Error correction activity 3 e4 article 2020 key

1. Erroneous: The mission was to find a movement that was in line with the eco-
responsible values, practical on a daily basis and not too expensive in order to offer an
affordable watch
Correct: The mission was to find a movement that was in line with the eco-responsible
values, practical so that it could be used on a daily basis and not too expensive to
produce in order to offer an affordable watch
Erroneous: If Awake has always survived to her many issues, it’s because she answer
to a series a series of values, implemented deeply in every employee’s mind
Correct: If Awake has always survived to her many issues survived its many
challenges, it’s it is because she answer to a series it adheres to a series of values,
implemented deeply deeply implanted in every employee’s mind
Erroneous: Awake is also concerned to provide its employees with optimal working
conditions.
Correct: Awake is also concerned to provide committed to providing its employees
with optimal working conditions.
Erroneous: The families of both were refugees, which explains their later sustainable
and social behavior
Correct: The families of both were refugees, which explains their later sustainable and
social behavior subsequent / ensuing ethical and sustainable managerial
approach.
Erroneous: These are produced by "Greyston Bakery", with whom the company has
worked with since the 1980s.
Correct: These are produced by "Greyston Bakery", with whom the company has
worked with since the 1980s.
Erroneous: With increasing market power, especially in the early 2000s, these
questions became louder and louder and put IKEA under pressure to act. A company of
this size could not afford to damage its image
Correct: With increasing market power, especially in the early 2000s, these questions
became louder and louder the company’s critics grew more vocal and put IKEA
under pressure to act. A company of this size could not afford to damage its image
Erroneous: Inter Ikea Group commits to reduce the greenhouse gas emissions from
the IKEA value chain by at least 15% in absolute terms by 2030, compared to 2018.
Correct: Inter Ikea Group commits to reduce reducing the greenhouse gas emissions
from the IKEA value chain by at least 15% in absolute terms by 2030, compared to
2018.
Erroneous: Usage of renewable energy in production processes raised to a total of
46% in 2019 compared to 39% in 2016
Correct: Usage use (usage is only for languages) of renewable energy in
production processes raised rose to a total of 46% in 2019 compared to 39% in 2016

2. Erroneous: it has a relatively high water footprint : to produce one cup of coffee requires
140 litters of water.
Correct: it has a relatively high water footprint : to produce one cup of coffee requires
140 litters of water. Either: producing one cup of coffee requires 140… or to
produce one cup of coffee, 140 litres of water are required.
Erroneous: They are doing improvements in their shops (reducing waste of water
washing the machines with new ways
Correct: They are doing making improvements in their shops (reducing waste of
water by washing the machines with in new ways