The document provides feedback on a student's digital graphic narrative development project. The feedback summarizes that the student's mood board could have more variation in images but what was shown was good. It also notes the project presentation was well done but the target audience description could have been more detailed. The student agrees variation in the mood board could be improved but disagrees with no other parts of the feedback.

1. Digital Graphic Narrative
Development
name

2. Shape Task

3. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked the clouds in the image because they were very cartoon like and this
was the style I was gong for in the image. I also liked how you can see the
grass stuck up and not just a solid shape giving better detail to the image
as well as keeping the cartoon like look of the image
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I did this again I would do a completely different image and try
adding more detail to get a different effect than the one I have got

4. Rotoscope

5. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked the detail that the polygon tool allowed me to have with the
badge and the Adidas logo etc. also I liked how I used curves with the
polygon tool so it looked like it was a curved line instead of the straight
line that it was
What would you improve if you did it again?
if I did it again I would probably go for a more abstract look with
making the lines more obvious and have more sharp bends in to get a
different effect from the one I had.

6. Text Based

7. Text Based

8. Text Based

9. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked my clipping mask as you could see the main
image as well as easily read the text
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would add more effects and colour to my final
text

10. Comic Book

11. Comic Book

12. Comic Book

13. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I how even though I made the image look very
comic book like I still kept some detail within the
image for e.g. nose mouth ears etc.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I was able to do it again I would like to try and
create a more abstract piece with less detail and
more comic book like effect.

14. Photography

15. Photography

16. Photography

17. Photography

18. Evaluation
What did you like about your image(s)?
I liked the emption I was able to portray in the images
sad happy exited etc.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I did it again I would take more time and find images
that really told the emotion that I was trying to
portray as soon as you saw them even though the
ones I did get were quite good anyway

19. Illustration

20. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked how I captured the detail in the image for e.g. the kit
signs and logos and also that the colours were well shaded.
What would you improve if you did it again?
The things I did not like about this picture were especially the
hands this was because of how the fingers didn’t quite look
right with some being to small and some to big. Also after I
had finished the image I realised I had drawn my main image
(the goalkeeper) to small and he did not look right next to the
post

21. Initial Ideas

22. intricate design
maybe to detailed
for my audience
may need to be
simpler version
very un realistic
version of three
little pigs i
would prefer a
more realistic
pig and wolf
also would be
easier to
rotoscope
goldilocks and
the there
bears image
very basic
good quality
but very
simple.
very young little
red riding hood.
more scary
version
possibly older
version of the
book

24. Mood board of chosen idea

25. Proposal
Dimensions
12 pages at 9.7 x 0.2 x 10.4 inches
Story Overview
The three little pigs get told to get there own home. They go and find straw sticks
and bricks. The wolf comes to the straw house and blows it down. The same
thing happens to the stick house. The brick house on the other hand can not be
blown down so the wolf climbs the chimney. His tail gets burnt by the fire and he
runs away. The pigs live happily ever after.
Export Format
jpeg
Advantages: quick download small size
Disadvantages: low quality if enlarged

26. Deadline
Audience
my target audience will be children aged 4-6 and both female and males
Production Methods
I will be using rotoscoping to create a basic style of images easy for the
younger audiences to understand along with the cut out filter for more detailed
parts of images that would be unable to rotoscope.

29. Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
My feedback says that I need to shop more variation in my mood board but what I
did show as good. Also it shows that my book was well presented although it
could have done with having a more detailed target audience.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
I agree that my mood board could do with more variation as I only really had the
three little pigs and then a few other books.
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?
I do not disagree with any of the feedback and I will take it all into consideration.

