SlideShare a Scribd company logo
1 of 4
Download to read offline
1
Moon Girls of Golden Desert Sing for Secret Love
By Seyid O. SEYID, Mauritanian PhD researcher
“A bright night in the midst of a dark day. In this place of witnessing, which is the
light of manifestation I have much to say, but silence is best” - Mahmoūd
Shabestarī, 14th century Persian Sufi poet.
This is the real story of the pain of love in plain poetic expressions that you never
read in a romantic book or watch in a thrilling movie. It is moving to grasp the
nature of a cultural habit that is vanishing in the face of the technical invasion.
In the happy night of heart light, Arab girls sing for secret love while hiding from
their Mauritanian community’s eyes. It is the ritual of overwhelming love invading
the ultimate sprit without daring to dream of seeing or touching the loved one that
is depriving you from quiet sleeping in a desert of dreadful silence. The nomad girls
and daughters of the moon start their night rhythm by creating their lyrics in open
competition and fan conversation. Meeting in strategic open areas, they choose
their favorite places in valleys, dunes, mountains or in a palm tree oasis. Natural
beauty and nature’s pure elements are the moon girls’ best friends to trust with
their sacred secret. Commencing the natural party, the group star leader sings the
2
opening lines for the band members to repeat the song words collectively. In this
exciting moment, they sing, dance, play traditional drums and clap hands with a
lolling sound to the accompanying music. If there is no music, they invent their
own, coming from a mixture of the beauty of the human voice and the whispers of
nature wonders. They make their drums with their rough, tough hands that are
used to serve both family and the entire community during the darkest days of
domestic labor.
Every one of the female circle sitting around the drum has to tell her poem that she
is creating or memorizing from her favorite hearings. Then, she has to sing it as
role distributions go on until the late hours …it could be 22 hours or midnight,
there is no exact date or time in the desert culture. It is an authentic culture of oral
traditions. Generally, there is no writing or reading in the rural communities but
they are highly educated despite being illiterate. The chosen words reveal the secret
of their education pattern. You have to memorize what you are hearing from your
educational sources as writing and documentation are rare luxuries in their
context. Any exception is a confirmation of the general rule in the land of oral
traditions.
Romantically, nostalgic love’s sweetest verses are the favorite repeated themes of
the moon girls who regularly celebrate their brightest night unless a calamity takes
place in their neighborhood. The game rule says it is strictly forbidden to name
your Aden love, even in the circle of your girls’ trusted bands. The name of the
romantic lyrics is another secret to keep for life. Otherwise, the moon poet girls
3
could lose their freedom of expression forever. They would be condemned by their
families and communities. Emotionally, the love prince mentioned by indirect
implication should never know that he is praised in the females’ poems of last light.
If he gets such news that his charming, attractive persona is inspiring his
neighborhood girls, he will rapidly change from spontaneous spirit into an
arrogant personality to be avoided for his remaining living days. Singing lyrical
rhythm of the poetic night continues until they get sleepy. The departure indicator
is physical exhaustion. Sleeping in the open white or black tents is the only available
remedy. The tents of the girls are open from all directions but their minds are
closed to community desires of social norms.
Platonic, happy and symbolic codifications are the main characteristics of
Mauritanian female poets. It is shameful in social traditions to be known as a poet
praising her love using her own lyrics. The poem is her psychological release to
express painful emotions when she is waking up late, feeling lonely, suffering from
invisible love or the shock of oblivion in a silent desert. The night female lyrics
should go to the public domain as unidentifiable recitations. The girls are only
allowed to see the images of their secret love prince in the nightly superficial
dreams.
For example, here are some lines of female lyrics that lack the resilient musicality
which is lost in translation from Arabic into English. This fault is mine, not the
female writers. "It is not possible to hate the blue in dry years." “It’s obvious to
love green beauty especially in dry seasons.” The following examples are
simplified to economize on space and reduce redundant explanations:
"Be patient my soul, rejoice in pain"
"I would love you to breathe the breeze"
4
"As his teeth are brushed, no army can push me from his smiling lips"
"How to forget him, he is living in my eyes"
"His smile revives even dead bones"
“Unreturned night to remember my secret love baby
"I have to repeat all prayers as I recall my love in my many prayers”
“Mine travelled West, Lord saves all travelers who go West"
"My soul never forgets his words of evening whispers"
The Sufi poet, Mahmoud Shabestari, has written his mystic rhythm in 1311 texts
entitled The Secret Rose Garden. The moon poet girls chanted with golden voices
for free love to come in their secret love universe. The Mauritanian, creative, late-
French pen Habibe Mahfoud, wrote that in his country “time does not advance and
love never returns. If time advances, love will never go away.”
In a word, we are all moons with the darkest character to turn into the brightest
values. As the great American author Mark Twain put it, “Everyone is a moon,
and has a dark side which he never shows to anybody.”

