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CREM LART 211
The Beginning of the End…
Paper 3
 Lots of these were good!
 You must turn in a clean, revised
copy of Paper 3 as part of your
portfolio next Thursday.
 A clean copy means none of my
marks (or your handwritten
corrections).
 EVEN IF YOU PASSED Paper 3, you
need to submit a revision in the
portfolio.
 IF you want my feedback on your
revision, you should turn it in
Tuesday morning in class.
A Pep Talk: Don’t Give Up Now!
It’s still possible to f*** this up. Don’t! You are so close to EWRT 1A!
LART end-of-quarter schedule/
Schedule change
 Wednesday, Nov 29:
READING presentations.
 Thursday, Nov 30:
NO IN-CLASS ESSAY
Will attend campus hip-hop
conference instead.
 Monday, Dec 4:
Paper 4 IN-CLASS ESSAY
 Tuesday, Dec 5:
Work on Paper 5 with Brian
(Portfolio Conferences)
 Wednesday, Dec 6:
Work on Paper 5 with Kristin
 Thursday, Dec 7:
Portfolio Day!
Potluck + fun in class
 If you want my feedback on Paper
3 revision, it is due on Tuesday
morning by class time.
Paper 5: The Reflective Essay
 Page 182 in your Course Reader.
 This is a thesis-driven essay.
 What is your thesis? A more specific
version of this claim:
“I learned some things in LART 211
and I know I still have some things
to work on, but now I’m ready to
move on to EWRT 1A.”
 I recommend that you discuss
 THREE things you learned, and
 ONE thing that you still need to
improve (and that you will work on
in 1A).
 Things to NOT talk about:
 The CONTENT of the course. The
English Department is not
interested in what you learned
about love and romance.
 The instructors. Whether you want
to praise us or criticize us, the
portfolio readers do not care.
 So what might you talk about?
Let’s brainstorm.
Paper 5: Structure
 At least five paragraphs.
 Introduction: what might you put in
your intro? How might you start this
essay?
 Could talk about previous experience
with writing.
 Could talk about your feelings about
writing.
 Could talk about high school.
 Three body paragraphs about what
you learned.
 Additional body paragraph about
what you still need to work on
(though this can be combined with
the…)
 Conclusion
 The body paragraphs should be PIE
paragraphs.
 What is the POINT of each paragraph?
 But what is the INFORMATION?
 Examples from your own work.
 Seriously: give specific examples
from your papers—especially the
portfolio essays.
 Seriously: QUOTE YOUR OWN WORK.
 Brainstorming activity:
 What is your hook?
 What is your thesis?
 What three things have you learned?
 What one thing will you work on in
1A?
Paper 4: In-class on Tuesday
 Assignment: In this essay, you will be
writing a review of Aziz Ansari’s Modern
Romance. You will be evaluating the book
based on several criteria and then making
an overall judgment about it. Your
evaluation of the book should be based on
three criteria:
 what is good or useful about the book.
 what the book could have discussed
better or in more detail.
 Ansari’s writing style.
 Sources
In doing so, you will need at least two
quotes from the Ansari book and one
quote from another source. These quotes
must be cited in accurate MLA style.
 Format
Your essay should be at least six
paragraphs. It should have a good title.
 Sample Thesis
“I think that Ansari’s Modern Romance is an
admirable, though flawed, work. His exploration
of the role of technology in modern dating—
especially his focus on data and research—is
enlightening and I think college students will find
it useful; however, I am frustrated by Ansari’s
exclusion of LGBT experiences and I find his
relentless attempts at humor to be exhausting.”
 Outline
Your outline for the essay can ONLY include the
following things:
 Your thesis statement (two sentences or less).
 Two quotes from Ansari (with MLA citations).
 One quote from another source.
 Continue with your grid and brainstorming today.
Thursday Night
Evening Headliners (6-9 PM in the VPAC at De Anza)
include:
Embodiment Project!
http://www.embodimentproject.org/
Gina Rene!
https://youtu.be/InZ7o9GLodE
https://youtu.be/BkWRgw4-0aE
Ruby Ibarra!
https://youtu.be/KUXjMtNud5w
https://youtu.be/1J1xAwuwm-U
These are some big names! And the show is FREE!
