The document summarizes feedback received on a project to improve dialogue, sound, editing, color scheme, titles, and shot variety. Suggestions were taken into consideration such as using sound bridging to match dialogue with images, faster cuts, editing music to avoid lyric problems, changing some feature titles and using two contrasting colors. Further improvements were made to dialogue clarity by ducking audio and removing noise. Praise was also received for the music choice and beat matching. A variety of shots like pull focus, close ups, and tracking shots were complimented.

1. Comments and feedback which
helped me develop my work

2. The comment about talked about anchoring and sound bridging
which I took into consideration for my final draft. I used sound bridging
to overlap clips and SHOW what characters were talking about while
they said it. It also suggests that my cuts should be faster and sharper
which I continuously edited down throughout all of my drafts.
The comments here are talking about dialogue and matching it to the
music. This became evident as I watched back on my trailer, and
consequently I used garageband to edit my soundtrack so that lyrics
were not a problem with matching to the narrative.

3. Here are some comments about my
ancillaries. Suggestions such as colour changes
and changes to the text were frequent pieces of
advice which I acknowledged and I changed
some of the feature titles and gave a good
bright colour scheme with two contrasting
colours.

4. These comments talk about how I could improve the dialogue and
therefore in the next draft I used ducking and removal of noise to
make the character speech clearer.
The comments above include praise for my music choice and beat
matching which I developed further as I realised it was a strong point
in my trailer

5. All of these comments compliment my shot types shown in my trailer.
This included shots such as a pull focus on a knife, close ups,
tracking shots and more. I even used a long shot during the chase at
the end of my trailer, as I wanted to use a large range of different
shots to demonstrate my filming ability.
LONG SHOT PULL FOCUS