Development pro forma

Digital Graphic Narrative
Development
Scott Harrand

Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like how the textures and details came out as
well as the shapes made for the facial features.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would make the shapes for the body more
detailed and similar to the original image of the
dog.

Shape Task (Later Attempt)
11/07/14

Evaluation
I like how the effects of the rotoscoping came
out with some of the jagged bits of fur as well as
the facial features, especially the darkened fur
around the eyes.
I would employ more care and attention to
detail when I used the polygonal lasso tool to
rotoscope the head of the Panda.

11/07/14
Rotoscope (Later Attempt)

Evaluation
I am happy with how the image showed quite
clearly on the text font after the clipping mask
was used, as the image can be clearly made out
through the text.
I may choose another font as this one is large
enough to display the image clearly but is not
quite fitting to the theme of the text, as it is not
of a renaissance or similar style.

Text Based Task (Second Attempt)
11/07/14

Evaluation
I am satisfied with the effects made by the cut-out
filter, as they have achieved an interesting, abstract
aesthetic for the image, as well as a style that
resembles that of a Comic Book.
I would attempt to make the colours remain more like
they originally appeared before the use of the filter, as
some parts have become different colours due to the
use of the filter, such as the skin, which has taken on
many patches of blue.

Evaluation
I feel the images convey the emotions to a degree that
they were meant to; Excitement, happiness and
loneliness. I also believe that the image quality is quite
good, especially in the Loneliness and Excitement
images.
I may have had the Happiness image be slightly more
zoomed in on the two figures, as well as possibly try
and make the images convey the emotions more
clearly and specifically, even though they already do a
certain amount as it stands.

Evaluation
I liked how the details came out on the
illustration such as the details of the hennin
headdress, the folds of the fabric and the
features of the face.
I would add some colour to the image, as it is
only a pencil illustration without any colour,
which could add more detail and life to the
image.

Proposal
Dimensions
The book will be 9-10 pages long, with dimensions of 21.8 cm and 27cm
Export Format
PDF
Advantages: These files are for more easily accessible without needing downloaded
software such as photoshop.
Disadvantages: Work cannot be edited once it has been saved in this file type.
Story Overview
The book follows the same basic storyline as the classic Cinderella story. Cinderella is a
girl who's step-mother and step-sisters have forced her to work and labour in their
castle. One day, they are invited to the Prince's Ball, but Cinderella's step-mother
forbids her to attend, forcing her to remain doing her chores. Cinderella is visited by a
Fairy Godmother, who grants her a beautiful gown, a pumpkin carriage, and a pair of
glass slippers. Cinderella attends the ball, and meets the prince. The two of them fall in
love, but Cinderella has to be back before midnight. She flees, leaving behind only her
lost glass slipper. The Prince searches throughout the land for the woman who fits the
slipper, until he is reunited with Cinderella. The two marry one another, and Cinderella
becomes the Princess. They live happily ever after.

Production Methods
I plan to use the method of rotoscoping to create my characters and other details of
the story, but instead of taking pre-existing models and designs and rotoscoping
over them I will create my own shapes and designs by rotoscoping empty space to
create the shapes I need and then fill them in with colours and brush patterns to
create my own original designs for the characters. However, for the backgrounds
for the story, I plan to take images similar to what I want the background of the
scene to be, and will run them through a filter, to give them a more fitting,
illustrated appearance suitable to the story.
Audience
The book is targeted at an age range of 5-8, and will have simple words, and an
easily readble text font. The book can be read by children of any gender, but it is
more targeted towards young girls, as the protagonist is also a girl, and they may
identify with her more. The book is written in English, but there is no specific British
references within the story, and therefore can be read by any English-speaker, in
any English-speaking country.
Deadline
October 16th 2014

What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
One of the strengths of this proposal is that its
clear that you know what you’re going to do to
achieve everything you want.
The audience that it is aimed at is really well
thought out and fits well with the story.
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
It shows a variety of different ideas and inspirations
shown in you’re book, the dresses and the settings
are all very similar to the ones that you have used
for you’re book.
You could have maybe used more mood boards to
help show your ideas further and to make your
mind map more legible.

