First Draft of script for opening of a feature film

1. Freds Film
(working Title)
By
Fred Carr
An Original Screenplay
c/o Fine Arts College

2. 1 INT.LIVNGROOM.DAY 1
A glass coffee table can be seen in a close up shot. 2
white old fashioned tea mugs can be seen one with a red
lipstick stain on the tip of the mug. Other tea party
items are out like cheap biscuits on a tall pristine
silver biscuit platter, cheap cakes on a nice silver cake
stand a pair of hands come into the shot with black
leather gloves on and picks up some of the items
2 INT.LIVINGROOM / KITCHEN.DAY 2
Camera tracks a pair of old black boots walking from
living room to kitchen. As the shoes walk out of frame
camera holds on certain areas of the carpet which have
been cut out or have furniture dents in them. Shot from
inside the sink shows the pair of leather gloved hands
placing the items into the sink. His boots are then
tracked again as he walks back into living and collects
more items to place in the sink.
3 INT.BEDROOM.DAY 3
A scruffy unmade bed with pristine white sheets can be
seen clothes are carelessly scattered around the room. A
character dressed in full black enters the frame his legs
and torso can be seen but not his face. He picks up some
of the clothes but only clothes that a man would wear and
folds them and places them in an old wooden chest of
draws. he then proceeds to pick up the rest of the clothes
bra, pants, a dress and places them in a bin bag.
4 INT.FRONTROOM.DAY 4
The character places the bin bag next to the front door
where the carpet appears to be covered by large piece of
plastic as the character walks on the plastic the sound of
his boots is emphasised
5 INT.BEDROOM.DAY 5
The same shot of the unmade bed is held as the character
enters the bedroom once again. he walks over to the messy
bed and begins to make it perfectly in a very specific
rehearsed way. once the bed is perfectly made the
character notices a small red stain on the perfect white
duvet sheet. He angrily rips the duvet off the bed and
takes the sheet off of it and walks out of the shot.
6 INT.FRONTROOM.DAY 6
The character re enters the front room and violently grabs
the bin bag and shoves the stained sheet inside of it once
again the sound of his boots walking on the plastic is
emphasised. as he walks out of the front room he notices a
pair of elegant high heels by the front door he picks them
up and places them in the bin bag with the other items.

3. 2.
7 INT.BEDROOM.DAY 7
The bed can now be seen fully made with brand new white
sheets. The character steps away from the bed and starts
to walk out of the room. As he walks out he notices a
smashed picture frame on the floor and scattered shards of
glass. Camera holds on glass as character leaves the room
and comes back. his footsteps and the door creaking is
emphasised. The gloves come back into the shot as he
starts to sweep up the glass. becomes angry when he flips
over the picture frame and camera holds on the photo
8 INT.FRONTROOM.DAY 8
Camera holds on the front door as the character walks into
the front room opens the door and slams it shut. The
camera then pans around the front room revealing g a
sdieroom where the carpet is also covered by plastic and
there is a body shaped object rolled up into plastic with
pools of blood seeping onto the plastic covered floor.
slowly the door starts to re open and the character walks
backwards through the front room
9 INT.ALLROOMS.DAY 9
character enters the bedroom walking backwards takes the
duvet cover off and throws the duvet on the floor , puts
the clothes back onto the floor and messes up the
nightstand. walking backwards again goes back into the
front room takes the bin bag and places it back. he then
walks backwards into the kitchen where he takes the coffee
cups and other items back to the coffee table. the black
leather gloves re appear placing the items onto the coffee
table so that the shot is the same as the first one. This
shot is held until a bump is heard and the coffee table
shakes. the camera begins to pan up across the room and a
woman in seen laying dead on the floor.