CLASS 6
EWRT 1A
AGENDA
• Grammar: When to use “Me” and when to use “Myself.”
• The Hunger Games: What is your take on the game so
  far?
• Writing Discussion: “Exploring your present
  perspective” and “The Thesis Statement”
 • In-Class Writing: Finding your present perspective
                   Formulating a Thesis
• Group Work/Discussion: Bragg: “Analyzing Writing
  Strategies #1 p 36: Comparing
• In-Class Writing: Similes and Metaphors
• Preparing the complete draft: SMG 52-53
Me versus Myself
                 Me                                 Myself
• Me is an object pronoun, which       • Myself is a reflexive or stressed
    means that it refers to the         pronoun, which means that,
    person that the action of a verb    generally speaking, it should be
    is being done to, or to which a     used in conjunction with the
    preposition refers.
                                        subject pronoun I, not instead of
                                        the object pronoun me.
• They want me to study more.
• Tell me a story.
                                       • I bought myself a car.
• Between you and me, he's right.
• Carol wants to meet with John        • I myself started the company.
  and me tomorrow.                     • I did the laundry by myself.
• The book was written entirely by     • I feel like myself again.
  me.                                  • Tired of waiting, I just did it
• Please call Hillary or me with        myself.
  any questions.
The Strategy Continued: Explore Your Present Perspective


 • Looking back, how do you feel about this event? If you understand it
     differently now than you did then, what is the difference?
 •   What do your actions at the time of the event say about the kind of person
     you were then? How would you respond to the same event if it occurred
     today?
 •   Can looking at the event historically or culturally help explain what
     happened? For example, did you upset racial, gender, or religious
     expectations? Did you feel torn between identities or cultures? Did you feel
     out of place?
 •   Do you see now that there was a conflict underlying the event? For example,
     were you struggling with contradictory desires? Did you feel pressured by
     others? Were you desires and rights in conflict with someone else’s? Was
     the event about power or responsibility.
 •   Pause to reflect on what you have written about your present perspective.
     Then write another sentence or two, commenting on the event’s significance
     as you look back on it
Goal: Formulating a Tentative Thesis
• Readers do not expect you to begin your narrative essay
 with the kind of explicit thesis statement typical of
 argumentative or explanatory writing. If you do decide to
 tell readers explicitly why the event was meaningful or
 significant, you will most likely do so as you tell the story,
 by commenting on or evaluating what happened, instead
 of announcing the significance at the beginning. Keep in
 mind that you are not obliged to tell readers the
 significance, but you must show it through the way you tell
 the story.
The Strategy
• Review what you wrote for Reflecting on the
 Event’s Significance, and add another two or
 three sentences, not necessarily
 summarizing what you already have written
 but extending your insights into the
 significance of the event, what it meant to
 you at the time, and what it means to you
 now. These sentences must necessarily be
 speculative and tentative because you may
 not fully understand the event’s significance
 in your life
Bragg: “Analyzing Writing Strategies #1 p 36
• Read “Analyzing Writing Strategies” #1
  aloud.
• Get into groups of three or four, and locate
  the comparisons in paragraphs 1, 3, 7, 9,
  13, and 16.
• As a group, pick the one you think works
  well and make notes about why.
• What impression do these comparisons
  give you of the young Bragg and the event
  he is writing about?
METAPHOR: A LITERARY FIGURE OF SPEECH THAT DESCRIBES A
SUBJECT BY ASSERTING THAT IT IS, ON SOME POINT OF
COMPARISON, THE SAME AS ANOTHER OTHERWISE UNRELATED
OBJECT.

      ALL THE WORLD’S A STAGE

SIMILE: A FIGURE OF SPEECH THAT DIRECTLY COMPARES TWO
DIFFERENT THINGS, USUALLY BY EMPLOYING THE WORDS “LIKE”
OR “AS.”

