Cell Phone Use: The Pros and Cons
Prepare to Write an
Argumentative Essay
Evaluating Pro and Con Arguments
A Common Core Lesson
By
Dean Berry, Ed. D.
Gregg Berry, B. A.
Common Core Curriculum Solutions
www.commoncorecurriculum.info
Common Core Reading Standards
Delineate and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a
text, assessing whether the reasoning is sound and the
evidence is relevant and sufficient; recognize when irrelevant
evidence is introduced.
Delineate and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a
text, assessing whether the reasoning is sound and the
evidence is relevant and sufficient; recognize when irrelevant
evidence is introduced.
Common Core Speaking
and Listening Standards
Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions
(one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse
partners on topics, texts, and issues, building on others’
ideas and expressing their own clearly.
Delineate a speaker’s argument and specific claims,
evaluating the soundness of the reasoning and relevance
and sufficiency of the evidence and identifying when
irrelevant evidence is introduced.
Writing Standards
Support claim(s) with logical reasoning and relevant
evidence, using accurate, credible sources and
demonstrating an understanding of the topic or text.
Use words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and
clarify the relationships among claim(s), counterclaims,
reasons, and evidence.
Provide a concluding statement or section that follows
from and supports the argument presented
Evaluating Pro and Con Arguments
Prepare to Review the
Issue and Write an
Argumentative Essay
Do Cell Phones Cause Cancer?
Think About This
Does cell phone use when driving
cause more highway deaths?
Think About This
Do Cell Phones Reduce Crime?
Issue: Are Cell Phones Safe?
Let’s Think About the Issue
Is the radio frequency radiation emitted by cell
phone use dangerous to the human body?
• Is there a link between cell phone use and brain
tumors?
• Is there a connection between cell phones stored
near the body and cancerous tumors?
Are Cell Phones Helpful or Hurtful?
Let’s Think About the Issue
•Is Using a cell phone while driving
dangerous?
•Should young children be able to use cell
phones?
•Do cell phones help prevent crime?
What Do You Think?
Use your red or green card to signify your response to this question.
Raise your red card if you disagree or your green card if you agree.
People should limit their use of cell
phones since they present many hazards
to human beings?
What Do You Think?
Raise Your Red or Green Card
People should continue to
use their cell phones the way
they wish and not worry
about the reported dangers
of cell phone use.
Essential Questions to Guide our
Review of the Issue
• 1. What does the research data say about the
issue?
• 2. How do you know the research is reliable?
• 3. Are the arguments supported by logical
reasoning?
• 4. Is each argument supported by specific facts
and examples?
• 5. Which side of the issue is supported by a the
preponderance of the evidence?
Evaluating Evidence
Now that we have shared opinions, let’s
examine the evidence. Analyze the pro
and con arguments on the following
frames and determine which position
presents the strongest case.
Read each argument closely to see if it passes
the smell test?
Take careful notes as you read
the following arguments.
Review the Evidence and Arguments
The Pro Position: Reason # 1
Numerous peer-reviewed studies have found that cell
phone use is not associated with an increased risk of brain
tumors. An Oct. 20, 2011 study of 358,403 Danish citizens –
the largest study of its kind to date – concluded that "there
was no association between tumors of the central nervous
system or brain and long term (10 years +) use of mobile
phones." A July 27, 2011 study found that there was no
association between cell phone use and brain tumor risks
among children and adolescents. Numerous other studies
published from 2001-2013 have similarly concluded that
there is no association between cell phone use and the
development of brain tumors.
There has been no rise in the rate of brain cancers
despite a massive increase in the use of cell phones. If
cell phones were causing cancer we could expect a
significant rise in the rate of brain and other related
cancers. According to the National Cancer Institute, there
was no increase in the incidence of brain or other nervous
system cancers between the years 1987 and 2005 despite
the fact that cell phone use dramatically increased during
those same years. Between 2004 and 2010 there was still
no significant change in the incidence rate of brain
tumors. Between 2004 and 2010 there was a slight
increase from 209 cases to 221.8 cases per 100,000
people, but this slight increase was attributed to better
tracking and recording of cases. During the same time
period, cell phone use increased 62.7% from 182,140,362
subscribers in 2004 to 296,285,629 in 2010.
