Josh gets detention in class and secretly texts his friend Ben for help. Ben sneaks into the school and turns off the internet, allowing Josh to escape from class. However, Josh injures his foot jumping from the window. He meets Ben but the teacher discovers them. A chase ensues with the teacher closing in on the boys. Ben convinces Josh to let him go to save himself as the teacher apprehends Ben.

1. DETENTION
Scene 1:
INT. CLASSROOM –DAY
The protagonist (named Josh) miserably sits in the classroom facing the fierce looking teacher.
The teacher minds his own business, calmly typing on his laptop, while the boy fiddles with his
pencil and overall just looks miserably bored. Josh than secretly texts his friend that informs
him of his whereabouts. Ben receives the text message as he stands in front of the school.
Scene 2:
EXT. ENTRANCE OF THE SCHOOL – DAY
The receptionist picks up a phone that was ringing – “Chartwell international school how may I
help you”. Ben sneaks in the school while the receptionist is on the phone. He crawls under the
table so the receptionist can’t see him. And at the end of the desk in the corner he secretly and
discretely grabs keys for the generator room and quickly leans on a wall then decides to send a
message to Josh that he is in.
Scene 3:
INT. CLASSROOM –DAY
Josh receives the text message, but the notification sound is loud enough for the teacher to
notice, so the teacher stands up and asks “what is that” and furiously takes Josh’s phone away
and places it on his desk.
Scene 4:
INT. IN THE SCHOOL –DAY
Ben makes his way towards the generator room. He stands in front of it and unlocks it with one
of the keys and finally enters the generator room and unplugs a cable that turns the internet
off.

2. Scene 5:
INT. CLASSROOM
The teacher in the detention room realizes that there is no internet connection and tells Josh
“don’t move I am coming back in a second”. Josh then takes the opportunity to grab his phone
from the teacher’s desk and open and crawls out the window. However he unfortunately twists
his foot on the landing and calls Ben and tells him that he has escaped, and that they will meet
at the back of the school.
Scene 6:
EXT. SCHOOL BACKYARD
Josh impatiently waits at the rendezvous point for Ben, when suddenly the backdoor opens and
Josh hides behind it in fear. The person in sight appears to be Josh which gives him a sense of
relieve.
Josh – “oh my god you scared me”
Ben – “sorry I was late, had to go to the bathroom”
Josh – “are you kidding me”
Ben – “ what’s that noise”
Then they randomly start to hear loud stomping from a far which gives a sense of tension as
they get a glance of the teacher.
Scene 7:
EXT. SCHOOL BACKYARD –THE CHASE
A sound bridge is taken place at this point as intensive music plays in the background. The boys
start running, Josh is struggling as he twisted his foot , the teacher is closing onto them as he
screams “come back”. As they approach the back gate Ben helps Josh get up and over. AS Ben
tries to climb over, the teacher catches up to him and gets a hold of him. Josh tries to pull Ben
towards him whilst the teacher pulls Ben towards his direction. Ben eventually persuades Josh
to let go and get the last slice of pie.