Voice
What is
voice?
What is voice?
 that sense of unique presence on the page
 an unmistakable something that becomes the
mark of a writer
 a way of saying things that is the writer’s own
 a sign that the piece was written by a human
being
How do writers
create voice?
How do writers create voice?
1. With words (diction)
 Choice (vocabulary)
 Arrangement (syntax)
How do writers create voice?
2. Over time
 Because of writers they’ve read
 Because of choices they’ve made
How do writers create voice?
By repeating subject matter.
Using the same point of view.
Conforming to a form.
Writing Exercise (WNB)
Take a minute and think about
your own writing.
What do you do that makes your
writing yours?
What patterns exist in your
writing?
How do I find
my voice?
How do I find my voice?
This is one of those phrases you hear
writers use.
My answer: Was it ever lost?
 You always have your voice, and it will
probably change over time.
 Concentrate on creating good writing, and
your distinctive sound will emerge.
How do I find my voice?
Don’t worry; it happens
automatically. We don’t choose it.
Seek to say something, and your
voice will follow.
Work on broadening your vocabulary
by reading.
It emerges when you write
passionately.
How do I find my voice?
You have a number of different
voices, depending on your audience.
You speak differently in class than
you do:
@home
@practice
@a party
“Voice is born from a lot of work—but not just any
words or any work will do. You have to bleed a
little. You have to shiver a little. You have to love
a lot—love your writing, love your failures, love
your courage in going on in spite of them, love
every small triumph that points toward eventual
success. You already have a voice. It’s beautiful,
it’s unique… Your job is to lead it from the
darkest of the dark places and the deepest of
the deep waters into the light of day.”
– Holly Lisle
Can I steal
others’ voices?
Can I steal others’ voices?
 Persona
 Greek for “mask”
 Pretending to be someone else
 A mask adopted by a writer
 Persona writing typically means “the creation of a
voice for something or someone very different
than the writer.”
 This can be a great way to stretch imagination and
writing style, to feed your own voice.
 Remember: No written account can be the whole
truth about an event.
Writing Exercise - Collected
 Take a look at the person in the picture you are handed.
If you don’t know them by name, that’s ok.
 List qualities you think this person would have, just by
looking at them.
 List topics you think would be important to this person.
 Adopt the persona of this person, and write about one of
the topics you just listed.
 Write a short piece from this person’s perspective.
 Remember, you are not writing your opinion of this person,
but imagining how this person sees the world.
Point of View
A close relative to voice
Point of view
 Definition: the perspective from which the
story is told
 First person - I
 Second Person - You
 Third Person – He/she
Perspective
 The vantage point from which the story is told
Writing Activity - Collected
 The situation: Your character is entering
someplace new. Write the opening of the story of
this entrance from four perspectives:
1. First person
2. Second person
3. Third person
4. The perspective of an object in/a part of the room
 What did you notice about the perspectives?
Ideas: Point of View
 Write about yourself from the perspective of
your shoes.
 Write from a baby’s perspective—in the
womb.
 Write from the perspective of an animal.
 Write form the perspective of an inanimate
object looking for his/her mate.

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    What is voice? that sense of unique presence on the page  an unmistakable something that becomes the mark of a writer  a way of saying things that is the writer’s own  a sign that the piece was written by a human being
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    How do writerscreate voice? 1. With words (diction)  Choice (vocabulary)  Arrangement (syntax)
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    How do writerscreate voice? 2. Over time  Because of writers they’ve read  Because of choices they’ve made
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    How do writerscreate voice? By repeating subject matter. Using the same point of view. Conforming to a form.
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    Writing Exercise (WNB) Takea minute and think about your own writing. What do you do that makes your writing yours? What patterns exist in your writing?
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    How do Ifind my voice?
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    How do Ifind my voice? This is one of those phrases you hear writers use. My answer: Was it ever lost?  You always have your voice, and it will probably change over time.  Concentrate on creating good writing, and your distinctive sound will emerge.
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    How do Ifind my voice? Don’t worry; it happens automatically. We don’t choose it. Seek to say something, and your voice will follow. Work on broadening your vocabulary by reading. It emerges when you write passionately.
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    How do Ifind my voice? You have a number of different voices, depending on your audience. You speak differently in class than you do: @home @practice @a party
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    “Voice is bornfrom a lot of work—but not just any words or any work will do. You have to bleed a little. You have to shiver a little. You have to love a lot—love your writing, love your failures, love your courage in going on in spite of them, love every small triumph that points toward eventual success. You already have a voice. It’s beautiful, it’s unique… Your job is to lead it from the darkest of the dark places and the deepest of the deep waters into the light of day.” – Holly Lisle
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    Can I stealothers’ voices?  Persona  Greek for “mask”  Pretending to be someone else  A mask adopted by a writer  Persona writing typically means “the creation of a voice for something or someone very different than the writer.”  This can be a great way to stretch imagination and writing style, to feed your own voice.  Remember: No written account can be the whole truth about an event.
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    Writing Exercise -Collected  Take a look at the person in the picture you are handed. If you don’t know them by name, that’s ok.  List qualities you think this person would have, just by looking at them.  List topics you think would be important to this person.  Adopt the persona of this person, and write about one of the topics you just listed.  Write a short piece from this person’s perspective.  Remember, you are not writing your opinion of this person, but imagining how this person sees the world.
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    Point of View Aclose relative to voice
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    Point of view Definition: the perspective from which the story is told  First person - I  Second Person - You  Third Person – He/she
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    Perspective  The vantagepoint from which the story is told
  • 20.
    Writing Activity -Collected  The situation: Your character is entering someplace new. Write the opening of the story of this entrance from four perspectives: 1. First person 2. Second person 3. Third person 4. The perspective of an object in/a part of the room  What did you notice about the perspectives?
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    Ideas: Point ofView  Write about yourself from the perspective of your shoes.  Write from a baby’s perspective—in the womb.  Write from the perspective of an animal.  Write form the perspective of an inanimate object looking for his/her mate.