Reason # 2
Use of a cell phone while driving is not
inherently unsafe. Many activities that
distract drivers are much more dangerous
than talking on a phone. Research shows that
cell phone use is a factor in less than 1% of
accidents and that adjusting the radio or CD
player, talking with passengers, or eating, and
drinking while driving are all responsible for
more accidents than cell phones.
Reason # 3
Cell phones increase personal safety by
providing an easy means of contacting
others during an emergency. According to
the Wireless Association (CTIA), more that
400,000 wireless 911 calls are made every
day. According to an American Association
of Retired Persons (AARP) poll, 56% of
people over the age of 65 cite safety as a
reason they have a cell phone.
Review the Evidence and Arguments
Con Arguments
Numerous peer-reviewed studies have shown an
association between cell phone use and the
development of brain tumors. According to a Mar.
2008 meta-analysis of cell phone studies there is a
"consistent pattern" connecting cell phone use and
an increased risk of developing glioma, a type of
brain tumor. A Mar. 31, 2009 study found that long
term cell phone use (10 years +) "approximately
doubles the risk" of being diagnosed with glioma on
the same side of the head where the cell phone is
held.
In Apr. 2013 another study of Swedish cell phone
users also found an association between cell
phone use and the development of glioma and
acoustic neuroma - a benign tumor formation on
the nerve near the ear. That study’s conclusions
were confirmed by a different study in Apr.
2014. Other studies published from 2005-2013
have similarly concluded that there is an
association between cell phone use and increased
risk of developing brain and head tumors.
Children may have an increased risk of adverse
health effects from cell phone
radiation. According to American Academy of
Pediatrics President Dr. Robert Block, when cell
phones are used by children, "the average RF
energy deposition is two times higher in the brain
and 10 times higher in the bone marrow of the
skull," than for adults. A July 2008 peer-reviewed
study shows that children under the age of eight
absorb twice the amount of radiation into their
brain tissue as adults due to their lower skull
thickness.
Using a cell phone while driving, even with a
hands-free device, is unsafe and makes accidents
more likely. The National Highway Traffic Safety
Administration (NHTSA) estimates that driving
distractions, including the use of cell phones,
contribute to 25% of all traffic
crashes. According to researchers at the
University of Utah people who drive while talking
on their cell phones are as impaired as drunk
drivers with a blood alcohol level of 0.08%.
Children may have an increased risk of adverse
health effects from cell phone
radiation. According to American Academy of
Pediatrics President Dr. Robert Block, when cell
phones are used by children, "the average RF
energy deposition is two times higher in the brain
and 10 times higher in the bone marrow of the
skull," than for adults. A July 2008 peer-reviewed
study shows that children under the age of eight
absorb twice the amount of radiation into their
brain tissue as adults due to their lower skull
thickness.
Converse with Your Peers
Meet in small groups to discuss the
pros and cons of this issue and take a
group position on the problem. Select a
group chairperson to lead the group and
report back to he class.
Discuss the following essential Questions.
Are Cell Phones Helpful or Hurtful?
Let’s Think About the Issue
•Is Using a cell phone while driving
dangerous?
•Should young children be able to use cell
phones?
•Do cell phones help prevent crime?
Consider the following essential questions.
Review the Issue
• 1. What does the research data say about the
issue?
• 2. How do you know the research is reliable?
• 3. Are the arguments supported by logical
reasoning?
• 4. Is each argument supported by specific facts
and examples?
• 5. Which side of the issue is supported by a the
preponderance of the evidence?
Research and Statistics
• Compare the research and statistics for
both the pro and con positions
• Discuss which position presents the
strongest research and most reliable
sources
Continue Your Group Deliberations
• Have group members use their notes to
discuss and analyze each major argument and
supporting evidence.
• Each group member should take the leadership
and lead the discussion on one or more of the
pro and con arguments.
Report Back to the Class
Present your findings to the
class. Which side of the issue
does your group support?
Why?
Report Back to the Class
Present your findings to the
class. Which side of the issue
does your group support?
Why?
Write an Essay
Organize your ideas and prepare to write an
essay about the pros and cons of cell phone
use. Evaluate the arguments and evidence on
both sides of the issue. Weigh the pros and
cons and decide which position is supported
by the most persuasive evidence.
