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47th Street


A Film Noir Opening Sequence


   Treatment Sheet2013


By Mark O’Neill, Josh Newton,
Richard Parker& Adam Dixon
Contents

Overview of Story.……………………………………………………………3



Story Outline.…………………..…………………………………………...3/4



Cast list.……………………………………………………………………………4



Technical Information………………………………………………………4



Synopsis…………………………………………………………………………..4



Costumes……………………………………………………………………….5



Props ………………………………………………………………………………5



Locations…………………………………………………………………………5
Overview of Story
In a world where corrupt cops are as much of a problem as
the criminals that they attempt to catch the police struggle
to keep the city of Los Angeles safe and peaceful. The story
begins with police investigating a murder scene, a common
 place at the time, where a mysterious detective enters the
                       scene. Through

                         Story Outline
Beginning – tilt down from lamppost to phone box. Medium
 to long shot of the phone box with central character inside.
Match on action shot of the character walking out. Close up
  of face and turning character as he walks away. Elliptical
editing and transitions will be used to show a jump cut will
 be used as the character walks to the crime scene. The feet
  will be filmed to show that the character is staying on the
     same road (at this time the group will move to a new
 location while keeping the setting the same). There will be
 ambient sounds with a slight hint of a jazz soundtrack. The
       lamppost will provide adequate lighting at night.

Middle–The detective continues along the road towards the
 crime scene along the sea front where elliptical editing will
      be used. The jazz that was previously used will be
 incorporated in this piece along side the ambient sounds of
  the coast in order to form a sound bridge. At one point the
detective stops in order to have a cigarette on the coast, this
shows his darker side. As the detective approaches the crime
   scene there will be police tape and the light and diegetic
              asynchronous sirens of a police car.

End – As the police detective investigates the crime scene he
   sees a knife nearby and a dead body on the floor. When
    checking the crime scene we see the detective take the
corpses wallet and remove the money from it without doing
 the stereotypical police thing to do, which is to check the ID,
this will be done through the use of adjusting the focus. After
this the supervisor for his inappropriate behavior will
discipline the main character. At which point the detective
will walk away and light a second cigarette after throwing
          his police badge into the nearby water.

                          Cast list
                        Dead body -
                        Detective –
                      Chief of Police –
                   Extras (background) -

                 Technical Information
                    Set – 1940’s/50’s
               Location – Los Angeles, USA
                       Rating – 18
            Running Time –2 minutes maximum


                          Synopsis
 The main character, a corrupt and nameless detective has
become accustomed to using his police authority in order to
get what he wants, whether it be legal or not. However over
 the last few months the supervisor has been getting more
 and more suspicious about what the detective is willing to
  do to get results and how he has been tampering with or
            even taking items from crime scenes.

    Will the supervisor confront the detective or allow his
   behavior to continue because of his impeccable results?
 What will the rest of the L.A. police force do if/when they
 find out? At what cost will the detective be willing to keep
                          his secret?
Costumes
Due to the period attire it would be likely that the standard
attire for the majority of the cast will be wearing suits and
                         fedora hats.

                     Props Needed
                         Wallet
                  Murder weapon (knife)
                        Cigarette
                      Police badge
                   American Currency


                           Locations
  The main location will in a secluded section of the town
where the appearance of the outsides of some of the houses
appears to be appropriate for the period. The area has high
 buildings to make shadows and aesthetically appropriate
          streetlights to provide adequate lighting.
       (Northgate Sea front (Town wall), Hartlepool)
We may also look at the nearby dockside that is roughly half
a mile away. There is also a phone box at Seaton Carew that
  will be utilized. (The Green, Seaton Carew, Hartlepool).

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Treatment sheet

  • 1. 47th Street A Film Noir Opening Sequence Treatment Sheet2013 By Mark O’Neill, Josh Newton, Richard Parker& Adam Dixon
  • 2. Contents Overview of Story.……………………………………………………………3 Story Outline.…………………..…………………………………………...3/4 Cast list.……………………………………………………………………………4 Technical Information………………………………………………………4 Synopsis…………………………………………………………………………..4 Costumes……………………………………………………………………….5 Props ………………………………………………………………………………5 Locations…………………………………………………………………………5
  • 3. Overview of Story In a world where corrupt cops are as much of a problem as the criminals that they attempt to catch the police struggle to keep the city of Los Angeles safe and peaceful. The story begins with police investigating a murder scene, a common place at the time, where a mysterious detective enters the scene. Through Story Outline Beginning – tilt down from lamppost to phone box. Medium to long shot of the phone box with central character inside. Match on action shot of the character walking out. Close up of face and turning character as he walks away. Elliptical editing and transitions will be used to show a jump cut will be used as the character walks to the crime scene. The feet will be filmed to show that the character is staying on the same road (at this time the group will move to a new location while keeping the setting the same). There will be ambient sounds with a slight hint of a jazz soundtrack. The lamppost will provide adequate lighting at night. Middle–The detective continues along the road towards the crime scene along the sea front where elliptical editing will be used. The jazz that was previously used will be incorporated in this piece along side the ambient sounds of the coast in order to form a sound bridge. At one point the detective stops in order to have a cigarette on the coast, this shows his darker side. As the detective approaches the crime scene there will be police tape and the light and diegetic asynchronous sirens of a police car. End – As the police detective investigates the crime scene he sees a knife nearby and a dead body on the floor. When checking the crime scene we see the detective take the corpses wallet and remove the money from it without doing the stereotypical police thing to do, which is to check the ID, this will be done through the use of adjusting the focus. After
  • 4. this the supervisor for his inappropriate behavior will discipline the main character. At which point the detective will walk away and light a second cigarette after throwing his police badge into the nearby water. Cast list Dead body - Detective – Chief of Police – Extras (background) - Technical Information Set – 1940’s/50’s Location – Los Angeles, USA Rating – 18 Running Time –2 minutes maximum Synopsis The main character, a corrupt and nameless detective has become accustomed to using his police authority in order to get what he wants, whether it be legal or not. However over the last few months the supervisor has been getting more and more suspicious about what the detective is willing to do to get results and how he has been tampering with or even taking items from crime scenes. Will the supervisor confront the detective or allow his behavior to continue because of his impeccable results? What will the rest of the L.A. police force do if/when they find out? At what cost will the detective be willing to keep his secret?
  • 5. Costumes Due to the period attire it would be likely that the standard attire for the majority of the cast will be wearing suits and fedora hats. Props Needed Wallet Murder weapon (knife) Cigarette Police badge American Currency Locations The main location will in a secluded section of the town where the appearance of the outsides of some of the houses appears to be appropriate for the period. The area has high buildings to make shadows and aesthetically appropriate streetlights to provide adequate lighting. (Northgate Sea front (Town wall), Hartlepool) We may also look at the nearby dockside that is roughly half a mile away. There is also a phone box at Seaton Carew that will be utilized. (The Green, Seaton Carew, Hartlepool).