      I’VE BEEN WORKING LIKE A DOG
Formulate 5-7 metaphors or similes appropriate to your
essay.
SMG 52-53


Preparing
the
complete
draft
HOMEWORK
• Read: Catch up on HG (You should be
  through chapter 12.
• Write: Complete Draft of Essay #2
• Blog Prompt #5: Journal
• Study: Vocabulary Review (1-12)
• Bring: Three clean, complete copies of your
  draft; SMG

1 a class 6

  • 1.
  • 2.
    AGENDA • Grammar: Whento use “Me” and when to use “Myself.” • The Hunger Games: What is your take on the game so far? • Writing Discussion: “Exploring your present perspective” and “The Thesis Statement” • In-Class Writing: Finding your present perspective Formulating a Thesis • Group Work/Discussion: Bragg: “Analyzing Writing Strategies #1 p 36: Comparing • In-Class Writing: Similes and Metaphors • Preparing the complete draft: SMG 52-53
  • 3.
    Me versus Myself Me Myself • Me is an object pronoun, which • Myself is a reflexive or stressed means that it refers to the pronoun, which means that, person that the action of a verb generally speaking, it should be is being done to, or to which a used in conjunction with the preposition refers. subject pronoun I, not instead of the object pronoun me. • They want me to study more. • Tell me a story. • I bought myself a car. • Between you and me, he's right. • Carol wants to meet with John • I myself started the company. and me tomorrow. • I did the laundry by myself. • The book was written entirely by • I feel like myself again. me. • Tired of waiting, I just did it • Please call Hillary or me with myself. any questions.
  • 4.
    The Strategy Continued:Explore Your Present Perspective • Looking back, how do you feel about this event? If you understand it differently now than you did then, what is the difference? • What do your actions at the time of the event say about the kind of person you were then? How would you respond to the same event if it occurred today? • Can looking at the event historically or culturally help explain what happened? For example, did you upset racial, gender, or religious expectations? Did you feel torn between identities or cultures? Did you feel out of place? • Do you see now that there was a conflict underlying the event? For example, were you struggling with contradictory desires? Did you feel pressured by others? Were you desires and rights in conflict with someone else’s? Was the event about power or responsibility. • Pause to reflect on what you have written about your present perspective. Then write another sentence or two, commenting on the event’s significance as you look back on it
  • 5.
    Goal: Formulating aTentative Thesis • Readers do not expect you to begin your narrative essay with the kind of explicit thesis statement typical of argumentative or explanatory writing. If you do decide to tell readers explicitly why the event was meaningful or significant, you will most likely do so as you tell the story, by commenting on or evaluating what happened, instead of announcing the significance at the beginning. Keep in mind that you are not obliged to tell readers the significance, but you must show it through the way you tell the story.
  • 6.
    The Strategy • Reviewwhat you wrote for Reflecting on the Event’s Significance, and add another two or three sentences, not necessarily summarizing what you already have written but extending your insights into the significance of the event, what it meant to you at the time, and what it means to you now. These sentences must necessarily be speculative and tentative because you may not fully understand the event’s significance in your life
  • 7.
    Bragg: “Analyzing WritingStrategies #1 p 36 • Read “Analyzing Writing Strategies” #1 aloud. • Get into groups of three or four, and locate the comparisons in paragraphs 1, 3, 7, 9, 13, and 16. • As a group, pick the one you think works well and make notes about why. • What impression do these comparisons give you of the young Bragg and the event he is writing about?
  • 8.
    METAPHOR: A LITERARYFIGURE OF SPEECH THAT DESCRIBES A SUBJECT BY ASSERTING THAT IT IS, ON SOME POINT OF COMPARISON, THE SAME AS ANOTHER OTHERWISE UNRELATED OBJECT. ALL THE WORLD’S A STAGE SIMILE: A FIGURE OF SPEECH THAT DIRECTLY COMPARES TWO DIFFERENT THINGS, USUALLY BY EMPLOYING THE WORDS “LIKE” OR “AS.” I’VE BEEN WORKING LIKE A DOG Formulate 5-7 metaphors or similes appropriate to your essay.
  • 9.
  • 10.
    HOMEWORK • Read: Catchup on HG (You should be through chapter 12. • Write: Complete Draft of Essay #2 • Blog Prompt #5: Journal • Study: Vocabulary Review (1-12) • Bring: Three clean, complete copies of your draft; SMG