The document contains feedback from multiple people on a photo shoot for an album. Key points included: - The framing including parts of props was liked, as was the contrast between skull and fur blanket. - The model looked too elegant and didn't reflect a fierce personality, a more dominant pose was suggested. - The eyes stood out and looked intimidating but a more feisty expression was needed. - The mosaic effect made the photo more interesting for the album.

1. PHOTO
FEEDBACK

2. Olivia Ewin:
I really like the framing of the
shot as it includes a small
part of each prop. I also like
the contract between the edgy
& rough skull and the soft fu-
ry blanket.
Amelia Ward:
I think she looks a bit too elegant
for the album title and doesn’t re-
ally reflect a ‘fierce’ personality.
The photo would be better with a
more dominant pose, perhaps ly-
ing on her front instead of her
back.
Sandeep Chagger:
I think the eyes really
stand out well and help to
make her look quite intim-
idating. However, I think
it would look better if she
come across more feisty.

3. Georgia Coppen:
I like the way you’ve edited
it to define her features
more, I also like the framing
as you can still see part of
her dress.
Josh Bastin:
I think it’s hard to work out
what she is holding as you
can’t really see the detail on
the skull and so it seems a bit
irrelevant. But the overall idea
is good.
Max Clarke:
I like the use of the
mosaic effect, it makes
the photo more inter-
esting and varied for
the album.

4. Joe Hart:
I think the use of a skull was a
really good idea for your album,
it kind of suggests a desert feel,
keeping in with the wild theme.
This photo works well because of
the clear focus and detail.
Our thoughts:
Taking all this feedback into con-
sideration, we’ve looked back on
the photos and agree that some of
the photos do not successfully re-
flect the album title and the artists
character. However, although her
actual facial expression isn’t fierce,
we were looking to achieve a more
subtle undertone of ferocity com-
ing from the eyes which are the
main focus throughout our photos.