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The Legacy Of College Admissions
College admissions are simple. They check your GPA and ACT/SAT test scores and see if your
scores match their expectations. If you do, they will take you. If you don't, they will reject you.
What about if your score is in the middle? What if you don't quite meet their expectations, but you
don't really fall below them? Legacy is like a tiebreaker or the cherry on top of the cake, but
currently is a very controversial topic. Being a legacy student can cause a significant impact on the
admission process. It also gives you a huge advantage over non–legacy students. Being a legacy
student has the potential of getting you admitted into the college that you want, even if you don't
meet all the requirements. UW should take legacy into ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ...
Not that universities and colleges only do this for money, they also do this for tradition, better
reputation, loyal students, and an overall appreciation for the college of the university.
Having legacy students at the institution will greatly benefit UW by receiving donations from them.
With colleges and universities becoming businesses, "the high rate of monetary support by legacies
and their parents is viewed as crucial" for that institution to be financially sound and successful.
Moreover, "over three–quarters of legacies have a parent with a high–status occupation, compared to
about 62% of students with college degree parents and less than one–third of students with no
degree parents." This means that the parents of legacy students are usually wealthier than non–
legacies. This also means that with wealthier parents, the chance of a donation or donations to that
college or university is most likely to substantially increase. Moving on, "legacies arrive on campus
forming a distinct status group that is characterized by an abundance of economic, cultural and
social capital." With economic capital, they are more likely to participate in activities and spend
more money. And it is what colleges or universities desire, more money. By partaking in college or
university activities, the student will grow fonder of it later on and might donate to support the
institution. In the
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Sample College Admission
All I have ever wanted was the chance to see my dreams come true. Palms sweaty, throat tight, and a
sense of accomplishment radiating from my bones, the moment I walked off the stage at my middle
school graduation, I knew that that was the beginning of the rest of my life. In high school, the most
important goal for me was going to college and pursuing my dream of becoming an artist, then
taking that success and finding a way to give back to the community and people that raised me. The
Bonner Scholar Program will help me acquire the funds to achieve my goal in the long run. I was
never sure what kind of artist I wanted to be but I have always known that no matter what I wanted
to showcase my talent to the world. Ever since I was a small child ... Show more content on
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I was never discouraged from wanting to become an artist, my mom would buy me all types of
paints and coloring pencils, the amount of paper we owned could fill up the entire apartment. When
I was small it was just a hobby, but by the time I entered middle school I realized that if I shoved my
heart and soul into getting better at my technique then I could become someone worth talking about.
However, when I entered high school I realized that we do not have the kind of financial stability
that it takes for me to acquire the learning that I desire. If I cannot work through college and cannot
afford my books then I know that all I have worked for will go to waste. So as I said, I was never
discouraged from wanting to become an artist, only discouraged from being able to. The only thing
that has ever discouraged me from following my dreams has been the cost, and I know that I cannot
become the best version of myself without help. And so that is why I want to join the Bonner
Scholar Program because I know that I can do all that I have ever dreamed of doing at Allegheny.
For students coming from low–income households, myself included, we see higher education as the
road to more choices and
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College Admissions Are Pretty Simple
College admissions are pretty simple. They check your GPA and ACT/SAT test scores and see if you
match their expectations. If you do, they will take you. If you don't, they will reject you. What about
if you are stuck in the middle? What if you don't quite meet their expectations, but you don't really
fall below them? What's supposed to be a tie breaker or the cherry on top of the cake is now a very
controversial topic. Being a legacy student can have a significant impact in the admission process, if
you are one. It also gives you a huge advantage over non–legacy students. Being a legacy student
has the potential of getting you admitted into the college that you want, even if you don't meet all
the requirements. UW should take legacy into ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ...
Not saying that universities and colleges only do this for money, they also do this for tradition,
better reputation, loyal students, and an overall appreciation for the college of the university.
Having legacy students at the institution will greatly benefit UW by receiving donations from them.
With colleges and universities becoming businesses, "the high rate of monetary support by legacies
and their parents is viewed as crucial" for that institution to be financially sound and successful.
Moreover, "over three–quarters of legacies have a parent with a high–status occupation, compared to
about 62% of students with college degree parents and less than one–third of students with no
degree parents." This means that the parents of legacy students are usually wealthier than non–
legacies. This also means that with wealthier parents, the chance of a donation or donations to the
that college or university is most likely to substantially increase. Moving on, legacies arrive on
campus forming a distinct status group that is characterized by an abundance of economic, cultural
and social capital." With economic capital, they are more likely to participate in activities and spend
more money. And that's what colleges or universities want, more money. By partaking in college or
university activities, the student will be grow fonder of it later on and might donate to support the
institution. In the
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College Admission Process Analysis
I agree with the Harvard's proposed changes to the college admission process. Today, people are
putting a lot of emphasis on grades, test, and other extracurricular activities. I believe this is not the
most important thing we should be worried about. The stress is becoming greater and students are
having higher expatiations about the ACTs and SATs. Also, the idea of emphasizing on the
community involvement is a great way for colleges to receive a diverse student body. With the stress
of ACTs and SATs, it is hard on us, students. Students are having less time to worry about being a
kid and more time worry about grades and test. The article talked about teachers having high
expectations for students grades, and they need to pull back on their
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College Admissions Essay
Being a Filipino, I grew up in a culture where education is of utmost important. When I entered high
school in the Philippines, I was surprisingly surrounded by deep–pocketed students with remarkable
talents and intelligence. Not like everybody else, I came from a middle–class broken family but that
did not stop me from going to school. Later on, I became friends with some of the popular students
in our school, and suddenly, made me part of the top of the food chain. I, then realized, am as good
as them, but not better. Thus, I genuinely promised myself that I will do better in college.
