Summarizing and Synthesizing
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A Beautiful Thesis StatementStep One:   Summarize each story in four sentences or less.  Try to get an accurate “big picture” of the story.Step Two: What are the connections between the two?  2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20053
A Beautiful Thesis Statement
A Beautiful Thesis StatementA single declarative sentence that states what you want you readers to know, believe or understand after having read your essay.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20055
A Beautiful Thesis StatementA thesis statement should notBe an open ended questionMention more than you write aboutBe so broad that you cannot prove itPresent multiple ideasContain conflicting ideasUse personal pronouns2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20056
Why is this not beautiful?too broad / conflicting ideas / open-ended questionThe World’s Fair in New Orleans was a disaster because of the way the press criticized the way it was run, but it was exciting for little children and had many good food booths.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20057
Why is this not beautiful?too broad / conflicting ideas / open-ended questionTV commercials are obnoxious to the person who is intent on watching a good show; on the other hand, they provide entertainment in the antics of the performers and they provide a good opportunity to take a snack break.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20058
Why is this not beautiful?too broad / conflicting ideas / open-ended questionSince politicians are constantly bombarding each other, how do they except anyone to know who is right and who is wrong?2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20059
Why is this not beautiful?too broad / conflicting ideas / open-ended questionRap music is a popular form of art because it is creative and original and because it follows the traditions of other spontaneously developed music like jazz.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200510
Why is this not beautiful?too broad / conflicting ideas / open-ended questionUnless people are conscious of pollution, the world will be destroyed by the year 2050.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200511
Choose the better thesis statementThe American steel industry has many problems.The primary problem of the American steel industry is the lack of funds to renovate outdated plants and equipment.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200512
Choose the better thesis statementHemingway’s stories helped create a new prose style by employing extensive dialogue, shorter sentences, and strong Anglo-Saxon words.Hemingway’s war stories are very good.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200513
Choose the better thesis statementThe thesis of this paper is the difficulty of solving our environmental problems.Solving our environmental problems is more difficult than many environmentalists believe.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200514
Choose the better thesis statementPeople are poisoning the environment with chemicals merely to keep their lawns clean.People use many lawn chemicals.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200515
Choose the better thesis statementStephen Hawking’s physical disability has not prevented him from becoming a world renowned physicist.Stephen Hawking’s physical disability has not prevented him from becoming a world renowned physicist, and his book is the subject of a movie.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200516
Choose the better thesis statementSocial Security and Old Age.Continuing changes in the Social Security System make it almost impossible to plan intelligently for retirement.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200517
Goldilocks & Red Riding HoodStep Three: Create a thesis that unifies the two sources. 2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200518
Vedantam’sHidden BrainFind the thesis statementFind an example of an “apt phrase” that is in quotationsFind an example of a paraphraseFind an example of a summaryFind an example of a direct quoteFind two examples of phrases that tell the reader that an idea or word are Shankear’sFind an example of plagiarism

Beautiful Thesis Statement

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    A Beautiful ThesisStatementStep One:   Summarize each story in four sentences or less. Try to get an accurate “big picture” of the story.Step Two: What are the connections between the two?  2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20053
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    A Beautiful ThesisStatementA single declarative sentence that states what you want you readers to know, believe or understand after having read your essay.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20055
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    A Beautiful ThesisStatementA thesis statement should notBe an open ended questionMention more than you write aboutBe so broad that you cannot prove itPresent multiple ideasContain conflicting ideasUse personal pronouns2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20056
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    Why is thisnot beautiful?too broad / conflicting ideas / open-ended questionThe World’s Fair in New Orleans was a disaster because of the way the press criticized the way it was run, but it was exciting for little children and had many good food booths.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20057
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    Why is thisnot beautiful?too broad / conflicting ideas / open-ended questionTV commercials are obnoxious to the person who is intent on watching a good show; on the other hand, they provide entertainment in the antics of the performers and they provide a good opportunity to take a snack break.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20058
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    Why is thisnot beautiful?too broad / conflicting ideas / open-ended questionSince politicians are constantly bombarding each other, how do they except anyone to know who is right and who is wrong?2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 20059
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    Why is thisnot beautiful?too broad / conflicting ideas / open-ended questionRap music is a popular form of art because it is creative and original and because it follows the traditions of other spontaneously developed music like jazz.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200510
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    Why is thisnot beautiful?too broad / conflicting ideas / open-ended questionUnless people are conscious of pollution, the world will be destroyed by the year 2050.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200511
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    Choose the betterthesis statementThe American steel industry has many problems.The primary problem of the American steel industry is the lack of funds to renovate outdated plants and equipment.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200512
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    Choose the betterthesis statementHemingway’s stories helped create a new prose style by employing extensive dialogue, shorter sentences, and strong Anglo-Saxon words.Hemingway’s war stories are very good.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200513
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    Choose the betterthesis statementThe thesis of this paper is the difficulty of solving our environmental problems.Solving our environmental problems is more difficult than many environmentalists believe.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200514
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    Choose the betterthesis statementPeople are poisoning the environment with chemicals merely to keep their lawns clean.People use many lawn chemicals.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200515
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    Choose the betterthesis statementStephen Hawking’s physical disability has not prevented him from becoming a world renowned physicist.Stephen Hawking’s physical disability has not prevented him from becoming a world renowned physicist, and his book is the subject of a movie.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200516
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    Choose the betterthesis statementSocial Security and Old Age.Continuing changes in the Social Security System make it almost impossible to plan intelligently for retirement.2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200517
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    Goldilocks & RedRiding HoodStep Three: Create a thesis that unifies the two sources. 2/4/2010Template copyright www.brainybetty.com 200518
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    Vedantam’sHidden BrainFind thethesis statementFind an example of an “apt phrase” that is in quotationsFind an example of a paraphraseFind an example of a summaryFind an example of a direct quoteFind two examples of phrases that tell the reader that an idea or word are Shankear’sFind an example of plagiarism