30. Storyboards

31. Storyboards

32. Storyboards

33. Storyboards

34. Storyboards

35. Once upon a time, there was a mother pig who had three little baby pigs. The three little pigs grew so
big that their mother said to them, "You are too big to live here any longer. You must go and build
houses for yourselves. But take care that the wolf does not catch you." The three little pigs set off.
"We will take care that the wolf does not catch us," they said.Soon they met a man who was carrying
some straw. "Please will you give me some straw?" asked the first little pig. "I want to build a house
for myself." "Sure," said the man, and he gave the first little pig some straw. The first little pig built
himself a house out of it. He was very pleased with his house. He said, "Now the wolf won't catch me
and eat me!"The second little pig and the third little pig went on along the road. Soon they met a
man who was carrying some sticks. "Please will you give me some sticks?" asked the second little pig.
"I want to build a house for myself." "Sure," said the man, and he gave the second little pig some
sticks. Then the second little pig built himself a house of sticks. It was stronger than the house of
straw. The second little pig was very pleased with his house. He said, "Now the wolf won't catch me
and eat me!"The third little pig walked along the road by himself. Soon he met a man carrying some
bricks. "Please will you give me some bricks?" asked the third little pig. "I want to build a house for
myself." "Sure," said the man, and he gave the third little pig some bricks. Then the third little pig
built himself a house of bricks. It took him a long time to build it, and it was a very strong house. The
third little pig was very pleased with his house. He said, "Now the wolf won't catch me and eat me!"

36. Original Script
The next day, the wolf came along the road. He came to the house of straw that the first little pig had built.
When the first little pig saw the wolf coming, he ran inside his house and shut the door. The wolf knocked
on the door and said,"Little pig, little pig. Let me come in!""No, no!" said the little pig, "By the hair of my
chinny chin chin, I will not let you come in!""Then I'll huff and I'll puff, and I'll blow your house in!" said the
wolf.So he huffed and he puffed, and he huffed and he puffed. The house of straw fell down, and the wolf
ate up the first little pig.The next day, the wolf walked further along the road. He came to the house of
sticks that the second little pig had built. When the second little pig saw the wolf coming, he ran inside his
house and shut the door. The wolf knocked on the door and said,"Little pig, little pig. Let me come
in!""Then I'll huff and I'll puff, and I'll blow your house in!" said the wolf.So he huffed and he puffed, and he
huffed and he puffed. The house of sticks fell down, and the wolf ate up the second little pig. The next day,
the wolf walked further along the road. He came to the house of bricks that the third little pig had built.
When the third little pig saw the wolf coming, he ran inside his house and shut the door. The wolf knocked
on the door and said, "Little pig, little pig. Let me come in!" No, no!" said the little pig. "By the hair of my
chinny chin chin, I will not let you come in!""Then I'll huff and I'll puff, and I'll blow your house in!" said the
wolf.So he huffed and he puffed, and he huffed and he puffed. But the house of bricks did not fall down.The
wolf was very angry, indeed. He said, "Little pig, I am going to eat you up. I am going to climb down your
chimney to get you." The little pig was very frightened, but he said nothing. He put a big pot of water on the
fire to boil. The wolf climbed on the roof, and then he began to come down the chimney. The little pig took
the lid off the pot, and when the wolf came out of the chimney, he fell into the pot with a big splash! That
was the end of the wolf.

37. Final Script
once upon a time there were three little pigs that lived with there mother. one
day there mother said that they should go and find there own home
somewhere else.
the three little pigs went on there adventure looking for materials to build
there new home.
one of the pigs decide to make his house out of straw as it was the first
material they saw. the other two pigs decided to continue to try and find a
better material.
the second pig was tired and decided to build his house out of the next thing
he saw. he found a pile of sticks and made his house out of that but the most
patient pig decided that he would find something better and continued
walking.
the third pig was he least lazy of all the pigs but even he was getting tired. he
thought about but decided to carry on. he found exactly what he was looking
for, the perfect house building material, brick. he decided to get to work on
the house.
one day the first pig was making some toast when he heard a noise outside
he went to see what it was and to his horror it was the wolf “come out little
piggy” the wolf said “or ill blow your house down” and on the pigs refusal
he gave a mighty huff and a puff.

38. Final Script
And he blew the house down!
the first pig ran quickly to the stick house to warn his brother but as he got
there he could see that the wolf was on his tail and as the pig ran into the
stick house the wolf gave a huff and a puff and
He blew the house down!
as the third pig was at his house he saw his two brothers running fords him
shouting “wolf wolf” and immediately let them in but at that moment the wot
turned up and demanded that he was let in too and when the three little pigs
refused the wolf huffed and he puffed and…
he couldn't blow the hues down. the brick house was to strong the pigs were
saved. or so they thought.
the wolf began to climb up the side of the building and jumped down the
chimney.
the wolf began to climb down the chimney and slowly began to trails his tail
was getting hotter and hotter. he looked down and saw it was on fire!
the pigs heard a scream from the wolf so they ran outside to see what was
happening. they found the wolf running away with his tail on fire on fire and
the pigs never saw him again.

39. Digital Flat Plans