Come out and enjoy!

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D38-CREM

  • 1. CREM LART 211 The Beginning of the End…
  • 2. Paper 3  Lots of these were good!  You must turn in a clean, revised copy of Paper 3 as part of your portfolio next Thursday.  A clean copy means none of my marks (or your handwritten corrections).  EVEN IF YOU PASSED Paper 3, you need to submit a revision in the portfolio.  IF you want my feedback on your revision, you should turn it in Tuesday morning in class.
  • 3. A Pep Talk: Don’t Give Up Now! It’s still possible to f*** this up. Don’t! You are so close to EWRT 1A!
  • 4. LART end-of-quarter schedule/ Schedule change  Wednesday, Nov 29: READING presentations.  Thursday, Nov 30: NO IN-CLASS ESSAY Will attend campus hip-hop conference instead.  Monday, Dec 4: Paper 4 IN-CLASS ESSAY  Tuesday, Dec 5: Work on Paper 5 with Brian (Portfolio Conferences)  Wednesday, Dec 6: Work on Paper 5 with Kristin  Thursday, Dec 7: Portfolio Day! Potluck + fun in class  If you want my feedback on Paper 3 revision, it is due on Tuesday morning by class time.
  • 5. Paper 5: The Reflective Essay  Page 182 in your Course Reader.  This is a thesis-driven essay.  What is your thesis? A more specific version of this claim: “I learned some things in LART 211 and I know I still have some things to work on, but now I’m ready to move on to EWRT 1A.”  I recommend that you discuss  THREE things you learned, and  ONE thing that you still need to improve (and that you will work on in 1A).  Things to NOT talk about:  The CONTENT of the course. The English Department is not interested in what you learned about love and romance.  The instructors. Whether you want to praise us or criticize us, the portfolio readers do not care.  So what might you talk about? Let’s brainstorm.
  • 6. Paper 5: Structure  At least five paragraphs.  Introduction: what might you put in your intro? How might you start this essay?  Could talk about previous experience with writing.  Could talk about your feelings about writing.  Could talk about high school.  Three body paragraphs about what you learned.  Additional body paragraph about what you still need to work on (though this can be combined with the…)  Conclusion  The body paragraphs should be PIE paragraphs.  What is the POINT of each paragraph?  But what is the INFORMATION?  Examples from your own work.  Seriously: give specific examples from your papers—especially the portfolio essays.  Seriously: QUOTE YOUR OWN WORK.  Brainstorming activity:  What is your hook?  What is your thesis?  What three things have you learned?  What one thing will you work on in 1A?
  • 7. Paper 4: In-class on Tuesday  Assignment: In this essay, you will be writing a review of Aziz Ansari’s Modern Romance. You will be evaluating the book based on several criteria and then making an overall judgment about it. Your evaluation of the book should be based on three criteria:  what is good or useful about the book.  what the book could have discussed better or in more detail.  Ansari’s writing style.  Sources In doing so, you will need at least two quotes from the Ansari book and one quote from another source. These quotes must be cited in accurate MLA style.  Format Your essay should be at least six paragraphs. It should have a good title.  Sample Thesis “I think that Ansari’s Modern Romance is an admirable, though flawed, work. His exploration of the role of technology in modern dating— especially his focus on data and research—is enlightening and I think college students will find it useful; however, I am frustrated by Ansari’s exclusion of LGBT experiences and I find his relentless attempts at humor to be exhausting.”  Outline Your outline for the essay can ONLY include the following things:  Your thesis statement (two sentences or less).  Two quotes from Ansari (with MLA citations).  One quote from another source.  Continue with your grid and brainstorming today.
  • 8. Thursday Night Evening Headliners (6-9 PM in the VPAC at De Anza) include: Embodiment Project! http://www.embodimentproject.org/ Gina Rene! https://youtu.be/InZ7o9GLodE https://youtu.be/BkWRgw4-0aE Ruby Ibarra! https://youtu.be/KUXjMtNud5w https://youtu.be/1J1xAwuwm-U These are some big names! And the show is FREE! Come out and enjoy!