1. RAHEL

2. SHOTLIST K
Time Scene Shot Description Location Character Art Dept/ Prop Costume Notes
1-9 Laura walking Establishing shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
to her house house
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
Shopping bags and black shoes
holding bags
10 Laura opening Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
the door hand
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat
Shopping bags and black shoes
11 Seeing her Over the shoulder shot Costumes- Wig Light blue
opening the of her opening the
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
Shopping bags and black shoes
door door
12 She walks in Long shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
coming in
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat
Shopping bags and black shoes
14 She takes her Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
shoes off. shoes
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
Shopping bags and black shoes
16 She walks to the Long-shot of her walking to Costumes- Wig Light blue
cupaboard the cupboard Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
Shopping bags and black shoes
18 She takes the Long mid- shot of her taking Costumes- Wig Light blue
book out of the the book out . Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
bag. Shopping bags and black shoes
19-23 She see’s a note A close-up shot of the note Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
Shopping bags and black shoes

3. Time Scene Shot
SHOTLIST
Location Character Art Dept/ Costume
K
Note
Description Prop s
24 She looks all Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
confused face Shopping bags and black shoes
25 She gets A extreme-close up Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat
scared shot her face Shopping bags and black shoes
26 She drops A close-up shot of Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
the book on the book Shopping bags and black shoes
the floor he
27-29 She walks to A long shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat
the walking to the Shopping bags and black shoes
cupboard cupboard
30 She is Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
looking face in fear Shopping bags and black shoes
scared
31 She is about ¾ shot of her about Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
to open the to open the Shopping bags and black shoes
cupboard cupboard
32-33 Her holding Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
the door holding the door Shopping bags and black shoes
handle handle
34-35 She looks Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
relieved face Shopping bags and black shoes

4. Time Scene Shot Location Character Art Dept/ Costume K
Note
Description Prop s
36-37 She looks at Over the shoulder Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
herself in shot of her looking Shopping bags and black shoes
the mirror in the mirror
38 She does Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat
her hair face Shopping bags and black shoes
39 Still doing her Over the shoulder shot Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
hair of her looking in the
Shopping bags and black shoes
mirror
40-42 She see’s Over the shoulder Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat
two people shot of her looking Shopping bags and black shoes
behind her in the mirror
43 She gets Extreme-close up of Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
frightened her face Shopping bags and black shoes
44-45 she hides Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
underneath underneath the Shopping bags and black shoes
the sheets sheet
46-47 she is Extreme-close up of Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
scared and her face Shopping bags and black shoes
worried
48 She gets Close-up shot of Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
shocked face Shopping bags and black shoes

5. Time Scene Shot Location Character Art Dept/ Costume K
Note
Description Prop s
49 You see these Close-up shot of Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
two people their faces Shopping bags and black shoes
again
50-52 They run to Full shot of them Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
the running to the Shopping bags and black shoes
cupboard cupboard
53 The Close-up shot of the Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
cupboard is cupboard Shopping bags and black shoes
closed
Laura looks Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
44-45 Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat
scared face Shopping bags and black shoes
46 -47 Full shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
She then Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
gets up getting up Shopping bags and black shoes
48-52 She walks to Close-up of her legs Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
the walking Shopping bags and black shoes
cupboard
She walks to Long shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
53-54 Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
the walking to the Shopping bags and black shoes
cupboard cupboard
She look Close-up of her face Costumes- Wig Light blue
55-56 Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
scared Shopping bags and black shoes

6. SHOTLIST K
Time Scene Shot Location Character Art Dept/ Costume Note
Description Prop s
57 The door Full shot of the Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
opens by cupboard Shopping bags and black shoes
itself
58 She is Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
terrified face Shopping bags and black shoes
She sees' a Mid-shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
59-60 Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
noted and picking up a note Shopping bags and black shoes
goes inside
to pick it up
The door Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue
61 Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat
closes and face and the two Shopping bags and black shoes
shuts her in people behind her.

7. Kaya
Enigma - How did they do it? L
Insidious opening sequence
Mysterious observer
They show a point of view of someone
walking around the house at night with
a shadowed hint on the window
Mysterious/scary reflection
They show a refection of the female
making the audience want to know
who she is and why she is there at
night watching over people
Credits and shots
During the credits they show shots of things for
example the inside of the house making the
audience watch more in why these are significant
and the titles because they portray ghost like
things making the audience want to see more
about ghosts

8. Kaya
Enigma L
How are we creating enigma in our opening sequences…
• By not telling the audience why these girls are haunting this room so their
audience will want to find out more
• The audience will want to watch more to see what relevance the dolls
have to this closet/house and why they’re always coming back
• At the ending of the opening sequence we build a climax to a sudden
shock/scare getting the audience excited to watch more
• Finally to see what happens to Laura in the closet and further of how the
ghosts disturb her