Coming from a third–world country, it is quite overwhelming to enter college in a first–world
country. My whole perception in life has been redefined due to the great opportunities being offered
to me. However, it gives me the feeling of uncertainty on how life will turn out after ... Show more
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Even though it costs a big fortune to earn a degree, I always seize my opportunities to improve
myself; to discover my strengths and weakness; and to create new connections with other people.
My parents have always told me that earning a degree is one of the most priceless possessions that
anyone could have. Likewise, it is our invaluable tool to charm those employers and get the job that
we highly desire. However, the effectiveness of a tool actually depends on the person who holds it.
Thus, a proper utilization of a hard–earned degree in a targeted field would help me to obtain a
valuable career.
Certainly, a degree would give me pride and self–satisfaction as well. I can finally face the real
world and proudly show it how much capable I am of achieving because I have a degree to prove it.
Hence, earning a degree will be the symbol of my accomplishments, and the hard works and
sacrifices of my parents, which will bring joy and happiness to my family despite of the daily life
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Graduation Speech : College Admission
College Admission ACT, GPA, SAT, and writing ability are some major factors that Simpson
college's admissions use when determining if a student will be accepted or not. Like most other
school students must meet certain recommendations in these areas to even get accepted. I think that
a student's ability to write should be the cornerstone of college admissions it allows the student to
state their goals and values, can help be the deciding factor in the admission process, and it can be
an opportunity for the students to display information they have learned over the years. When I was
applying to Simpson, I felt the process was rather simple and easy. I don't remember any
complications with applying. I think that applying to college for me was very simple as I only
applied to Simpson College, Iowa State University, Waldorf University, and Cornell College. All
four of these educational institutions had almost the same application process. From my experience,
I believe that Simpson College has a simple application process. Students must send in their high
school transcript along with their ACT or SAT scores and fill out the online application (First Year
Students, n.d.). I feel the main purpose of the application is to see how the student will fit in at
Simpson and learn the possible interests of the students in order to help expand education, hobbies,
and activities. The online application asks simple questions to get most of the basic information
about the student applying
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College Admissions Essay Analysis
Admissions essays are a critical piece of any student's application process. College admission
officers investigate admissions essays for affirmation that an understudy has the capacity compose
well and contend a theme in a firm way. The admissions essay you compose speaks to you as a
potential student to the staff of the college and layouts your fundamental accomplishments.
Admissions essays give forthcoming students a chance to personally present themselves and are,
basically, the college's first subjective impression of them. Essay should be personal, convincing and
effective. Your essay ought to demonstrate who you are, the place you've been and where you are
going. Structures and air pocket sheets can't clarify a lifetime of work and development. ... Show
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Online Essay Editing Service experienced proficient editors comprehend the admissions procedure
and how to make an essay that makes the best impression conceivable. Essays are an essential part
of your application, presumably the hugest. Essays ought to mirror your personality, gifts and
intrigues that are not clear from your resume or application. Grammatically erroneous and
befuddling opening and determination sentences can bring about a reader to reject even the most
persuading application letter. Since reader can choose in a moment regardless of whether to consider
your admissions essay important, these sentences should be brief and linguistically sound. Editing
serves to make the opening and shutting sentences that will get your admission essay noted, as well
as
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College Admissions Flaws
On top of exceptional students getting declined, prestigious schools are accepting less qualified
students such as legacies, athletes, and minorities, contributing to the flawed system. Rather than
admitting students based on their potential to succeed and personal attributes alone, universities
often admit slightly inferior candidates in order to increase their diversity population and maintain a
dedicated alumni. In A is For Admission, Michele Hernandez mentions some of these discrepancies
when explaining that legacies, students with a parent who attended the university, have a forty
percent acceptance rate at Dartmouth in comparison with the typical ten percent acceptance rate
(183). Additionally, Hernandez further explains that athletes ... Show more content on
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Starting in high school, students are not given equal opportunities to excel because of family
background. Furthermore, the admissions process itself has its flaws–legacies, minorities, and
athletes are being chosen over exceptionally gifted valedictorians. Even after college, the problems
do not end; possible joblessness and student debt are unavoidable. On top of these major problems,
educators and parents continue to convince kids everywhere that college is the only option to
become successful, and choosing another path is heavily looked down upon. The newest
generation's life is centered around the climax of college while at the same time, more and more
students are unable to attend universities because of cost or rejection, but this is a paradox. The more
high schoolers work hard, the more high schoolers will get turned down to their dream schools, and
the more the college admissions process effectively become a lottery, leading to "many highly
talented, brilliant, creative people thinking they're not" (Robinson). The widespread college problem
has no easy fix, nor does it have a single solution. Rather than working to fix the unfixable, adults
must stop putting such emphasis on the college pathway, and instead stress that there are other
options. The future of the job world is unknown; there is no way to know if an expensive college
education is the right choice. College, with all of its flaws, is just one option in preparing for the