Your proposal is very strong and clearly states
I would say there is no further improvements
what story you are basing your story from. It also
needed for your proposal as you have stated what
has specific details of what you are planning to do
you are going to do, what you want & the storyline
when changing the story to your own adaptation. It
throughout.
also states what you are wanting in your story
clearly.
further developed?
You have created a vast range of different ideas &
have done specific research on images based for
your story. You have different styles of clothing
applied in your images which gives different
choices for your liking. You have also created a
very detailed flat plan/mind map which has
following information on what you have thought of.
I think you could improve idea generation by
changing a couple of images to have more
variation towards your ‘Prince’ character. You could
also on your mind map try to make the text/writing
a little bit bigger as it may be hard for some people
to read.

It is very clear about what you want to do and how
you will go about it. It considers both child and
adult audiences. Good story overview without too
much detail. It is a popular story after all.
There is a little vagueness in the production
methods section. Greater exploration of
advantages and disadvantages of the file types you
will be using.
further developed?
Good amount of detail in the mind map section
which has helped develop your idea. Mood board is
also good. Images are all in a particular style, not a
random mish mash of pictures.
Mind map is blurry and hard to read.

Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
My feedback was very clear and detailed regarding my audience and other information,
although it was suggested that I add more detail regarding the file types I would use. My
mood board was praised for being varied, but it was also suggested that I could have
improved my planning by creating multiple, separate mood boards for different
characters, as well as having more things in my mood board for certain characters, such
as The Prince. It was also said that my mind map was quite blurry and difficult to read.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
I agree with most of my feedback, and I think that the criticisms and suggestions were all
very founded and agree with all of them too. My proposal could have been improved if
there was more detail across the board as that would have improved my work on the
final product. I also think it would have helped me if I had made multiple mood boards
for different characters, as it would have created much more detailed inspiration for me
to work from.
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?
I do not disagree with any of my feedback, and I think all the points made were very
useful and the suggestions would have helped me in the long-run if I had followed them
before making my final product.