Develop a Writing Plan
•Determine what your main point will be, and write a
topic sentence that provides focus for your essay.
•Choose several main ideas that support your topic
sentence.
•Sort your information into supporting details with
facts and examples.
•Be sure to address both the pro and con positions
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Use the following
essay format to
write your paper.
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36
Essay
Outline
Introduction
What is my topic
sentence?
Body-Main Ideas
With supporting
details
Conclusion
How can I summarize
my paragraph?
How can I rephrase
my topic sentence?
Essays Require
Three Main
Sections
Begin Your Essay With
a Carefully Crafted
Introduction
Get the Reader’s Attention and State Your Thesis
The Key Elements of a
Strong Introduction
Check Out This Sample Introduction
Details Must Support
the Main Ideas
Provide specific
facts, examples,
and reasons for
each main idea
in the body of
your essay
Create an Outline
Topic Sentence___________________________________
_______________________________________________
A. Main Idea_____________________________________
_______________________________________________
Details/Evidence__________________________________
_______________________________________________
Details/Evidence__________________________________
_______________________________________________
B. Main Idea_____________________________________
_______________________________________________
Details/Evidence__________________________________
________________________________________________
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Prepare to Write
•Use your outline and write
an essay on your topic.
•As you write your rough
draft, it will be very
important to use special
words that enable you to
transition smoothly from one
idea to the next.
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Transition Words
As you view these words,
select the words that help you
make transitions smoothly
from one idea to the next.
• as a result
• such as
• for example
• nevertheless
• for that reason
• finally
• at this time
• therefore
• furthermore
• in addition
• in conclusion
• as well as
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Conclusion
Write a conclusion
for your essay
reviewing your main
points and
discussing why this
issue is so important
for our future.
Write a Strong Conclusion for Your Essay
Let’s Review a Good Conclusion
Review, Edit, and Rewrite
1. Re-read your essay several
times.
2. How can you improve your
sentences to communicate more
clearly?
3. Are your main ideas supported
by examples and details?
4. Exchange papers with another
student and read each other’s
essay out loud.
5. Make final corrections and write
the final draft of your polished
essay. 50
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Dean R Berry Close Reading Skills: Cell Phone Issues

  • 1.
    Cell Phone Use:The Pros and Cons Prepare to Write an Argumentative Essay
  • 2.
    Evaluating Pro andCon Arguments A Common Core Lesson By Dean Berry, Ed. D. Gregg Berry, B. A. Common Core Curriculum Solutions www.commoncorecurriculum.info
  • 3.
    Common Core ReadingStandards Delineate and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a text, assessing whether the reasoning is sound and the evidence is relevant and sufficient; recognize when irrelevant evidence is introduced. Delineate and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a text, assessing whether the reasoning is sound and the evidence is relevant and sufficient; recognize when irrelevant evidence is introduced.
  • 4.
    Common Core Speaking andListening Standards Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on topics, texts, and issues, building on others’ ideas and expressing their own clearly. Delineate a speaker’s argument and specific claims, evaluating the soundness of the reasoning and relevance and sufficiency of the evidence and identifying when irrelevant evidence is introduced.
  • 5.
    Writing Standards Support claim(s)with logical reasoning and relevant evidence, using accurate, credible sources and demonstrating an understanding of the topic or text. Use words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify the relationships among claim(s), counterclaims, reasons, and evidence. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument presented
  • 6.
    Evaluating Pro andCon Arguments Prepare to Review the Issue and Write an Argumentative Essay
  • 7.
    Do Cell PhonesCause Cancer? Think About This
  • 8.
    Does cell phoneuse when driving cause more highway deaths? Think About This
  • 9.
    Do Cell PhonesReduce Crime?
  • 10.
    Issue: Are CellPhones Safe? Let’s Think About the Issue Is the radio frequency radiation emitted by cell phone use dangerous to the human body? • Is there a link between cell phone use and brain tumors? • Is there a connection between cell phones stored near the body and cancerous tumors?
  • 11.
    Are Cell PhonesHelpful or Hurtful? Let’s Think About the Issue •Is Using a cell phone while driving dangerous? •Should young children be able to use cell phones? •Do cell phones help prevent crime?
  • 12.
    What Do YouThink? Use your red or green card to signify your response to this question. Raise your red card if you disagree or your green card if you agree. People should limit their use of cell phones since they present many hazards to human beings?