More Related Content

What's hot

The Prelude - William Wordsworth
The Prelude - William WordsworthThe Prelude - William Wordsworth
The Prelude - William Wordsworthmissvfarrimond
 
Analysis of the poem, my last duchess in the psycho analytical framework
Analysis of the poem, my last duchess in the psycho analytical frameworkAnalysis of the poem, my last duchess in the psycho analytical framework
Analysis of the poem, my last duchess in the psycho analytical frameworkDayamani Surya
 
Victorian Poet Christina rossetti's Poetic Characteristics
Victorian Poet Christina rossetti's Poetic CharacteristicsVictorian Poet Christina rossetti's Poetic Characteristics
Victorian Poet Christina rossetti's Poetic CharacteristicsMohsin Malik
 
Poetry for freshman students
Poetry for freshman studentsPoetry for freshman students
Poetry for freshman studentsWillow Pangket
 
The last ride together by R.Browning Dr. Nusrat J. Arshad
The last ride together by R.Browning  Dr. Nusrat J. ArshadThe last ride together by R.Browning  Dr. Nusrat J. Arshad
The last ride together by R.Browning Dr. Nusrat J. Arshadjazan university
 
John onne metaphyscal frk niazi
John onne metaphyscal frk niaziJohn onne metaphyscal frk niazi
John onne metaphyscal frk niaziSCHOOL
 
Little Red Cap annotations - Carol Ann Duffy
Little Red Cap annotations - Carol Ann DuffyLittle Red Cap annotations - Carol Ann Duffy
Little Red Cap annotations - Carol Ann DuffyKatie-Ann Sheehan
 
La belle dame sans merci
La belle dame sans merciLa belle dame sans merci
La belle dame sans mercinpaliterature
 
A Mother in a Refugee Camp
A Mother in a Refugee CampA Mother in a Refugee Camp
A Mother in a Refugee Campnpaliterature
 
Types of Poetry
Types of PoetryTypes of Poetry
Types of Poetryjconklin
 
Map Woman Analysis
Map Woman AnalysisMap Woman Analysis
Map Woman AnalysisMrs McMinn
 
Shakespeare -sonnet_130_pp
Shakespeare  -sonnet_130_ppShakespeare  -sonnet_130_pp
Shakespeare -sonnet_130_ppEmma Sinclair
 

What's hot (20)

Sonnet 1
Sonnet 1Sonnet 1
Sonnet 1
 
The Prelude - William Wordsworth
The Prelude - William WordsworthThe Prelude - William Wordsworth
The Prelude - William Wordsworth
 
Analysis of the poem, my last duchess in the psycho analytical framework
Analysis of the poem, my last duchess in the psycho analytical frameworkAnalysis of the poem, my last duchess in the psycho analytical framework
Analysis of the poem, my last duchess in the psycho analytical framework
 
La belle 11
La belle 11La belle 11
La belle 11
 
Llimbo annotated
Llimbo annotatedLlimbo annotated
Llimbo annotated
 
Victorian Poet Christina rossetti's Poetic Characteristics
Victorian Poet Christina rossetti's Poetic CharacteristicsVictorian Poet Christina rossetti's Poetic Characteristics
Victorian Poet Christina rossetti's Poetic Characteristics
 