The wife of a rich man fell sick, and as she felt that her end was drawing near, she called her only daughter to her bedside and said, "Dear child, be good and
pious, and then the good God will always protect thee, and I will look down on thee from heaven and be near thee." Thereupon she closed her eyes and
departed. Every day the maiden went out to her mother's grave and wept, and she remained pious and good. When winter came the snow spread a white sheet
over the grave, and when the spring sun had drawn it off again, the man had taken another wife.The woman had brought two daughters into the house with her,
who were beautiful and fair of face, but vile and black of heart. Now began a bad time for the poor step-child. "Is the stupid goose to sit in the parlour with us?"
said they. "He who wants to eat bread must earn it; out with the kitchen-wench." They took her pretty clothes away from her, put an old grey bedgown on her,
and gave her wooden shoes. "Just look at the proud princess, how decked out she is!" they cried, and laughed, and led her into the kitchen. There she had to do
hard work from morning till night, get up before daybreak, carry water, light fires, cook and wash. Besides this, the sisters did her every imaginable injury they
mocked her and emptied her peas and lentils into the ashes, so that she was forced to sit and pick them out again. In the evening when she had worked till she
was weary she had no bed to go to, but had to sleep by the fireside in the ashes. And as on that account she always looked dusty and dirty, they called her
Cinderella. It happened that the father was once going to the fair, and he asked his two step-daughters what he should bring back for them. "Beautiful dresses,"
said one, "Pearls and jewels," said the second. "And thou, Cinderella," said he, "what wilt thou have?" "Father, break off for me the first branch which knocks
against your hat on your way home." So he bought beautiful dresses, pearls and jewels for his two step-daughters, and on his way home, as he was riding
through a green thicket, a hazel twig brushed against him and knocked off his hat. Then he broke off the branch and took it with him. When he reached home he
gave his step-daughters the things which they had wished for, and to Cinderella he gave the branch from the hazel-bush. Cinderella thanked him, went to her
mother's grave and planted the branch on it, and wept so much that the tears fell down on it and watered it. It grew, however, and became a handsome tree.
Thrice a day Cinderella went and sat beneath it, and wept and prayed, and a little white bird always came on the tree, and if Cinderella expressed a wish, the
bird threw down to her what she had wished for.It happened, however, that the King appointed a festival which was to last three days, and to which all the
beautiful young girls in the country were invited, in order that his son might choose himself a bride. When the two step-sisters heard that they too were to appear
among the number, they were delighted, called Cinderella and said, "Comb our hair for us, brush our shoes and fasten our buckles, for we are going to the
festival at the King's palace." Cinderella obeyed, but wept, because she too would have liked to go with them to the dance, and begged her step-mother to allow
her to do so. "Thou go, Cinderella!" said she; "Thou art dusty and dirty, and wouldst go to the festival? Thou hast no clothes and shoes, and yet wouldst dance!"
As, however, Cinderella went on asking, the step-mother at last said, "I have emptied a dish of lentils into the ashes for thee, if thou hast picked them out again
in two hours, thou shalt go with us." The maiden went through the back-door into the garden, and called, "You tame pigeons, you turtle-doves, and all you birds
beneath the sky, come and help me to pick"The good into the pot,The bad into the crop."Then two white pigeons came in by the kitchen-window, and afterwards
the turtle-doves, and at last all the birds beneath the sky, came whirring and crowding in, and alighted amongst the ashes. And the pigeons nodded with their
heads and began pick, pick, pick, pick, and the rest began also pick, pick, pick, pick, and gathered all the good grains into the dish. Hardly had one hour passed
before they had finished, and all flew out again. Then the girl took the dish to her step-mother, and was glad, and believed that now she would be allowed to go
with them to the festival. But the step-mother said, "No, Cinderella, thou hast no clothes and thou canst not dance; thou wouldst only be laughed at." And as
Cinderella wept at this, the step-mother said, "If thou canst pick two dishes of lentils out of the ashes for me in one hour, thou shalt go with us." And she thought
to herself, "That she most certainly cannot do." When the step-mother had emptied the two dishes of lentils amongst the ashes, the maiden went through the
back-door into the garden and cried, "You tame pigeons, you turtle-doves, and all you birds under heaven, come and help me to pick"The good into the pot,The
bad into the crop."Then two white pigeons came in by the kitchen-window, and afterwards the turtle-doves, and at length all the birds beneath the sky, came
whirring and crowding in, and alighted amongst the ashes. And the doves nodded with their heads and began pick, pick, pick, pick, and the others began also
pick, pick, pick, pick, and gathered all the good seeds into the dishes, and before half an hour was over they had already finished, and all flew out again. Then
the maiden carried the dishes to the step-mother and was delighted, and believed that she might now go with them to the festival. But the step-mother said, "All
this will not help thee; thou goest not with us, for thou hast no clothes and canst not dance; we should be ashamed of thee!" On this she turned her back on
Cinderella, and hurried away with her two proud daughters.As no one was now at home, Cinderella went to her mother's grave beneath the hazel-tree, and
cried,"Shiver and quiver, little tree,Silver and gold throw down over me."Then the bird threw a gold and silver dress down to her, and slippers embroidered with
silk and silver. She put on the dress with all speed, and went to the festival. Her step-sisters and the step-mother however did not know her, and thought she
must be a foreign princess, for she looked so beautiful in the golden dress. They never once thought of Cinderella, and believed that she was sitting at home in
the dirt, picking lentils out of the ashes. The prince went to meet her, took her by the hand and danced with her. He would dance with no other maiden, and
never left loose of her hand, and if any one else came to invite her, he said, "This is my partner."She danced till it was evening, and then she wanted to go
home. But the King's son said, "I will go with thee and bear thee company," for he wished to see to whom the beautiful maiden belonged.