future; it is not necessarily the best. Therefore, the single word, "college," should stop dividing the
academic from the non–academic or the successful from the unsuccessful, and instead be considered
a single path in an array of worthy
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The College Admissions Process
Too often, today's culture sends young people messages that emphasize personal success rather than
concern for others and the common good (Konrath, O'Brien,
& Hsing, 2011; Putnam, 2005; Putnam, 2014; Weissbourd & Jones, 2014). And too often the college
admissions process–a process that involves admissions offices, guidance counselors, parents and
many other stakeholders–contributes to this problem. As a rite of passage for many students and a
major focus for many parents, the college admissions process is powerfully positioned to send
different messages that help young people become more generous and humane in ways that benefit
not only society but students themselves. Yet high school students often perceive colleges as simply
valuing
their
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College Admission Essay
From the very first day of freshmen year in high school, determining what college you will attend is
an idea constantly engraved into students' heads. Teachers apply a constant gentle pressure to
motivate students to get good grades, become involved in extracurricular activities, and find an area
of interest to assist in selecting a college major down the road. Students endure the four years of
high school, some working part–time jobs, to afford weekend entertainment, miscellaneous
expenses–such as Whataburger after a Friday night football game, or gasoline for their car.
However, the requirement to decide between a career and education is only beginning to become a
reality for many. Some students decided to take time off after their high school ... Show more
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The most prominent benefit being– preparation for my future career (Good Choices Good Life).
Attending a university gave me a skill set that would not have been nearly as prominent, had I
decided to not continue my higher education. College forces students to build relationships and
network– both skills required for success in the workforce. As this network of colleagues eventually
is will make an applicant more attractive to an employer. Each assignment completed enhances the
students' literacy skills–be it reading, writing, or
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Essay For College Admission
Four years ago, as a freshman in highschool, attending a liberal arts school was not important to me
or my aspirations. I just knew I wanted to go to a "good" college. I did not learn what liberal arts
really was until I was a senior in high school, and even then, it did not play as much of role in my
college decision process as it should have. To me, it just meant do I want to learn about more
subjects, or just my area of study. I had this form or thinking just one year ago, but now, as a
member of a liberal arts institution, I am finding a new appreciation for the importance of a liberal
arts education in my life because of the society that we live in today.
Upon first arriving to Spelman College my goal was to get good grades; to maintain a at least a 3.5
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I had wanted to be a biology pre–med major since middle school when I learned what a major was.
During new student orientation, I changed my major to Health Science because it will give me a
broader scope of science while still having a concentration on health care. Biology was too narrow
for me and I knew that I would not enjoy just taking biology related courses for my major
requirements all four years. As a health science major, I will have a strong background in areas of
study like chemistry, microbiology, and public health. Also, since I am pre–med, I have to take
physics, organic chemistry, and psychology. As a Spelman student, I have to take a foreign
language, a composition class, and an arts class. I have always just had a passion for learning, and
not just one specific subject. I enjoy learning about derivatives as well as how Africans migrated
from the homeland to all around the world. That is why I am greatful for this liberal arts education.
It will not only make me a great competitor in the field of work that I am going in to, but it also
encourages and quenches my thirst for
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College Admissions Narrative
The day of the ACT has come. I anxiously stumble toward an empty desk. The test proctor glares at
me as we begin. The other test takers seem so calm, with their #2 pencils lined up neatly on their
desks. All I have are #3 pencils! Even worse: I have showed up to the test in my underwear! As a
disclaimer, the above statements never physically occurred. However, nightmares like these seemed
to plague my mind during my sophomore and junior year. I knew very little of the ACT at the time; I
knew that it lasted about four hours, and that it was a paramount aspect in my college admissions
process. The thought of those four hours intimidated me, to say the least. I had no idea what to
expect. I felt helpless, I felt anxious, I felt unprepared. Wisconsin ... Show more content on
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Writing a good essay requires diligent planning, writing and proofreading; the ACT requires all of
the above completed in thirty minutes. Formulating anything more than a decent thesis in the time
allotment seemed impossible to me. However, this class broke down the tasks that I needed to
accomplish into manageable tasks. After a little bit of practice, a watch, and a couple #2 pencils, I
was ready to take on any sort of timed writing with ease. The essay preparation from Wisconsin Test
Prep continues to help me with my time management during SAT and AP timed writings. Most
importantly, the practice test administered at the end of the class allowed me to experience a realistic
ACT environment, and to ready myself for the three and a half hours of critical thinking and rapid
circle marking. I was more than a little anxious before the practice exam; I may have understood the
concepts, but application of those concepts was its own beast to conquer. As I proceeded through the
practice exam, however, I realized that the ACT was not the nightmare that I had expected. It was
just a test, and I was armed with the resources to conquer
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Pros And Cons Of College Admissions
When people start to look into colleges that they are interested in usually the first thing that they
look for are the things that they must have to get into that school. Most of the time we eliminate
college from our lists just from knowing the cost of going there. Most people can't afford to get in