Poetry for freshman students
Poetry for freshman studentsPoetry for freshman students
Poetry for freshman students
 
The last ride together by R.Browning Dr. Nusrat J. Arshad
The last ride together by R.Browning  Dr. Nusrat J. ArshadThe last ride together by R.Browning  Dr. Nusrat J. Arshad
The last ride together by R.Browning Dr. Nusrat J. Arshad
 
John onne metaphyscal frk niazi
John onne metaphyscal frk niaziJohn onne metaphyscal frk niazi
John onne metaphyscal frk niazi
 
Little Red Cap annotations - Carol Ann Duffy
Little Red Cap annotations - Carol Ann DuffyLittle Red Cap annotations - Carol Ann Duffy
Little Red Cap annotations - Carol Ann Duffy
 
Theme of isolation
Theme of isolationTheme of isolation
Theme of isolation
 
La belle dame sans merci
La belle dame sans merciLa belle dame sans merci
La belle dame sans merci
 
A Mother in a Refugee Camp
A Mother in a Refugee CampA Mother in a Refugee Camp
A Mother in a Refugee Camp
 
Types of Poetry
Types of PoetryTypes of Poetry
Types of Poetry
 
Narrative poetry
Narrative poetryNarrative poetry
Narrative poetry
 
TYPES OF POETRY
TYPES OF POETRYTYPES OF POETRY
TYPES OF POETRY
 
Map Woman Analysis
Map Woman AnalysisMap Woman Analysis
Map Woman Analysis
 
Shakespeare -sonnet_130_pp
Shakespeare  -sonnet_130_ppShakespeare  -sonnet_130_pp
Shakespeare -sonnet_130_pp
 
Lyric poetry
Lyric poetryLyric poetry
Lyric poetry
 
The good morrow by John Donne
The good morrow by John DonneThe good morrow by John Donne
The good morrow by John Donne
 

Similar to Moon Girls of Golden Desert Sing for Secret Love1

Kaushambee 12th CBSE KV CANTT
Kaushambee  12th CBSE KV CANTTKaushambee  12th CBSE KV CANTT
Kaushambee 12th CBSE KV CANTTkaushdave
 
10x100 story - ajab Shahar
10x100 story - ajab Shahar10x100 story - ajab Shahar
10x100 story - ajab ShaharSswaroop0205
 
Collected Poems (autosaved)
Collected Poems (autosaved)Collected Poems (autosaved)
Collected Poems (autosaved)Ram Singh
 
12_english_core_notes_flamingo.pdf
12_english_core_notes_flamingo.pdf12_english_core_notes_flamingo.pdf
12_english_core_notes_flamingo.pdfSamarthDongre
 
I Cannot Remember My Mother
I Cannot Remember My MotherI Cannot Remember My Mother
I Cannot Remember My Motherguest60cbd5a
 
The Night of the Scorpion Presented by Shaila Islam
The Night of the Scorpion Presented by Shaila IslamThe Night of the Scorpion Presented by Shaila Islam
The Night of the Scorpion Presented by Shaila IslamMonir Hossen
 
Outline of literary forms based on philippine historical
Outline of literary forms based on philippine historicalOutline of literary forms based on philippine historical
Outline of literary forms based on philippine historicalJesullyna Manuel
 
The solitary reaper
The solitary reaperThe solitary reaper
The solitary reaperbalambal
 
Ode to nightingale
Ode to nightingaleOde to nightingale
Ode to nightingaleera nauman
 
THE SOLITARY REAPER CLASS-->IX
THE SOLITARY REAPER CLASS-->IXTHE SOLITARY REAPER CLASS-->IX
THE SOLITARY REAPER CLASS-->IXdurgashree
 
Presentation1 english.pptx
Presentation1 english.pptxPresentation1 english.pptx
Presentation1 english.pptxHarishChikhlikar
 