She escaped from him, however, and sprang into the pigeon-house. The King's son waited until her father came, and then he told him that the stranger maiden
had leapt into the pigeon-house. The old man thought, "Can it be Cinderella?" and they had to bring him an axe and a pickaxe that he might hew the pigeon-house
to pieces, but no one was inside it. And when they got home Cinderella lay in her dirty clothes among the ashes, and a dim little oil-lamp was burning on
the mantle-piece, for Cinderella had jumped quickly down from the back of the pigeon-house and had run to the little hazel-tree, and there she had taken off her
beautiful clothes and laid them on the grave, and the bird had taken them away again, and then she had placed herself in the kitchen amongst the ashes in her
grey gown.Next day when the festival began afresh, and her parents and the step-sisters had gone once more, Cinderella went to the hazel-tree and said"Shiver
and quiver, my little tree,Silver and gold throw down over me."Then the bird threw down a much more beautiful dress than on the preceding day. And when
Cinderella appeared at the festival in this dress, every one was astonished at her beauty. The King's son had waited until she came, and instantly took her by the
hand and danced with no one but her. When others came and invited her, he said, "She is my partner." When evening came she wished to leave, and the King's
son followed her and wanted to see into which house she went. But she sprang away from him, and into the garden behind the house. Therein stood a beautiful
tall tree on which hung the most magnificent pears. She clambered so nimbly between the branches like a squirrel, that the King's son did not know where she
was gone. He waited until her father came, and said to him, "The stranger- maiden has escaped from me, and I believe she has climbed up the pear-tree." The
father thought, "Can it be Cinderella?" and had an axe brought and cut the tree down, but no one was on it. And when they got into the kitchen, Cinderella lay
there amongst the ashes, as usual, for she had jumped down on the other side of the tree, had taken the beautiful dress to the bird on the little hazel-tree, and
put on her grey gown.On the third day, when the parents and sisters had gone away, Cinderella went once more to her mother's grave and said to the little
tree"Shiver and quiver, my little tree,Silver and gold throw down over me."And now the bird threw down to her a dress which was more splendid and magnificent
than any she had yet had, and the slippers were golden. And when she went to the festival in the dress, no one knew how to speak for astonishment. The King's
son danced with her only, and if any one invited her to dance, he said, "She is my partner."When evening came, Cinderella wished to leave, and the King's son
was anxious to go with her, but she escaped from him so quickly that he could not follow her. The King's son had, however, used a stratagem, and had caused
the whole staircase to be smeared with pitch, and there, when she ran down, had the maiden's left slipper remained sticking. The King's son picked it up, and it
was small and dainty, and all golden. Next morning, he went with it to the father, and said to him, "No one shall be my wife but she whose foot this golden slipper
fits." Then were the two sisters glad, for they had pretty feet. The eldest went with the shoe into her room and wanted to try it on, and her mother stood by. But
she could not get her big toe into it, and the shoe was too small for her. Then her mother gave her a knife and said, "Cut the toe off; when thou art Queen thou
wilt have no more need to go on foot." The maiden cut the toe off, forced the foot into the shoe, swallowed the pain, and went out to the King's son. Then he
took her on his horse as his bride and rode away with her. They were, however, obliged to pass the grave, and there, on the hazel-tree, sat the two pigeons and
cried,"Turn and peep, turn and peep,There's blood within the shoe,The shoe it is too small for her,The true bride waits for you."Then he looked at her foot and
saw how the blood was streaming from it. He turned his horse round and took the false bride home again, and said she was not the true one, and that the other
sister was to put the shoe on. Then this one went into her chamber and got her toes safely into the shoe, but her heel was too large. So her mother gave her a
knife and said, "Cut a bit off thy heel; when thou art Queen thou wilt have no more need to go on foot." The maiden cut a bit off her heel, forced her foot into the
shoe, swallowed the pain, and went out to the King's son. He took her on his horse as his bride, and rode away with her, but when they passed by the hazel-tree,
two little pigeons sat on it and cried,"Turn and peep, turn and peep,There's blood within the shoe,The shoe it is too small for her,The true bride waits for you."He
looked down at her foot and saw how the blood was running out of her shoe, and how it had stained her white stocking. Then he turned his horse and took the
false bride home again. "This also is not the right one," said he, "have you no other daughter?" "No," said the man, "There is still a little stunted kitchen-wench
which my late wife left behind her, but she cannot possibly be the bride." The King's son said he was to send her up to him; but the mother answered, "Oh no,
she is much too dirty, she cannot show herself!" He absolutely insisted on it, and Cinderella had to be called. She first washed her hands and face clean, and
then went and bowed down before the King's son, who gave her the golden shoe. Then she seated herself on a stool, drew her foot out of the heavy wooden
shoe, and put it into the slipper, which fitted like a glove. And when she rose up and the King's son looked at her face he recognized the beautiful maiden who
had danced with him and cried, "That is the true bride!" The step-mother and the two sisters were terrified and became pale with rage; he, however, took
Cinderella on his horse and rode away with her. As they passed by the hazel-tree, the two white doves cried,"Turn and peep, turn and peep,No blood is in the
shoe,The shoe is not too small for her,The true bride rides with you,"and when they had cried that, the two came flying down and placed themselves on
Cinderella's shoulders, one on the right, the other on the left, and remained sitting there.When the wedding with the King's son had to be celebrated, the two
false sisters came and wanted to get into favour with Cinderella and share her good fortune. When the betrothed couple went to church, the elder was at the
right side and the younger at the left, and the pigeons pecked out one eye of each of them. Afterwards as they came back, the elder was at the left, and the
younger at the right, and then the pigeons pecked out the other eye of each. And thus, for their wickedness and falsehood, they were punished with blindness as
long as they lived.

