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base on my story (attached file below)
Rewrite your story for clarity/structure/grammar/etc. Also make
sure you address any issues we discussed in the storytelling
lecture.
Make the stories more fun to read. If there is anything about a
story that is boring or confusing, rewrite it. This may include
unnecessary or missing scenes, too many characters, tedious or
confusing parts, etc. Additionally, point out any
issues of clarity
(
all the material covered in the clarity lectures). Point out any
grammar issues you notice too, but don't focus on them.
Do not change the main idea of the story.
Tips:
The story is their story, not yours:
+ the story is definitely not about the interview process
+ the story probably doesn't even involve you
Stories can take place over a lifetime, but cant be the same as
describing the lifetime (think of history class)
Stories should let us understand the characters
+Give them a voice, don't just describe what happened to them
Dont end the story with a moral lesson: it doesn't feel like real
things happing to real people.
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