The document provides a list of shots from a film with identified problems and their assigned severity levels out of 10. Suggested solutions are also provided to address issues such as clips being too long, elements like a t-shirt or hands distracting from suspense, or timing issues that reduce dramatic effect. The solutions generally involve shortening or re-timing clips, dubbing over audio, leaving elements in view longer, or re-shooting parts of scenes.

1. Shot Problem Severity (out of 10) Solution
Opening moon shot Tilt through darkness 3 Cross fade to cut out middle
little bit long section of clip
Talking in graveyard 1.‘silly’ cant be 6 1.Dub over silly talking with
(2 shots) emphasised ‘stupid’ or re-shoot with
2.Smile after talking correct speech
2.cut clip earlier
2 people vanishing Shadows re-appear for 6 Leave clip overlay in for
a small time longer and fade to black
sooner
Shot of 2 Very long 5 Time better that it does not
unconscious people go slow motion for as long at
end; try to match with trees
as pass speed changes
Pan to reveal killer Pans past head, shows 4 Zoom into head earlier
hoody space next to it,
removes from the
suspense of the
character
Killer from behind at T-shirt hanging out 6 Re-film clip
end of quick cuts under hoody, takes
away from the
scariness. Right hand
also not staying still
Crash zoom at end Zooms in for too long, 5 Shorten clip before speeding
takes away from the up
scariness as can see
the face coming
Website coming up Out of sync with 2 Re-time in editing
at end music, doesn’t give as
dramatic effect of it
arriving