Final Script
Page 1: Once upon a time there was a young girl called Cinderella. When her father died, her
stepmother and stepsisters made her do all the work and chores in their castle. One day, an
invitation for the Prince’s Ball came to the castle, but Cinderella’s stepmother would not let her go.
Page 2: Cinderella was sad. She wished with all her heart to go to the ball. To her surprise, a Fairy
Godmother appeared. “Do not worry, Cinderella” she said. “I will make sure you go to the ball”
Page 3: The Fairy Godmother gave a wave of her wand, and Cinderella’s rags turned into a
beautiful dress. On her bare feet, glittering glass slippers appeared. The Fairy Godmother gave her
a mask as well, so that her stepmother and stepsisters would not see her. “Now,” The Fairy
Godmother said “You are ready for the ball. But you must be back before midnight, that is when my
spells will all wear off.”
Page 4: Cinderella arrived at the ball by a pumpkin carriage. Behind her mask, and in her fine
clothes, her stepmother and stepsisters did not recognise her.
Page 5: Cinderella and the Prince talked and danced together all night, which made her stepsisters
very jealous. Soon, Cinderella and the Prince had both fallen in love with each other.
Page 6: Cinderella was having so much fun that she lost track of time, and it was almost midnight.
She had to leave before midnight, and fled the ball, leaving behind nothing but a glass slipper.
Page 7: All the Prince had left of Cinderella was the glass slipper she left behind. He searched
through the Kingdom, trying to find a woman who’s foot fit perfectly into the glass slipper.
Page 8: Both of Cinderella’s step-sisters tried on the slipper. One step-sister’s foot was to big, the
other step-sister’s foot was to small. The Prince asked if there was anyone else in the Castle, so
Cinderella came to try the slipper.
Page 9: When the Prince put the slipper on Cinderella’s foot, it fit perfectly.
Page 10: Cinderella and The Prince got married soon after, and Cinderella was now the Princess of
the Kingdom. The two of them lived happily ever after. The End.

Digital Flat Plans
Wall Open
Door
Cinderella
standing in
the
doorway.
The
Stepmother
and Stepsisters
all leaving for
the ball.
This is where the text
will go.
Bed.
Cinderella,
looking at
the Fairy
Godmother
The Fairy
Godmother,
floating
above.
This is where the
text will go.

This is where the
text will go.
Floating wand.
mask.
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The Fairy
Godmother
Waving her
Cinderella,
surrounded
by magical
light as her
dress
transforms.
This is
where
the
second
piece of
text will
go.
Cinderella
descending
the stairs.
This is where
the text will
go.
Grand Staircase
Stepmother and
stepsisters looking
at the new arrival.
The Prince
seeing
Cinderella come
down the stairs.

This is where the text will
go.
Stepmother
with
stepsisters
looking
jealous. Cinderella dancing
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Large crowd of
people in the
background.
with The Prince in the
foreground.
Cinderella running
from the ball, her
finery beginning to
fade away.
The
Prince
calls for
her to
wait.
The
leftover
glass
slipper
The
clock on
the wall
strikes
midnight
This is where
the text will go.

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Cinderella’s
Stepmother’s
Castle.
The Prince,
holding the
glass
slipper.
This is where the text will go.
The Prince
Stepmother
standing
behind.
Step-sister
trying on
the slipper.
Grumpy
step-sister
Cinderella
enters.

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Cinderella sitting
down in a chair.
The Prince knelt
down, putting the
slipper on her
foot.
Cinderella and the
Prince, standing
together, both
crowned and
married.
The Fairy
Godmother
floats above.

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