3. FADE IN:
INT:BEDROOM AND ITS NIGHT TIME.
THE MAN AND WOMEN ARE IN THE BED TOGETHER ASLEEP AND THEN
THE PHONE RINGS AND THE WOMEN WOKE UP AND SHE ANSWERS THE
PHONE AND THE MAN WAKES UP TOO.
MAN (ON PHONE) FADED OUT SO YOU
CANT HEAR
“Your boyfriend has been killed in
a car crash sorry for your lose…”
Girl breaks down and cries to her self an holds the phone
close.
INT: BATHROOM
she runs to the bathroom and try to whip the tears. And
the girls trying to talk to her but its like he's not
there.
INT: BEDROOM
transition back to the bed she try to get some sleep but
she upset in his bed and she holds a piece of his
clothing.
INT: LIVING ROOM
The women and man wake up and she trying to plan what she
going to do and she talking on the phone again.
Guy on phone
“you cant see him your not
family.”
LISA
“Im his girlfriend i want to see
him!”
GUY ON PHONE
“You have to get permission off
his family believe he has a
mother.”
LISA
“His mother docent give a shit
about I'm was all he had!”
4. ! .2
GUY ON THE PHONE
“Im sorry theres nothing i can do”
Puts the phone down on the women
LISA
“Hello! hello! Dame it!!”
Throws the phone on the table and hits a glass of milk
the guy is sitting on the table trying to talk to her.
GARRY
“What’s wrong talk to me what have
i done?”
She looks at her phone with a picture of her and her
boyfriend and a tear comes down her face. and she grabs a
piece of paper and keys and goes out of the room.
INT: BEDROOM
The girls gone back to her room and starts packing her
suit case and picks up one of her boyfriends tops and
smells it and brakes down
LISA
“I can’t do this without u”
GARRY
“you don't have to”
But its like the girl cant hear him and the conversation
is almost like there having a brake up. The guy is trying
to talk to her and hold on to her but it docent work.
EXT: FOREST
Then the girl visits the forest that they went to when
they first met. the girl goes to place the first went and
saw each other and then have flash backs the guy still
there with her.
LISA
“i remember when we first met
here”
GARRY
“seems like just yesterday i was
sitting there with you”
Flash back
5. ! .3
girl and guy sitting in front of a tree talking and
laughing together
then there was another flash back urban place
EXT: URBAN SETTING
LISA
“ Another place that i will never
forget”
GARRY
“we got so many good memories
together”
EXT: HOUSE LIVING ROOM
Another flash back to where there in the house together
watching tv
LISA
“i love u”
GARRY
“i love u too”
Boy walks up behind the girl
GARRY
“we was so good together”
INT: LIVING ROOM
Girl goes back to the original room that she in and looks
down and says
LISA
“I miss him so much”
guy standing in the door and looks down and has a sad
expression on his face
GARRY
“dosent need to be this way we can
still be together”
then I'm going to use an ark shot for the flash backs
transitions
LISA
“At least i still have all these
places to remember me by”
6. ! .4
GARRY
“why not be with me still and you
wont have to remember me i could
be there all the time for u”
LISA LOOKS DOWNS
FADE OUT
TRANSITION
To the house and she cleans up the milk and the apartment
and then she sees the picture of the boy and her and
smiles but gets a bit upset over then someone knocks the
door
THE MAN AT THE DOOR
“there is a letter here form the
(boys character name…) told me to
give this to you”
we see her reading it and she starts crying again but we
don't know what it says the boy looks confused then she
gets it together gets her jacket and leaves again.
FADE OUT TRANSITION
INT: OFFICE
The girl is in the office working out a business deal
where the girl is talking about business deal and why she
should get this job of a life time
LISA
“I really think this management
role will suit me and i think i
can be professional and really
take this role on and work my
hardest at it”
BUSINESS PEOPLE
“we are pleased to hear that
because from you application we
think that you will be very
successful in this role”
OTHER BUSINESS PERSON
“this job we set you up to have a
very success portfolio and this
will look very professional.
then phone call interrupts this interview
she puts the phone down the first time
7. ! .5
LISA
“sorry about that random number”
then it rings again
BUSINESS PEOPLE
“please answer it its must be
important.”
EXT: WALKING DOWN THE STREET
she is walking down the street somewhere and picks up a
flower and walks with that and then goes to a place where
there was a accident there recently and she holds her
self and there was another flash back again where theres
a piece of dialogue
WOMEN ON THE PHONE
“Is this miss… you boyfriend has
been in an accident”
LISA
“what! is he okay”
WOMEN
“we are just taking him to
hospital know”
LISA
“Can i please talk to him”
GARRY
“hey babe”
LISA
“ are you okay!”
GARRY
“yes I'm fine babe don't worry”
LISA
“Ill be right there”
GARRY
“No just close that business deal
ill be okay honestly ill see you
tonight I'm not that bad and he
coughs”
LISA
“No I've got to come see if your
okay!”
“women comes on the phone we are
taking to hospital I'm going have
to go just let me say bye to him!”
8. ! .6
phone gets put down
LISA
“hello hello!! damn it”
she walks back into the office and says to the two
business people I'm so sorry my boyfriend has been in an
accident I'm going have to go sorry.
THE BUSINESS PEOPLE SAY
“If you leave know you wont get
another chance like this with us”
LISA PAUSES
“ I'm so sorry I've got to go see
that he okay”
She runs out of the room and then a transition goes back
to the current place in time and a tear goes down her
face and she goes to the place she was heading too
she turns up at a grave yard and is standing in front of
a grave and the boy is standing behind her and she is
reading the letter out
in the letter from the boy
“If you are reading this then I'm
o sorry but i had n choice but you
have to go on without me but i
have made precautions so even
though I'm not here i am still
going to take care of you and i
will always be with you”
the girl puts the flower down and kisses her hand and
puts it on the tomb stone
LISA
“You love me so much to still take
care of me even when you no longer
here and I'm not just looming
after my self anymore”
she looks down at here stomach
LISA
“at least i will have a part of
you hear with me i love u”
the boy comes up behind her and hugs her from behind and
then she walks a way with the boy looking at her and then
the boy slowly fades and then we see a new paper on the
floor close up of the picture in the paper.
FADES TO BLACK
10. ! .i
SCENE INDEX
INT:BEDROOM AND ITS NIGHT TIME. 1........................
THE MAN AND WOMEN ARE IN THE BED TOGETHER ASLEEP AND THEN
THE PHONE RINGS AND THE WOMEN WOKE UP AND SHE ANSWERS THE
PHONE AND THE MAN WAKES UP TOO. 1.........................
INT: BATHROOM 1...........................................
INT: BEDROOM 1............................................
INT: LIVING ROOM 1.......................................
INT: BEDROOM 2...........................................
EXT: FOREST 2............................................
EXT: URBAN SETTING 3......................................
EXT: HOUSE LIVING ROOM 3..................................
INT: LIVING ROOM 3.......................................
INT: OFFICE 4............................................
EXT: WALKING DOWN THE STREET 5............................
