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AGENDA
Prepare your final draft of essay
#2
Read The Hunger Games
Study Vocabulary
Journal #4
Check list for final draft: Parts and Organization
 The Beginning
• Set the frame: Introduce your long quotation; explanation;
transition; thesis
 The Body
• Exposition: descriptions of places, people, and dialogue
worked into a narrative form.
• The Rising Action: Events or tension leading to the climax
• The Climax: The emotional high point! (short and long
sentences for suspense)
• The Falling Action: Tensions subside
 The Ending
• The Resolution
• The significance of the event
• The framed conclusion
Check list for final draft: The Basic Features
 A Well-Told Story
• Construct a narrative outline
• Add specific narrative actions
• Use prepositional phrases
• A Sentence Strategy: Time Transitions and Verb Tenses
 A Vivid Presentation of Places and People
• Use concrete naming and specific detailing
• Describe the place
• Recall key people
 An Indication of the Event’s Significance
• Use showing and telling
• Reflect on the conflict and its significance
• Create a dominant impression
Check list for final draft: Skills and Strategies
Framing: Have you tied the end of your essay back to the beginning?
Sentence Length: Have you used short and long sentences to build
suspense?
Similes and Metaphors: Have you used comparisons to help tell your
story?
Dialogue: Have you used conversation to show the important parts of
your story?
Transitions: Have you used general transitions to connect pieces of
your story?
Temporal Transitions: Have you used time transitions so the reader
can understand the order in which the events occurred?
Check for misused words: Have you reread your essay carefully to
make sure you are using the correct words?
Preparing the
complete draft
Read pages 52-53
in the St.
Martin’s Guide
to help you
prepare your
final draft.
Read your draft
aloud to check
for errors!
BRING TWO CLEAN COPIES OF YOUR COMPLETE
DRAFT TO CLASS ON MONDAY
HOMEWORK
Read: Read HG (through chapter 15).
Post #16 Complete Draft of Essay #2
Post #17: Journal #4
What questions would you most like to ask the
tributes in the interview? What questions do you
think the capitol would NOT want asked in front of a
live audience and television audience?
Study: Vocabulary (1-12)
Bring: Two clean, complete copies of your draft; SMG

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  • 1.
  • 2. AGENDA Prepare your final draft of essay #2 Read The Hunger Games Study Vocabulary Journal #4
  • 3. Check list for final draft: Parts and Organization  The Beginning • Set the frame: Introduce your long quotation; explanation; transition; thesis  The Body • Exposition: descriptions of places, people, and dialogue worked into a narrative form. • The Rising Action: Events or tension leading to the climax • The Climax: The emotional high point! (short and long sentences for suspense) • The Falling Action: Tensions subside  The Ending • The Resolution • The significance of the event • The framed conclusion
  • 4. Check list for final draft: The Basic Features  A Well-Told Story • Construct a narrative outline • Add specific narrative actions • Use prepositional phrases • A Sentence Strategy: Time Transitions and Verb Tenses  A Vivid Presentation of Places and People • Use concrete naming and specific detailing • Describe the place • Recall key people  An Indication of the Event’s Significance • Use showing and telling • Reflect on the conflict and its significance • Create a dominant impression
  • 5. Check list for final draft: Skills and Strategies Framing: Have you tied the end of your essay back to the beginning? Sentence Length: Have you used short and long sentences to build suspense? Similes and Metaphors: Have you used comparisons to help tell your story? Dialogue: Have you used conversation to show the important parts of your story? Transitions: Have you used general transitions to connect pieces of your story? Temporal Transitions: Have you used time transitions so the reader can understand the order in which the events occurred? Check for misused words: Have you reread your essay carefully to make sure you are using the correct words?
  • 6. Preparing the complete draft Read pages 52-53 in the St. Martin’s Guide to help you prepare your final draft. Read your draft aloud to check for errors! BRING TWO CLEAN COPIES OF YOUR COMPLETE DRAFT TO CLASS ON MONDAY
  • 7. HOMEWORK Read: Read HG (through chapter 15). Post #16 Complete Draft of Essay #2 Post #17: Journal #4 What questions would you most like to ask the tributes in the interview? What questions do you think the capitol would NOT want asked in front of a live audience and television audience? Study: Vocabulary (1-12) Bring: Two clean, complete copies of your draft; SMG