1. Positives
 Good establishing shots
 Good narrative
 Speed of shots is good
 Nice Religious connotations
 Love the paranormal style shots
 Awesome Concept
 Good use of locations
 Awesome paranormal footage
 Good pace
 Really good edits and shots
 Scary sound effects
 Slow motion
 Good camera angles
 Kitchen shots are clever
 Paranormal shots = effective
 Story is easy to follow
 Car shots
 Wobbly shots
 Car Shots
 It’s scary
 The night time shots are good
 Paranormal effects look amazing
 Great tense build up
 Love the cupboard door shot
Negatives
 Titles are needed at some point
 Could make some shots slightly
shorter to pace the trailer even better
 Fill in the blank shots of black from
missing footage
 More sound effects
 Titles
 No dialogue (this was due to an
exporting error)
 You should be able to hear the
dialogue- it would look better
 The trailer needs titles
 Explain more of the narrative
 Shorter shots
 Titles are needed so we know the
name of the film
 Shorter shots
 SFX maybe?
 Audio needs to be sorted
 Edit the shots to link to the audio so it
transitions from shot to shot better
 More dramatic shots
 Text needed
 More info about the little girl
 The plot is unclear?
 More jump scares