without scholarships and don't have the resources to obtain those scholarships. Another problem that
many students have is a fear of tests, a lot of people taking the SAT's and the ACT's get too stressed
out on tests and can't focus, and with this they end up getting a score that doesn't really reflect what
they know. Many people just can't focus when it comes to a test room setting even if they know the
information on that test. On page one of this article it states that, "A new report released Wednesday
and endorsed by more than 80 colleges and universities nationwide is recommending some stunning
changes in the application process, including possibly making standardized testing optional or
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People from different backgrounds shouldn't have less of a chance to get into good schools just
because of where they come from. New reforms for admissions would not only benefit those with
less opportunities but also students that can't get in for sports or academics alone. Another problem
that people have when they start to consider college is the idea that only the most elite schools are
worth looking at when a smaller school or less well known school might be a better fit for what they
want out of life. You should pick where you want to go off to college by how well it fits with what
you want and need for yourself not what looks best on paper. No matter where you go you should be
happy with it and go to do something that you are interested in instead of just going for a job that
pays well or one that someone else pushed you
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College Admission Essay
Discovering and choosing a college that best suits my needs was a rigorous yet thrilling task. The
Fashion Institute of Design and Merchandising clearly came forth as the best choice for me to
further my education in design. Being unable to visit the college campus, as I live in New York, I've
done lots and lots of research about FIDM, and I realize the institute offers what I hope to gain from
my college experience. I've been very interested in Interior Design for a few years and FIDM stands
out as the prime institution to gain the knowledge to be a successful designer. As a prospective
student of FIDM, I'm expecting to receive the information and resources to become a successful
individual in the design community. While attending the college I ... Show more content on
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I'm the polar opposite. I've known for quite some time what I've wanted to do after high school as
interior design has been something I've loved for quite some time. With interior design, you have the
ability to completely alter someone's life by designing a room or some sort of space for them. At
FIDM I would work closely amongst others studying in interior design or other similar majors to
take full advantage of my education. With the college being strategically located in the heart of Los
Angeles, I would have lots and lots of resources and opportunities as an interior design student and I
hope to put them all to great use. After completing my 4–year bachelor's degree I hope to delve right
into a job in the interior design/decorating field. Taking advantage of my location, there will be a lot
of opportunities job related for me. In 10 or so years I would love to own my own design firm or
decorating business, and to be a very successful alumnus of the Fashion Institute of Design and
Merchandising. FIDM is who I am and where I want to
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My College Admissions
I am in an anomalous situation. I am an immigrant from Venezuela, have been living in the States
for 10 years as of September, and am not yet considered a permanent citizen. This has of course
circumscribed my options, but it has widened my perspective and encouraged my engagement in
academic activities to benefit the rigor of my academic profile. In the ongoing process of striving to
overcome my own limitations and deficits, I have grown to value assiduity and diligence. College
applications have surfaced, and I am definitely limited. Although, I grateful to have opportunities to
be able to attend an institution of higher education and hopeful to fulfill my potential.
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Montgomery College is located very close to home and I would not have to pay for housing or a
meal plan. If admitted, they cover the full academic cost of attendance, and grant a scholarship to
aid in funding whichever University I transfer to after the two years (Montgomery Scholars
Admissions). Even though this is a community college, their program is both well rounded and
academically rigorous. They require a minimum of 3.5 un–weighted GPA and a 600 on all of the
sections of the SAT to qualify for applying (Montgomery Scholars Admissions). They are not as
selective as Columbia University or the University of Chicago, but it is a safe choice that offers
chemical, aerospace, mechanical, and computer engineering which are the majors that interest me
(More Than 130). Apart from harboring an academically challenging atmosphere on campus,
Montgomery College is concerned with establishing a bond between the twenty–five students that
make up the program. They host bonding activities like the "Sleeping–Bag Retreat" and the "Annual
Picnic in the Park" and both encourage and sponsor cultural pride and celebrations (Student Life).
My research has brought me to the conclusion that the Scholars Program has not been historically
diverse. Although the entire student body of Montgomery College is one of the most diverse of the
community colleges in the state, with around 40% minorities, and they, like Columbia University
and University of Chicago, seek higher attendance from ethnic minorities (Population Data).
Attending Montgomery College would be the most realistic option for me due to their affordable
cost, and they superficially suffice my criteria. Following the two years, I would transfer to a school
in the state
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Opportunities For College Admissions
Throughout my academic career there have been numerous opportunities granted to me. I have been
fortunate to have taken all advance placement, honors, and college courses that have been offered.
By taking these preparatory classes I have achieved my High School requirements early and earned
the privileged to participate in programs such as New Visions and College Connections. These
programs allow me to get hands on experience in the field of study that interests me as well as help
me obtain additional college credits prior to my freshman year in college.
Not only have there been multiple educational opportunities for me during the school year, but I also
had the ability to do internships or summer enrichment programs throughout my summers.