Powerpoint presentation on poetry
Powerpoint presentation on poetryPowerpoint presentation on poetry
Powerpoint presentation on poetrysushmitachanda2013
 
Poetry (pdf)
Poetry (pdf)Poetry (pdf)
Poetry (pdf)B College
 
The African Literature Comparison of two Poems
The African Literature Comparison of two PoemsThe African Literature Comparison of two Poems
The African Literature Comparison of two PoemsKhushbuLakhupota
 

Similar to Moon Girls of Golden Desert Sing for Secret Love1 (20)

Kaushambee 12th CBSE KV CANTT
Kaushambee  12th CBSE KV CANTTKaushambee  12th CBSE KV CANTT
Kaushambee 12th CBSE KV CANTT
 
10x100 story - ajab Shahar
10x100 story - ajab Shahar10x100 story - ajab Shahar
10x100 story - ajab Shahar
 
Collected Poems (autosaved)
Collected Poems (autosaved)Collected Poems (autosaved)
Collected Poems (autosaved)
 
12_english_core_notes_flamingo.pdf
12_english_core_notes_flamingo.pdf12_english_core_notes_flamingo.pdf
12_english_core_notes_flamingo.pdf
 
The solitary reaper
The solitary reaperThe solitary reaper
The solitary reaper
 
I Cannot Remember My Mother
I Cannot Remember My MotherI Cannot Remember My Mother
I Cannot Remember My Mother
 
The Night of the Scorpion Presented by Shaila Islam
The Night of the Scorpion Presented by Shaila IslamThe Night of the Scorpion Presented by Shaila Islam
The Night of the Scorpion Presented by Shaila Islam
 
Outline of literary forms based on philippine historical
Outline of literary forms based on philippine historicalOutline of literary forms based on philippine historical
Outline of literary forms based on philippine historical
 
The solitary reaper
The solitary reaperThe solitary reaper
The solitary reaper
 
My mother
My motherMy mother
My mother
 
Ode to nightingale
Ode to nightingaleOde to nightingale
Ode to nightingale
 
THE SOLITARY REAPER CLASS-->IX
THE SOLITARY REAPER CLASS-->IXTHE SOLITARY REAPER CLASS-->IX
THE SOLITARY REAPER CLASS-->IX
 
Presentation1 english.pptx
Presentation1 english.pptxPresentation1 english.pptx
Presentation1 english.pptx
 
Powerpoint presentation on poetry
Powerpoint presentation on poetryPowerpoint presentation on poetry
Powerpoint presentation on poetry
 
The lyric
The lyricThe lyric
The lyric
 
ANTIPOETIC POEMS.pdf
ANTIPOETIC POEMS.pdfANTIPOETIC POEMS.pdf
ANTIPOETIC POEMS.pdf
 
Jriorionstema-21st-lit-region13
Jriorionstema-21st-lit-region13Jriorionstema-21st-lit-region13
Jriorionstema-21st-lit-region13
 
Poetry (pdf)
Poetry (pdf)Poetry (pdf)
Poetry (pdf)
 
The African Literature Comparison of two Poems
The African Literature Comparison of two PoemsThe African Literature Comparison of two Poems
The African Literature Comparison of two Poems
 
A Heap Of Broken Images
A Heap Of Broken ImagesA Heap Of Broken Images
A Heap Of Broken Images
 