  • 13.
    What Do YouThink? Raise Your Red or Green Card People should continue to use their cell phones the way they wish and not worry about the reported dangers of cell phone use.
  • 14.
    Essential Questions toGuide our Review of the Issue • 1. What does the research data say about the issue? • 2. How do you know the research is reliable? • 3. Are the arguments supported by logical reasoning? • 4. Is each argument supported by specific facts and examples? • 5. Which side of the issue is supported by a the preponderance of the evidence?
  • 15.
    Evaluating Evidence Now thatwe have shared opinions, let’s examine the evidence. Analyze the pro and con arguments on the following frames and determine which position presents the strongest case.
  • 16.
    Read each argumentclosely to see if it passes the smell test? Take careful notes as you read the following arguments.
  • 17.
    Review the Evidenceand Arguments The Pro Position: Reason # 1 Numerous peer-reviewed studies have found that cell phone use is not associated with an increased risk of brain tumors. An Oct. 20, 2011 study of 358,403 Danish citizens – the largest study of its kind to date – concluded that "there was no association between tumors of the central nervous system or brain and long term (10 years +) use of mobile phones." A July 27, 2011 study found that there was no association between cell phone use and brain tumor risks among children and adolescents. Numerous other studies published from 2001-2013 have similarly concluded that there is no association between cell phone use and the development of brain tumors.
  • 18.
    There has beenno rise in the rate of brain cancers despite a massive increase in the use of cell phones. If cell phones were causing cancer we could expect a significant rise in the rate of brain and other related cancers. According to the National Cancer Institute, there was no increase in the incidence of brain or other nervous system cancers between the years 1987 and 2005 despite the fact that cell phone use dramatically increased during those same years. Between 2004 and 2010 there was still no significant change in the incidence rate of brain tumors. Between 2004 and 2010 there was a slight increase from 209 cases to 221.8 cases per 100,000 people, but this slight increase was attributed to better tracking and recording of cases. During the same time period, cell phone use increased 62.7% from 182,140,362 subscribers in 2004 to 296,285,629 in 2010.
  • 19.
    Reason # 2 Useof a cell phone while driving is not inherently unsafe. Many activities that distract drivers are much more dangerous than talking on a phone. Research shows that cell phone use is a factor in less than 1% of accidents and that adjusting the radio or CD player, talking with passengers, or eating, and drinking while driving are all responsible for more accidents than cell phones.
  • 20.
    Reason # 3 Cellphones increase personal safety by providing an easy means of contacting others during an emergency. According to the Wireless Association (CTIA), more that 400,000 wireless 911 calls are made every day. According to an American Association of Retired Persons (AARP) poll, 56% of people over the age of 65 cite safety as a reason they have a cell phone.
  • 21.
    Review the Evidenceand Arguments Con Arguments Numerous peer-reviewed studies have shown an association between cell phone use and the development of brain tumors. According to a Mar. 2008 meta-analysis of cell phone studies there is a "consistent pattern" connecting cell phone use and an increased risk of developing glioma, a type of brain tumor. A Mar. 31, 2009 study found that long term cell phone use (10 years +) "approximately doubles the risk" of being diagnosed with glioma on the same side of the head where the cell phone is held.
  • 22.
    In Apr. 2013another study of Swedish cell phone users also found an association between cell phone use and the development of glioma and acoustic neuroma - a benign tumor formation on the nerve near the ear. That study’s conclusions were confirmed by a different study in Apr. 2014. Other studies published from 2005-2013 have similarly concluded that there is an association between cell phone use and increased risk of developing brain and head tumors.
  • 23.
    Children may havean increased risk of adverse health effects from cell phone radiation. According to American Academy of Pediatrics President Dr. Robert Block, when cell phones are used by children, "the average RF energy deposition is two times higher in the brain and 10 times higher in the bone marrow of the skull," than for adults. A July 2008 peer-reviewed study shows that children under the age of eight absorb twice the amount of radiation into their brain tissue as adults due to their lower skull thickness.
  • 24.
    Using a cellphone while driving, even with a hands-free device, is unsafe and makes accidents more likely. The National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA) estimates that driving distractions, including the use of cell phones, contribute to 25% of all traffic crashes. According to researchers at the University of Utah people who drive while talking on their cell phones are as impaired as drunk drivers with a blood alcohol level of 0.08%.