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Essay On College Admission
Many colleges in the United States (U.S.) take a holistic approach in determining who to accept that
will maintain or raise their status as an educational institution. Colleges certainly look at one's
intellectual ability through grades, standardized tests and essays, but one's involvement within a
community, social and economic background, and other social skills are also considered. The
socialization throughout one's life is an important determinant in getting accepted to a college.
Applying to a college in the United States from Japan is a unique and uncommon option, but
compared to other Japanese students, I had many social factors that intentionally and unintentionally
contributed to my college acceptances. At the same time, some aspects–the distinct education and
community of Japan–hindered my preparation for American colleges. Although I had limited
resources compared to domestic students, numerous social factors, such as the educational
experience of my family and myself, the social and cultural capitals exclusive to me, and the social
forces of tracking and labeling of a wider community affected my chances of getting into college.
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Since a young age, my parents would always push me to study hard, often times helping me out with
school work. Their eagerness for me to succeed academically reflected in sufficient school grades,
and resulted in college acceptances. Also, my research skills, such as the ability to look up
information on the internet was a valuable skill that I have acquired living in my community.
Without such a skill, I would not have been able to retrieve information concerning colleges abroad
because of my limitation of other resources. The cultural capital that I possess from living in my
community helped me get into
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Essay Of College Admission
The success and recognition that the school of Literature, Science, and the Arts has received over
many decades has drawn me to the belief that this is the designated school for me. I have always
dreamt of becoming a Michigan Wolverine and pursuing a college education in the field of biology
and psychology. Given the level of difficulty of being accepted into this program, it has only
empowered me to work more vigorously than ever before. There are several unique qualities that
attract me to this specific undergraduate college: the various programs and majors it offers and the
opportunity to be admitted to a higher–level institute within the university.
The renowned school of LSA offers more than enough courses to ensure that I'll be successful in my
future careers. I'm very fond of the comprehensive studies program for undergraduate students, in
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If perhaps I decide to switch majors, I'll have a wide range of various studies to choose from. In
view of, there are more than 3,000 classes available each semester.
Lastly, preferred admission supports my interests because it gives me the option of possibly
transferring into an upper–level program. This can be a way to enhance my intellectual abilities
because it requires me to meet certain prerequisites during my freshman year before getting
accepted into an upper–level establishment.
The school of LSA is the desired freshman college for me because they seek out students who are
looking to tackle tough problems and to impact the world. I would classify myself as being one of
those goal–driven students with enough tenacity to never give up. I strongly believe that the
University of Michigan can suit my curricular needs because it offers of multitude of programs that
are geared toward ensuring that undergraduate students receive more one–on–one attention and that
they experience a sleek transition to college
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College Admissions Essay
I am a southern bred leader, pursuer, and helper whos mission is to spread peace, love, unity, and
respect among many to create a world of cheerfulness and brotherhood. I am Austin William
Carricoand this is my story. All my life I have lived in the small town of Crestview and grew up
among the wilderness along with its inhabitants. As the town grew exponentially into a vast city, my
heart, my mind, and my soul grew with it, learning the ways to help others and slowly turning from
a boy to the young man I am today. I now attend Collegiate High School continuing my journey at
the ripe age of fifteen, still promoting peace as a mission for others even when I left my former
school, Niceville High. Just like many others, I have many interests that define me, but only a
handful that descriptively set me apart from everyone else on this planet. One of those interests ...
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My devoton to my studies is clearly shown through my participation at Collegiate High School, but
I plan to go even further. My goal is to become a doctor, majoring in radiology. I have made straight
As throughout my ninth grade year and plan to continue this success well on in my years at the
universities I plan on going to. As soon as I finish my schooling here at Collegate High School, I
plan on going to the University of Florida to earn my Bachelor's Degree and then from there, I plan
on going to an ivy league school, Harvard. From there, I will earn my Doctorate in Radiology and
work as a Radiologist in central Florida. This interes, along with the other two that primarily make
up me, have shown me light at the end of the tunnel and I plan to exploit it positively in the best
way, shape, and fashion with the help of many great friends, teachers, and loved ones that have
supported me from the day I was made present in their
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The Competition For Admission Into College
The competition for admission into college can be extremely tough, and a gap year, especially a
mandatory one, can lead to even greater competition than before. When searching through
application upon application, universities tend to look for students who have "passionate
involvement in a few in or out of school activities" as well as "out of school experiences including
work, community service, youth organizations, religious groups, etc." (IECA, 1). Many universities
look out for not only a student's GPA throughout their high school years, but also the
extracurriculars and experiences the student has gone through in order to find the handful of
applicants that are deemed the "cream of the crop." By adding the mandatory gap year for all
students to the educational system, the students who are aiming to be accepted into the top
universities of the nation will essentially have another year of school to go through because of their
need to have their college application look the most polished and unique out of all the others. Yet a
vast majority of the applicants will have similar–looking application forms because of the actions
they are all taking to appear as the best. However, that specific "king of the hill" type mindset is
what creates the cookie–cutter applicants many universities face today, and the arrival of a
mandatory gap year could magnify the problem with more and more students trying to outshine each
other in the fight for the top. Gap years allow students to
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How To Be Successful In College Admissions
Thank you for your interest in the University of West Alabama! Your hard work during high school
has prepared you to be successful in college. Finding your perfect school is a process that cannot be
completed over night. The first step in the admissions process is to submit your admissions applicant
and learn the acceptance requirements. Each school has different requirements, so make sure to
make note of the ACT/ SAT and high school GPA baseline.
