The document provides feedback on a film trailer, listing numerous positives such as good establishing shots, narrative, speed, locations, and paranormal footage. However, it also notes some negatives including that titles are needed to identify the film, some shots could be shortened to pace the trailer better, and dialogue or more explanation of the narrative is lacking due to an exporting error.

1. Positives
 Good establishing shots
 Good narrative
 Speed of shots is good
 Nice Religious connotations
 Love the paranormal style shots
 Awesome Concept
 Good use of locations
 Awesome paranormal footage
 Good pace
 Really good edits and shots
 Scary sound effects
 Slow motion
 Good camera angles
 Kitchen shots are clever
 Paranormal shots = effective
 Story is easy to follow
 Car shots
 Wobbly shots
 Car Shots
 It’s scary
 The night time shots are good
 Paranormal effects look amazing
 Great tense build up
 Love the cupboard door shot
Negatives
 Titles are needed at some point
 Could make some shots slightly
shorter to pace the trailer even better
 Fill in the blank shots of black from
missing footage
 More sound effects
 Titles
 No dialogue (this was due to an
exporting error)
 You should be able to hear the
dialogue- it would look better
 The trailer needs titles
 Explain more of the narrative
 Shorter shots
 Titles are needed so we know the
name of the film
 Shorter shots
 SFX maybe?
 Audio needs to be sorted
 Edit the shots to link to the audio so it
transitions from shot to shot better
 More dramatic shots
 Text needed
 More info about the little girl
 The plot is unclear?
 More jump scares