This document provides timestamps and notes for shots in a film scene. It outlines shots from establishing shots of characters to close-ups of hands and hair, with notes on cut synchronization and needing to show the breakdown and building back up of a relationship. Areas identified for improvement include how to film the relationship breakdown and trimming a spinning shot.

1. Time Strength Weaknesses
00.10 Establishing shot of characters are
effective
00.12 Cut on the beat to characters face
00.50 Cut on the beat to characters face
00.56 Close up of hand on light
01.06 Shot of hair being tied
01.23-1.40 Needs filming- How am I going to show
breakdown of relationship?
01.42-02.00 Cut synchronisation
02.01 Spinning shot Needs trimming
03.22 Looking back remembering relationships
and then building relationship back up
03.46 Last shot