At the University of West Alabama, we have all of the admissions application available on our
website. Submitting your admissions application shows UWA you are interesting in learning more
about our institution. A $40 application fee is required before the application can be processed.
Completing
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Essay On College Admissions
Do College Admissions Properly Ensure the Future?
The future is always something many fear, and more so than others at different milestones of life.
An example of this is when it comes time for college admissions. Students around the world begin
to question their worth through scores and grades. Is this how we want the future of America to be
based off of, rather than the content of someone's character? Test scores and grades aren't truly
accurate to accept someone into a college because test scores can be inaccurate due to digital
systems and databases, humans express themselves in actions, not numbers, and grades are more so
a scale of compliance.
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These can be applied through submission of artwork and videos of performances or showcases.
Universities look for students who can succeed on campus to later bring revenue back from their
success or bring in prospects. Colleges can't truly choose them if they judge a book by its cover. If
we judged some of our current world–shakers based on their academic success, we wouldn't
acknowledge and appreciate some of the things we do today. When a person pushes themselves to
the next level of education, they deserve to be judged by their character and their human expression.
Grades are not enough to show someone's aspirations in life. Test scores are not enough to exhibit
someone's aspirations in life.
Lastly, grades are often a scale of compliance on the teachers and student's parts. Although we like
to believe everyone's education is equal, not everyone has the same opportunities to set themselves
apart or understand the material. Teachers that are ready to be on the job every day with the best
attitude are the ones that students latch on to and really want to learn from. Students that listen in
class because the teacher is involving them and not just giving the bare minimum, are the ones that
stand out. Education standards should change to make sure that teachers are not only giving
information but planning how they give out information in an engaging
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Graduation Speech : College Admissions
During a typical high school graduation, speeches are given by a select few, notable students. These
notable students normally include the two students who earned the highest grade point averages out
of all the students in their graduating class – the valedictorian and the salutatorian. Imagine a
graduation, however, with no valedictorian or salutatorian speech. Imagine if there was no
valedictorian or salutatorian. Imagine if there was no distinction of students ' academic performance
during commencement or during the process of college admissions. While it may seem like no big
deal – it may sound like a blessing when the length of a graduation ceremony is considered – the
impact of a class ranking extends far beyond the privilege of giving a speech on graduation day.
Class rankings are a vital component of high schools, and eradicating them would be detrimental to
both colleges and students in many ways. Class rankings provide colleges with data needed for
evaluating applicants. Some colleges have a plethora of applicants and need a simple way to narrow
the pool down, while others use the information for awarding scholarships. Knowing that a student
pushed himself or herself to be the best makes the process easier. In a study of 2,175 high schools by
the National Association of Secondary School Principals (NASSP), it was found that "the 1,109
college admissions officers who responded to the survey said class rankings are among the four
most important factors considered on
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College Admission Essay
of reference, I realized I needed fraternity. I realized I needed camaraderie. I realized I needed to be
a Whiffenpoof.
Early in my college career, I became disenchanted with the difference between what I needed
college to be and what college had actually become. Instead of camaraderie, I received mandates
from college administrators who directed me to look at the students to the front, back, and both sides
of me, and then realize two of those four students would not survive their first semester of college.
Instead of harmonious renderings from a place called Mory's. I received dire warnings from faculty
members who predicted a mass exodus of students from the pre–med curriculum and eventual
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As I completed my latest poem and wondered if anyone else would ever read it, Lori Green quietly
entered the back of the classroom and sat down to recover from her own case of self–inflicted
heartburn.
Anxious to get her mind off her cooking and curious as to why I was talking to myself,
gesticulating, and appearing totally removed from terra firma, Lori approached me. Realizing
nothing more serious than poetry was the cause of my aberrant behavior, she introduced herself.
Hearing Lori speak to me was like something from one of my wildest fantasies. Lori was a
downright, out–and–out, bona fide vision. She was tall and had long, brown hair. Her dark, wavy
hair perfectly accented a pair of deep brown eyes that appeared as magnetic fields from which I
knew there would be no escape.
Her voice was as soft as silk, and it seemed to slide through lips that managed to form all the right
words in just the right way. She had a body that was perfectly built for comfort, and legs that started
somewhere in the stratosphere before subtly working their way back down to
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Essay On College Admission
Growing up in Philadelphia, I am well acquainted with University of Pennsylvania and its campus. I
am a frequent flier of Children's Hospital of Philadelphia, so walking through the campus nearly
every day, gave me some insight. I remember seeing students sitting and eating lunch on a giant,
broken button that is located in the middle of the campus, and I remember the beautiful red library
that students would rush in and out of during finals week. I sat on the button statue, and realized,
"Yeah, I want to go here." From that day on, I was determined to enter your institution.