9. Kaya
Enigma L
How have we improved from draft 1?...
• Since draft one we have improved greatly on how we can create enigma.
• We have gone through many ideas and various genres to create a very
creative and versatile mind to what excited and interests our target audince
• By creating a questionnaire for our target audience to see what they find
interesting and what they don’t
• Researching type of films and themes or concept grabs the audiences
attention to watch more
• Watching many different genre of films opening sequences to understand
what makes enigma and realising what does not

10. Sanel
Target Audience M
Age – 15 – 17
Gender – Female and Male
Ethnicity – British
Location – United Kingdom
Interests/Hobbies – local groups, precious memories
Lifestyle – Social, attends college/school, quite open minded
Why would our target audience be interested in our idea/plot?
• Its based on real life, in London, so it will be familiar with the audience
• Our target audience will be interested to learn about how spirits can play with our mind
throughout the film and interested of being scared.
• The film is based in modern time and youth culture, use of slang in a closed narrative so they
can connect and relate to what they see in the film and leave thinking about the
consequences

11. Sanel
Target Audience M
Why would our target audience be interested in our film because of its form?
• The use of editing in building up tension will interest the target audience, they may find
interesting when something is about to occur.
• The use of suspension type music will keep the audience at the edge of their seat
imagining themselves in certain situations
Why would your target audience be interested in your film because of genre/conventions?
• The target audience would be interested in how different spirits can act and play with
your mind so hopefully it would be interest them.
• The thrill of watching it would constantly keep the target audience interested at the edge
of their seats
• The target audience could hopefully relate to the character while being interested
imaging themselves in them kind of situations

12. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
M
Feedback we received from our
target audience
Zoe

13. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
M
Feedback we received from our
target audience
Sinead

14. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
M
Feedback we received from our
target audience
Xheni

15. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
M
Feedback we received from our
target audience
Sayana

16. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
M
Feedback we received from our
target audience
Susan

17. Sanel and Kaya
M
Feedback we received from our
target audience
Marcin

18. Summary of what our target audience said M
Overall most of them do enjoy watching thriller
films as they like the thought of being scared.
Also they find it interesting to see what the
spirits will do next to the character in while film.
Also none of our audience thought that our
opening sequence was complicated and they
liked our theme concept. However some said
that would like us to film in the dark.

19. Kaya
Characters N
How have you developed your characters since draft 1?
• We developed our character to be less dark and a lot more relatable to a wider range of
our target audience
• We made the character one age rather than a variety so its less confusing
• The clown and doll have been developed into a spiritual characters who rather than look
like the dolls to 2 girls with a doll and clown toys.

20. Kaya
Characters N
Actor 1: Character 1:
Sanel Homer Laura Hibbitt
Age: Age:
17 19

21. Kaya
Characters N
Costume and props
Mascara
Blush
Ghost book
Blue jeans Pink top

22. Slide not improved
Kaya
Characters N
Mise –en-scene
Name – Laura Hibbit
Gender – Female
Age – 19
Costume –jeans, top
Props – None
Make-up – Mascara, tired eyes, blush
Stereotype – Normal smart girl, average
Facial expression – Scared, shock
Body language – Gentle, awkward
Representation – Typical teenage youth. A smart girl who’s abit
popular around her area

23. Kaya
Characters N
Actor 2: Character 2:
Gia Alveranga Cilia Elizabeth Carter
Age: Age:
17 73

24. Kaya
Characters N
Inspirational pictures
Maids dress Pale white face with
black circles around
eyes

25. Kaya
Characters N
Costume and props
£3.19 £1.99
- White Maid dress

26. Kaya
Characters N
Mise –en-scene
Name – Cilia Elizabeth Carter
Gender – Female
Age – 73
Costume – White dress
Props – None
Make-up – Pale black eyes
Stereotype – Little girl
Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling
Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face
Representation – A dead woman from the 1800’s

27. Kaya
Characters N
Actor 3: Character 3:
Mary Elizabeth Carter
Rahel Fasil
Age: Age:
16 52

28. Kaya
Characters N
Inspirational pictures
Maids dress Pale white face with
black circles around
eyes

29. Kaya
Characters N
Costume and props
Maids dress
£3.19 £1.99
- White

30. Kaya
Characters N
Mise –en-scene
Name – Mary Elizabeth Carter
Gender – Female
Age – 52
Costume – White dress
Props – None
Make-up – Pale black eyes
Stereotype – Little girl
Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling
Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face
Representation – A dead woman from the 1800’s