  • 25.
    Children may havean increased risk of adverse health effects from cell phone radiation. According to American Academy of Pediatrics President Dr. Robert Block, when cell phones are used by children, "the average RF energy deposition is two times higher in the brain and 10 times higher in the bone marrow of the skull," than for adults. A July 2008 peer-reviewed study shows that children under the age of eight absorb twice the amount of radiation into their brain tissue as adults due to their lower skull thickness.
  • 26.
    Converse with YourPeers Meet in small groups to discuss the pros and cons of this issue and take a group position on the problem. Select a group chairperson to lead the group and report back to he class. Discuss the following essential Questions.
  • 27.
    Are Cell PhonesHelpful or Hurtful? Let’s Think About the Issue •Is Using a cell phone while driving dangerous? •Should young children be able to use cell phones? •Do cell phones help prevent crime?
  • 28.
    Consider the followingessential questions. Review the Issue • 1. What does the research data say about the issue? • 2. How do you know the research is reliable? • 3. Are the arguments supported by logical reasoning? • 4. Is each argument supported by specific facts and examples? • 5. Which side of the issue is supported by a the preponderance of the evidence?
  • 29.
    Research and Statistics •Compare the research and statistics for both the pro and con positions • Discuss which position presents the strongest research and most reliable sources
  • 30.
    Continue Your GroupDeliberations • Have group members use their notes to discuss and analyze each major argument and supporting evidence. • Each group member should take the leadership and lead the discussion on one or more of the pro and con arguments.
  • 31.
    Report Back tothe Class Present your findings to the class. Which side of the issue does your group support? Why?
  • 32.
    Report Back tothe Class Present your findings to the class. Which side of the issue does your group support? Why?
  • 33.
    Write an Essay Organizeyour ideas and prepare to write an essay about the pros and cons of cell phone use. Evaluate the arguments and evidence on both sides of the issue. Weigh the pros and cons and decide which position is supported by the most persuasive evidence.
  • 34.
    Develop a WritingPlan •Determine what your main point will be, and write a topic sentence that provides focus for your essay. •Choose several main ideas that support your topic sentence. •Sort your information into supporting details with facts and examples. •Be sure to address both the pro and con positions 34
  • 35.
    Use the following essayformat to write your paper. 35
  • 36.
    36 Essay Outline Introduction What is mytopic sentence? Body-Main Ideas With supporting details Conclusion How can I summarize my paragraph? How can I rephrase my topic sentence?
  • 37.
  • 38.
    Begin Your EssayWith a Carefully Crafted Introduction
  • 39.
    Get the Reader’sAttention and State Your Thesis
  • 40.
    The Key Elementsof a Strong Introduction
  • 41.
    Check Out ThisSample Introduction
  • 42.
    Details Must Support theMain Ideas Provide specific facts, examples, and reasons for each main idea in the body of your essay
  • 43.
    Create an Outline TopicSentence___________________________________ _______________________________________________ A. Main Idea_____________________________________ _______________________________________________ Details/Evidence__________________________________ _______________________________________________ Details/Evidence__________________________________ _______________________________________________ B. Main Idea_____________________________________ _______________________________________________ Details/Evidence__________________________________ ________________________________________________ 43
  • 44.
    Prepare to Write •Useyour outline and write an essay on your topic. •As you write your rough draft, it will be very important to use special words that enable you to transition smoothly from one idea to the next. 44
  • 45.
    Transition Words As youview these words, select the words that help you make transitions smoothly from one idea to the next. • as a result • such as • for example • nevertheless • for that reason • finally • at this time • therefore • furthermore • in addition • in conclusion • as well as 45
  • 46.
    Conclusion Write a conclusion foryour essay reviewing your main points and discussing why this issue is so important for our future.
  • 47.
    Write a StrongConclusion for Your Essay
  • 49.
    Let’s Review aGood Conclusion
  • 50.
    Review, Edit, andRewrite 1. Re-read your essay several times. 2. How can you improve your sentences to communicate more clearly? 3. Are your main ideas supported by examples and details? 4. Exchange papers with another student and read each other’s essay out loud. 5. Make final corrections and write the final draft of your polished essay. 50
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