Now that I'm older, and I realize now that college isn't exactly something you can pick just from
sitting on a statue on the campus, I did my research. I am a first generation college student, so I have
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Due to this, I had to put my trust in people that have been to college and that could give me some
tips on how to pick one. One person I asked was actually my plastic surgeon, Dr. Scott Bartlett, who
I believe is a professor at your institution. Of course, since he works there, I'm sure he would give a
positive review no matter how bad the school is, but what he said was somewhat relatable, he said,
"It just feels right." During this past year, I have been visiting many different colleges in the area,
but your visit just stuck with me. I remember the Wharton School the most actually, because I
thought it was really interesting how the different business quads would name themselves after a
world currency and compete with one another. I'm still secretly cheering the Pesos on, since I think
their name sounds the best. Although, I have no interest in business. My real interest is medicine,
but on a undergraduate tour, they don't show you the medical school. I walked towards the Perelman
anyway and I sat in the park with a pond full of coy fish, slowly feeding pieces of my hoagie I just
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Essay On College Admission
I have learned a great deal both through formal and informal education up to this point and am
thrilled to embark on my next stage of development. I really see the college search a lot like music.
There are a plethora of options out there, but it is a very personal choice which one is right for you.
Some like rock, others like pop, but no matter what genre speaks to you most, the favorite choice
speaks to people deeply and inspires them tremendously. When I looked at the campus of New
Jersey City University I knew my heart was singing for me to go there. Researching the area, the
facilities, the programs, and the demographic was like a perfect symphony all coming together at
once. I am attending college with the very specific goal in mind to become a mogul in the music
industry; therefore I need to engulf myself in the best programs available. In ... Show more content
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It was back in high school. My second year being in my audio class, we did a project where we were
only allowed to use GarageBand and I was working with a first year student who was about to track
vocals. You could tell he was nervous, being so new to everyone. So I done everything I could to
make him feel more comfortable. I even walked around the facility and sang along with him for a
bit. But then he became so open with me and really was able to enjoy himself and thus tracking one
great song. And that was it. Moments like that is what made me enjoy myself. There is nothing that I
enjoy more than working with people, making people happy, and of course music, and once you
combine them together, it becomes one of the most sensational activities someone could do. To be
able to sit down and collaborate with a group of people and help them create this beautiful piece of
art. Then they will go and put all their faith and trust in you to get really creative and help their art
come to
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College Admissions Study
Lynch suggests that data compiled by other sources should be studied to reach a fair decision. At the
conclusion of the study UC was found not to discriminate based on race. What was not stated;
however, was that all applicants were not judged by the same standards. Lynch's ends with an
opinion that believes that race still remains an important factor in the admission processes at the
UC's (Lynch 1996). Throughout the years and after several protests and other investigations, these
universities admitted that there were problems with these admission policies, but never admitted any
deliberate wrongdoing to the communities affected. These admissions policies were implemented to
improve the racial diversity of student populations. Increasing the ... Show more content on
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Affirmative action seeks to rectify the past and current systemic oppression in American society to
provide minorities with opportunities to succeed on a level playing field. Although it was born out
of the struggle during the Civil Rights Movement, affirmative action has gradually transitioned into
its own specific movement, while gaining wide acceptance at universities and among employers in
the public and private sector. Affirmative action combats racism on the forefront, attempting to
deliver the promise of equal opportunity to those systematically oppressed. Successes of the
implementation of affirmative action are white women and people of color have gained access to
higher education and professional jobs in such significant numbers that over the last twenty years
there has been a dramatic rise in income for a growing number of individuals from these groups.
These advances in the progress of minorities in America signals the transition towards a more equal
society. The question, however, still remains: is affirmative action justified. Asian Americans are
still the primary victims of reverse discrimination in many higher level education institution today.
Although fostering diversity is important in forming a more equal and prepared society.
unfortunately, structural barriers, as described by Wilson in Being Poor, Black, and American, still
exist to hinder the achievement of diversity in the nation's
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College Admissions
Admissions plays a large role in the American system of higher education. From the time high
school students cross the threshold of adolescence, they are prepped to become "well–rounded"
applicants in order to please colleges and give the student a chance at admission. But what exactly is
the American admissions system based off of? It's not the black and white world that college
applicants hope it will be, with all qualified applicants earning a place at any given university.
Instead, the world of admissions is one of many different colors and dimensions that require some
exposition into their wants and needs for students. Throughout this particular attempt to shine some
light on the admissions process and background, the differences of elitist ... Show more content on
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It is quite easy to see that all the admissions frills and promises from the other forms of colleges
have been washed away by necessity. For example, the Athens Tech websitre doesn't have any calls
for adventure, just like they don't advertise any minimum SAT scores or grade point averages
(Admissions Athens Tech). The community college simply tells people how to apply with no extra
attempts to draw in specific students, because they are deeply rooted in the idea that, if the people
need job retraining, they will come to us, because that is the community college's primary purpose.
