips more, and the little girl sprang out, crying:
'Ah, how frightened I have been! How dark it was inside the wolf'; and after that the aged grandmother came out alive also, but
scarcely able to breathe. Red-Cap, however, quickly fetched great stones with which they filled the wolf's belly, and when he awoke,
he wanted to run away, but the stones were so heavy that he collapsed at once, and fell dead.
Then all three were delighted. The huntsman drew off the wolf's skin and went home with it; the grandmother ate the cake and
drank the wine which Red-Cap had brought, and revived, but Red-Cap thought to herself: 'As long as I live, I will never by myself
leave the path, to run into the wood, when my mother has forbidden me to do so.'
It also related that once when Red-Cap was again taking cakes to the old grandmother, another wolf spoke to her, and tried to entice
her from the path. Red-Cap, however, was on her guard, and went straight forward on her way, and told her grandmother that she
had met the wolf, and that he had said 'good morning' to her, but with such a wicked look in his eyes, that if they had not been on the
public road she was certain he would have eaten her up. 'Well,' said the grandmother, 'we will shut the door, that he may not come
in.' Soon afterwards the wolf knocked, and cried: 'Open the door, grandmother, I am Little Red-Cap, and am bringing you some
cakes.' But they did not speak, or open the door, so the grey-beard stole twice or thrice round the house, and at last jumped on the
roof, intending to wait until Red-Cap went home in the evening, and then to steal after her and devour her in the darkness. But the
grandmother saw what was in his thoughts. In front of the house was a great stone trough, so she said to the child: 'Take the pail,
Red-Cap; I made some sausages yesterday, so carry the water in which I boiled them to the trough.' Red-Cap carried until the great
trough was quite full. Then the smell of the sausages reached the wolf, and he sniffed and peeped down, and at last stretched out his
neck so far that he could no longer keep his footing and began to slip, and slipped down from the roof straight into the great trough,
and was drowned. But Red-Cap went joyously home, and no one ever did anything to harm her again.
http://www.worldoftales.com/fairy_tales/Brothers_Grimm/LITTLE%20RED-
CAP%20[LITTLE%20RED%20RIDING%20HOOD].html

Story Breakdown
1) Red lands on planet
2) Red meets wolf
3) Red gets to grandmas
4) Wolf has become grandma
5)Hunter Traps Wolf
6) Red leaves for earth

Draft Script
Page 1: There was once a girl called Red who liked to sail the stars in her Red
spaceship wearing her red spacesuit.
Page 2: She lands on her grandmother’s planet to give her some food from
earth.
Page 3: She Starts walking towards the house by travelling through the Andros
Forest. In which live hundreds of alien creatures.
Page 4: She meets a strange alien wolf. His eyes were as yellow as the moon.
His skin was as black as the night. Teeth as sharp as knives. He glares at her
licking his lips.
Page 5: “Hello little girl, how about you bring that food to my house in the bushes
over there?” He howls. “No thanks i need to meet my grandmother!” Red replies
Page 6: Red continues to the house crossing over the bridge to her
grandmother’s house
Page 7: Red reaches her grandmother's house. It was a very large house that
made her feel uneasy. The clutches the box of food and opens the door.

Draft Script
Page 8: “Hello Grandma! You look different?” Red hesitates.
Page 9: “What big eyes you have?” “Better to see you with my dear.”
“Grandma, What big ears you have?” “Better to hear you with my dear”
Grandma, what big teeth you have?” “Better to eat you with my dear…”
The wolf lunges out of the grandma’s bed and clothing and corners Red by the
window.
Page 10: Window smashes and in flies a hunter.
“I’ve finally found you! Your reign of terror is over!” The hunter throws a prison
orb at the wolf and it flies into like a liquid sliding off into it leaving grandma
behind.
Page 11: With the wolf imprisoned and the Hunter has repaired the window. The
three of them sit around and eat the food Red has brought with her.
Page 12: Red leaves to head back for earth, waiting for the day she will return to
her grandma.

Final Script
Page 1: There was once a girl called Red who liked to sail the stars in her Red
spaceship wearing her red spacesuit.
Page 2: She lands on her grandmother’s planet to give her some food from
earth.
Page 3: She Starts walking towards the house by travelling through the Andros
Forest. In which live hundreds of alien creatures.
Page 4: She meets a strange alien wolf. His eyes were as yellow as the moon.
His skin was as black as the night. Teeth as sharp as knives. He glares at her
licking his lips.
Page 5: “Hello little girl, how about you bring that food to my house in the bushes
over there?” He howls. “No thanks i need to meet my grandmother!” Red replies
Page 6: Red continues to the house crossing over the bridge to her
grandmother’s house
Page 7: Red reaches her grandmother's house. It was a very large house that
made her feel uneasy. The clutches the box of food and opens the door.

“Hello Grandma! You look different?” Red hesitates.
Page 9: “What big eyes you have?” “Better to see you with my dear.”
“Grandma, What big ears you have?” “Better to hear you with my dear”
Grandma, what big teeth you have?” “Better to eat you with my dear…”
The wolf lunges out of the grandma’s bed and clothing and corners Red by the
window.
Page 10: Window smashes and in flies a hunter.
“I’ve finally found you! Your reign of terror is over!” The hunter throws a prison
orb at the wolf and it flies into like a liquid sliding off into it leaving grandma
behind.
Page 11: With the wolf imprisoned and the Hunter has repaired the window. The
three of them sit around and eat the food Red has brought with her.
Page 12: Red leaves to head back for earth, waiting for the day she will return to
her grandma.

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