1. Mark smith
In the communication question more than half the
class said we communicated clearly. So to improve I
think we need to talk clearer and also be a bit louder.
Doing this will mean better communication and a
better pitch

2. Mark smith
On this question about how enthusiastic and professional
we were, we got a three. So we need to make sure we get
our pointy a cross in a more upbeat way so we sound
more enthusiastic, but at the same time we still need to
sound more professional. Another think that might help
with this is to make what we are saying sound more
professional, so we should try to use bigger and better
words.
Doing all of the above will help us sound more enthusiastic
and will also make us look more professional.
On this question we were scored on how excited we were
about the idea, half of the class scored us a tree.
I think we need to show our excitement a bit more by
facial expressions and the way we talk when doing our
pitch

3. Mark smith
On the question the votes where 50/50
To improve on this we could talk to the class and not the
paper in front of us but we was only doing that because
we were all nervous
The majority of the class think we have a weak idea.
To improve on this I think we need to talk more about film
and the key parts in the film. We need to make the class
feel the way we feel about the film.

4. Mark smith
i think we need to improve on our:
Eye contact
Being more relaxed
Answering questions
Speaking clearer
I think if we improve on all the above we should be albe to
produce a great pitch.
All in all I think we need to improve out pitch script, by adding more about the film and telling people more about the characters. We should try to answer
question better and use more eye contact. Another that will make the pitch better would be to be more relaxed and speak clearer. So if we can do all of
the above and not let out nervous get the better of us we should have a very strong pitch.