The document contains feedback from a student on various digital graphic narrative assignments they completed. For the shape task, they liked the cartoon-like clouds and grass details. For the rotoscope task, they enjoyed the polygon tool's ability to add detailed lines and curves. Across assignments, the student noted things they would improve, such as adding more abstract elements or effects. The feedback provides insight into the student's creative process and opportunities for growth on different techniques.

1. Digital Graphic Narrative
Development
name

2. Shape Task

3. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked the clouds in the image because they were very cartoon like and
this was the style I was gong for in the image. I also liked how you can see
the grass stuck up and not just a solid shape giving better detail to the
image as well as keeping the cartoon like look of the image
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I did this again I would do a completely different image and try
adding more detail to get a different effect than the one I have got

4. Rotoscope

5. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked the detail that the polygon tool allowed me to have with the
badge and the Adidas logo etc. also I liked how I used curves with the
polygon tool so it looked like it was a curved line instead of the straight
line that it was
What would you improve if you did it again?
if I did it again I would probably go for a more abstract look with
making the lines more obvious and have more sharp bends in to get a
different effect from the one I had.

6. Text Based

7. Text Based

8. Text Based

9. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked my clipping mask as you could see the
main image as well as easily read the text
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would add more effects and colour to my final
text

10. Comic Book

11. Comic Book

12. Comic Book

13. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I how even though I made the image look very
comic book like I still kept some detail within the
image for e.g. nose mouth ears etc.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I was able to do it again I would like to try and
create a more abstract piece with less detail and
more comic book like effect.

14. Photography

15. Photography

16. Photography

17. Photography

18. Evaluation
What did you like about your image(s)?
I liked the emption I was able to portray in the
images sad happy exited etc.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I did it again I would take more time and find
images that really told the emotion that I was trying
to portray as soon as you saw them even though
the ones I did get were quite good anyway

19. Illustration

20. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked how I captured the detail in the image for e.g. the
kit signs and logos and also that the colours were well
shaded.
What would you improve if you did it again?
The things I did not like about this picture were especially
the hands this was because of how the fingers didn’t
quite look right with some being to small and some to
big. Also after I had finished the image I realised I had
drawn my main image (the goalkeeper) to small and he
did not look right next to the post

21. Initial Ideas

22. Mood board of inspiration

23. Idea Generation

24. Mood board of chosen idea

25. Proposal
Dimensions
12 pages at 9.7 x 0.2 x 10.4 inches
Story Overview
The three little pigs get told to get there own home. They go and find straw sticks and
bricks. The wolf comes to the straw house and blows it down. The same thing happens
to the stick house. The brick house on the other hand can not be blown down so the
wolf climbs the chimney. His tail gets burnt by the fire and he runs away. The pigs live
happily ever after.
Export Format
jpeg
Advantages: quick download small size
Disadvantages: low quality if enlarged

26. Deadline
Audience
my target audience will be children aged 4-6 and both female and males
Production Methods
I will be using rotoscoping to create a basic style of images easy for the younger
audiences to understand along with the cut out filter for more detailed parts of
images that would be unable to rotoscope.

27. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?

28. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?

29. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?

30. Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?

31. Storyboards

32. Storyboards

33. Storyboards

34. Once upon a time, there was a mother pig who had three little baby pigs. The three little pigs grew
so big that their mother said to them, "You are too big to live here any longer. You must go and
build houses for yourselves. But take care that the wolf does not catch you." The three little pigs
set off. "We will take care that the wolf does not catch us," they said.Soon they met a man who was
carrying some straw. "Please will you give me some straw?" asked the first little pig. "I want to build
a house for myself." "Sure," said the man, and he gave the first little pig some straw. The first little
pig built himself a house out of it. He was very pleased with his house. He said, "Now the wolf
won't catch me and eat me!"The second little pig and the third little pig went on along the road.
Soon they met a man who was carrying some sticks. "Please will you give me some sticks?" asked
the second little pig. "I want to build a house for myself." "Sure," said the man, and he gave the
second little pig some sticks. Then the second little pig built himself a house of sticks. It was
stronger than the house of straw. The second little pig was very pleased with his house. He said,
"Now the wolf won't catch me and eat me!"The third little pig walked along the road by himself.
Soon he met a man carrying some bricks. "Please will you give me some bricks?" asked the third
little pig. "I want to build a house for myself." "Sure," said the man, and he gave the third little pig
some bricks. Then the third little pig built himself a house of bricks. It took him a long time to build
it, and it was a very strong house. The third little pig was very pleased with his house. He said,
"Now the wolf won't catch me and eat me!"

35. Original Script
The next day, the wolf came along the road. He came to the house of straw that the first little pig
had built. When the first little pig saw the wolf coming, he ran inside his house and shut the door.
The wolf knocked on the door and said,"Little pig, little pig. Let me come in!""No, no!" said the
little pig, "By the hair of my chinny chin chin, I will not let you come in!""Then I'll huff and I'll puff,
and I'll blow your house in!" said the wolf.So he huffed and he puffed, and he huffed and he puffed.
The house of straw fell down, and the wolf ate up the first little pig.The next day, the wolf walked
further along the road. He came to the house of sticks that the second little pig had built. When the
second little pig saw the wolf coming, he ran inside his house and shut the door. The wolf knocked
on the door and said,"Little pig, little pig. Let me come in!""Then I'll huff and I'll puff, and I'll blow
your house in!" said the wolf.So he huffed and he puffed, and he huffed and he puffed. The house
of sticks fell down, and the wolf ate up the second little pig. The next day, the wolf walked further
along the road. He came to the house of bricks that the third little pig had built. When the third
little pig saw the wolf coming, he ran inside his house and shut the door. The wolf knocked on the
door and said, "Little pig, little pig. Let me come in!" No, no!" said the little pig. "By the hair of my
chinny chin chin, I will not let you come in!""Then I'll huff and I'll puff, and I'll blow your house in!"
said the wolf.So he huffed and he puffed, and he huffed and he puffed. But the house of bricks did
not fall down.The wolf was very angry, indeed. He said, "Little pig, I am going to eat you up. I am
going to climb down your chimney to get you." The little pig was very frightened, but he said
nothing. He put a big pot of water on the fire to boil. The wolf climbed on the roof, and then he
began to come down the chimney. The little pig took the lid off the pot, and when the wolf came
out of the chimney, he fell into the pot with a big splash! That was the end of the wolf.

36. Final Script
Final script goes here.

37. Digital Flat Plans