Moon Girls of Golden Desert Sing for Secret Love1

  • 1. 1 Moon Girls of Golden Desert Sing for Secret Love By Seyid O. SEYID, Mauritanian PhD researcher “A bright night in the midst of a dark day. In this place of witnessing, which is the light of manifestation I have much to say, but silence is best” - Mahmoūd Shabestarī, 14th century Persian Sufi poet. This is the real story of the pain of love in plain poetic expressions that you never read in a romantic book or watch in a thrilling movie. It is moving to grasp the nature of a cultural habit that is vanishing in the face of the technical invasion. In the happy night of heart light, Arab girls sing for secret love while hiding from their Mauritanian community’s eyes. It is the ritual of overwhelming love invading the ultimate sprit without daring to dream of seeing or touching the loved one that is depriving you from quiet sleeping in a desert of dreadful silence. The nomad girls and daughters of the moon start their night rhythm by creating their lyrics in open competition and fan conversation. Meeting in strategic open areas, they choose their favorite places in valleys, dunes, mountains or in a palm tree oasis. Natural beauty and nature’s pure elements are the moon girls’ best friends to trust with their sacred secret. Commencing the natural party, the group star leader sings the
  • 2. 2 opening lines for the band members to repeat the song words collectively. In this exciting moment, they sing, dance, play traditional drums and clap hands with a lolling sound to the accompanying music. If there is no music, they invent their own, coming from a mixture of the beauty of the human voice and the whispers of nature wonders. They make their drums with their rough, tough hands that are used to serve both family and the entire community during the darkest days of domestic labor. Every one of the female circle sitting around the drum has to tell her poem that she is creating or memorizing from her favorite hearings. Then, she has to sing it as role distributions go on until the late hours …it could be 22 hours or midnight, there is no exact date or time in the desert culture. It is an authentic culture of oral traditions. Generally, there is no writing or reading in the rural communities but they are highly educated despite being illiterate. The chosen words reveal the secret of their education pattern. You have to memorize what you are hearing from your educational sources as writing and documentation are rare luxuries in their context. Any exception is a confirmation of the general rule in the land of oral traditions. Romantically, nostalgic love’s sweetest verses are the favorite repeated themes of the moon girls who regularly celebrate their brightest night unless a calamity takes place in their neighborhood. The game rule says it is strictly forbidden to name your Aden love, even in the circle of your girls’ trusted bands. The name of the romantic lyrics is another secret to keep for life. Otherwise, the moon poet girls
  • 3. 3 could lose their freedom of expression forever. They would be condemned by their families and communities. Emotionally, the love prince mentioned by indirect implication should never know that he is praised in the females’ poems of last light. If he gets such news that his charming, attractive persona is inspiring his neighborhood girls, he will rapidly change from spontaneous spirit into an arrogant personality to be avoided for his remaining living days. Singing lyrical rhythm of the poetic night continues until they get sleepy. The departure indicator is physical exhaustion. Sleeping in the open white or black tents is the only available remedy. The tents of the girls are open from all directions but their minds are closed to community desires of social norms. Platonic, happy and symbolic codifications are the main characteristics of Mauritanian female poets. It is shameful in social traditions to be known as a poet praising her love using her own lyrics. The poem is her psychological release to express painful emotions when she is waking up late, feeling lonely, suffering from invisible love or the shock of oblivion in a silent desert. The night female lyrics should go to the public domain as unidentifiable recitations. The girls are only allowed to see the images of their secret love prince in the nightly superficial dreams. For example, here are some lines of female lyrics that lack the resilient musicality which is lost in translation from Arabic into English. This fault is mine, not the female writers. "It is not possible to hate the blue in dry years." “It’s obvious to love green beauty especially in dry seasons.” The following examples are simplified to economize on space and reduce redundant explanations: "Be patient my soul, rejoice in pain" "I would love you to breathe the breeze"
  • 4. 4 "As his teeth are brushed, no army can push me from his smiling lips" "How to forget him, he is living in my eyes" "His smile revives even dead bones" “Unreturned night to remember my secret love baby "I have to repeat all prayers as I recall my love in my many prayers” “Mine travelled West, Lord saves all travelers who go West" "My soul never forgets his words of evening whispers" The Sufi poet, Mahmoud Shabestari, has written his mystic rhythm in 1311 texts entitled The Secret Rose Garden. The moon poet girls chanted with golden voices for free love to come in their secret love universe. The Mauritanian, creative, late- French pen Habibe Mahfoud, wrote that in his country “time does not advance and love never returns. If time advances, love will never go away.” In a word, we are all moons with the darkest character to turn into the brightest values. As the great American author Mark Twain put it, “Everyone is a moon, and has a dark side which he never shows to anybody.”