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1. Let's learn from private firms which are following politics
like removing lots of prices from e-commerce sites to
improve inflation data.
Let's learn from private firms which are following policies like
removing lots of prices from e-commerce sites to improve
inflation data.
That place is near Mosul, at northern Irak and it has kept
standing up despite several conflicts...
That place is near Mosul, in northern Irak and it has kept standing
despite several conflicts...
New researches of scientist from the Zoological Society of
London and WWF confirm that...
New research by scientists from the Zoological Society of London
and WWF confirms that...
Professor Ken Norris affirms that it would be an impacting
new that half of the animals from London zoo disappear
next week but not if these animals are free in nature.
Professor Ken Norris avers/reckons that it would be an impactful
piece of news if half of the animals from the London zoo
disappeared next week but the disappearance of the same
number of wild animals would mostly go unnoticed / routinely
goes unnoticed.
Two wide studies about the state of opinion of Canadian
and British Muslim citizens have come on scene during this
month.
Two comprehensive/in-depth/far-reaching studies about the
opinions of Canadian and British Muslim citizens have come to
light during this month.
A decent growth of 3,4% a year is not high enough, and
deficit target was overcome to 5% last year...

2. A moderate growth of 3.4% a year is not high enough, and the
deficit target was overcome, reaching 5% last year...
Computational protein design and production of folded
structures has found great success in the last decade.
Computational protein design and production of folded structures
have met with great success / have been very successful in the
last decade.
In consequence, the less genetic damage got by this birds,
said Dr. Mousseau, seems to show an "unnatural
selection".
As a consequence, the lesser genetic damage
suffered/experienced by these birds, said Dr. Mousseau, seems to
show an "unnatural selection".