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Deasil
Street
4.1
The paper girl decided to skip Number 6 from her route today, the couple who lived
there were having a massive row out front.
         Pablo had snuck out to work that morning, and returned to find Jen had not
         calmed down at all. He had never seen her this furious.
He was genuinely shocked
when she told him their
marriage was over, and he had
to pack his bags. She’d
forgiven him before, and he
honestly thought she would
do again.
When he suggested she
think about it, Jen made
it clear in no uncertain
terms that she would
never regret this decision.
They were over.
Pablo made himself scarce, and
called Warren to a place in town.
He explained his
predicament, and Warren was
secretly not surprised in the
slightest. Pablo was a good
friend, but a terrible husband.
They went out for
drinks later that
evening, to say
goodbye. Pablo told
Warren he was done
with the countryside.
Full of bravado, he
claimed to be moving
away to the big city, for
a better life.
But Warren had a
hunch that deep
down, Pablo didn’t
really want to go.
Pablo packed his things up, readying to
leave the home he and Jen had bought
together.
Jen told him his taxi had
arrived, but he couldn’t help but
try and change her mind one last
time.
Just as he had got his
best apologetic face on,
he got a call.
He answered it without
even checking who it
was, unaware that to
Jen that was incredibly
rude and made it clear
where his priorities lay.
But then he started pushing
all the right buttons, making
her feel guilty. Making her
feel she might never find
anyone else…
She did know she was better off
                                          with him than on her own? She
                                          was getting on, if she tried to find
                                          someone else she might never
                                          have children.




She would have to start over in her
career, years away from politics would
render any experience she had dated and
worthless. How would she support
herself?
But when he said she
had never been very
good at her job in the
first place, Jen
snapped back to
reality. She had been
amazing at her job,
everyone had been
shocked and appalled
when she’d given it up.
He was talking rubbish,
as he always did. She
was well rid of this
man who claimed to
love her.
Pablo left the house
with his ears burning,
who knew the sweet
Jen knew such
language?!
He drove off without looking back. If he
looked back, she would have won. He was
determined to make the best of this, and act
like it was his own idea.
Alone, Jen allowed
herself a few tears for
what might have been.
She had loved him so
much. Once.

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4.11

  • 2. The paper girl decided to skip Number 6 from her route today, the couple who lived there were having a massive row out front. Pablo had snuck out to work that morning, and returned to find Jen had not calmed down at all. He had never seen her this furious.
  • 3. He was genuinely shocked when she told him their marriage was over, and he had to pack his bags. She’d forgiven him before, and he honestly thought she would do again.
  • 4. When he suggested she think about it, Jen made it clear in no uncertain terms that she would never regret this decision. They were over.
  • 5. Pablo made himself scarce, and called Warren to a place in town. He explained his predicament, and Warren was secretly not surprised in the slightest. Pablo was a good friend, but a terrible husband.
  • 6. They went out for drinks later that evening, to say goodbye. Pablo told Warren he was done with the countryside. Full of bravado, he claimed to be moving away to the big city, for a better life.
  • 7. But Warren had a hunch that deep down, Pablo didn’t really want to go.
  • 8. Pablo packed his things up, readying to leave the home he and Jen had bought together.
  • 9. Jen told him his taxi had arrived, but he couldn’t help but try and change her mind one last time.
  • 10. Just as he had got his best apologetic face on, he got a call. He answered it without even checking who it was, unaware that to Jen that was incredibly rude and made it clear where his priorities lay.
  • 11. But then he started pushing all the right buttons, making her feel guilty. Making her feel she might never find anyone else…
  • 12. She did know she was better off with him than on her own? She was getting on, if she tried to find someone else she might never have children. She would have to start over in her career, years away from politics would render any experience she had dated and worthless. How would she support herself?
  • 13. But when he said she had never been very good at her job in the first place, Jen snapped back to reality. She had been amazing at her job, everyone had been shocked and appalled when she’d given it up. He was talking rubbish, as he always did. She was well rid of this man who claimed to love her.
  • 14. Pablo left the house with his ears burning, who knew the sweet Jen knew such language?!
  • 15. He drove off without looking back. If he looked back, she would have won. He was determined to make the best of this, and act like it was his own idea.
  • 16. Alone, Jen allowed herself a few tears for what might have been. She had loved him so much. Once.