The document provides feedback on a magazine cover design, noting several areas for improvement in a music magazine cover the creator will make, including making words on the cover more noticeable, standardizing font sizes, adding the price, including 10 cover lines instead of 9, and setting out the content structure in an L-shape as is typical.

1. The title font is Has the date in a
bigger then the rest smaller font, but still
of the texts. able to read.
The image I have I have used up
used is a medium to 2-3 colours.
close up and uses
direct address.
I have not put on the
The cover lines are on price of the magazine
either side of the so I need to make sure
magazine, although some I do that for my music
words are unable to read magazine.
so I know I need to make
the words more
noticeable on my music Uses a barcode
video. which is usually
always on the front
The font sizes for my cover of a magazine.
cover lines are different
sizes when they should
stick to 10pt, ill do that in
my music video.

2. Uses ‘contents’ as Weekly content has
the main heading, been used to allow the
which I have done. readers to show what is
in every issue of the
magazines.
The cover lines I have used
are in the font of 11pt, and
have used 9 cover lines
although we had to do 10, The structure of the
but I know to do that for content is not set out at
my music magazine. the ‘L’ shape which it
usually is so I now know
to do it in my music
magazine.
I have put the cover
lines next to there
page number, never The images relate
write ‘page’. with the cover lines
which are used.