It is not exclusive in anyway, letting in students from all walks of like, high school students, high
school dropouts, adults, etc. and offering them the possiblity of simply training them for regional
specific jobs or letting them gain college credit before they move onto a larger institution. This
results in community colleges disregarding the idea that there is a certain student that they are
looking for, they simply allow to get the education that they feel is vital to them and their career,
which makes admissions into community college the antithesis to that of liberal arts colleges,
because the college offers education to as any as possible, not on the critirea of what can they bring
to the institution, but how can the institution serve the students in the best way possible in order to
secure their
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College Admissions Is Unconstitutional
Heidi Cruz believes that allowing race to be part of College admissions is unconstitutional. It is
unconstitutional because people should not be judged by the color of their skin but on the level of
knowledge they contain. Only allowing white people into certain Colleges is unfair because both
groups have the ability to reach a certain level. She strongly believes that the education you receive
should be decided on the work you have done and how much effort you put into getting into a
college. It seems wrong to have your future put to waste just because you are not white, just because
you don't have great opportunities or privileges. It is not necessary to judge students on their
appearance, you can't just look at a colored person as if they were nothing. ... Show more content on
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According to Regents of the University of California Blake, "It upheld affirmative action, allowing
race to be one of several factors in college admission policy." In other words, race interfered with
whether or not you got an education. Amendment 14 states, "...nor shall any State deprive any
person of life, liberty, or property, without due process of law..." This proves that race deciding
whether or not you get into a college is unconstitutional because any person has the liberty of
getting a good education. Skin color or race shouldn't be the key to your success. Life is about
succeeding and where you come from should not decide whether or not you get an education. The
court can't just deprive someone of their education just because the color of their skin isn't the same
as the color of higher class
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College Admissions Officers
College admissions officers say the worst essays they read on college applications are self–absorbed
recitals of high–school achievements: the what–I–learned–by–working–so–hard–a s–yearbook–
editor essay, the I–went–to–Europe–and–learned–how–complex–the–world–is essay and the how–
to–solve–world–hunger–and–all–the–other–world–problems essay. The best essays, the officers say,
are those that reveal something about the author's personality. They often do it in an originial way,
and, usually, read like an entry from someone's diary. Describing what he looked for, one admissions
officer said, ''I want to see what makes someone tick.'' Fifty of the best essays selected by
admissions officers at top colleges have been collected by two Yale students, Brian Kasbar and
Boykin Curry, in a new book, ''Essays That Worked: 50 Essays From ... Show more content on
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'' 'Chill out,' she said. 'Scarecrow, you won't need brains if you take an S.A.T. prep course. Sterling,
don't worry; hearts hardly count. Dandelion, you are unlikely to work no matter where you go, but
you would not be alone at Harvard. And now you Dorothy. All along you have had the ivy slippers.
Nothing can stand in your way. You are going to Brown.' '' And Dorothy (Mr. Cooper) did. A One–
Act Musical Among the ''Offbeat Essays,'' Matt Weingarden, a Yale applicant, wrote a one–act
musical in which he plays himself. His best friend is named Sponge and a chorus comments on
Matt's description of why he wants Yale and why Yale should want him. To the tune of ''When
Johnny Comes Marching Home,'' the chorus sings: ''Oh, Matt is applying to Yale on his knees,
Accept! Accept! Academically, socially, artistically, he's Adept! Adept! With his sharp sense of
humor he knocks us all out, He is the candidate we highly tout And our song may be stale But Matt
ought to get into
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Is The College Admissions Standards? Essay
It's Hard to be Accepted The college admissions standards in America today are more rigorous and
in depth than they have ever been but can also be somewhat unfair. The process of applying can be
quite stressful for students and parents alike as they try to successfully weave their way through an
expansive application that includes everything from essays to transcripts and so much more. And
while the feeling of being accepted leads to true exuberance because of all that hard work (as I can
personally attest to), the feeling of being denied can rival it in intensity without a doubt (as I
unfortunately can also confirm). As college becomes more and more encouraged in high schools
across the nation, and as the number of college applicants continues to grow there will continue to
be more of those students who are not accepted to a certain school, granted there is a place for
everyone. But this phenomenon brings up a simple question; why? Students are left to ponder why
they didn't receive admission in many cases, as no college that I know of gives an actual reason as to
why acceptance was granted or denied. Luckily we do have some information supplied by schools
and other various sources on what factors are the most important to schools. While we may not like
all of what we find when taking a closer look, it is still interesting nonetheless. Let us first take a
look at what students must go through to give themselves a chance to meet the admissions standards
at
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Letter To College Admission
I am writing this letter to inform the Admissions Committee that given an acceptance, I fully intend
on attending MSUCHM. After visiting the campus on Interview Day, learning about the University's
mission and the Shared Discovery Curriculum, I am fully confident in my decision.
Being put through the pressure of college over the last four years, I have benefitted the most by
having the opportunity to learn about myself. I learned what motivated me, understood how I
learned, and most importantly, what my weaknesses were. Unbeknownst to me on my first day, my
college experience has been a means of preparing me academically and emotionally for the
challenges of medical school.
The HUDA Clinic has served as a conduit for me to understand my
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Marketing and College Admissions
For centuries, studying at a university has been a common notion that many young people aspired
to. With time, this idea grew to become an expected step in the lives of young adults. Regardless of
how regular and expected this life decision may seem, the decision to attend a particular institution
to pursue one's postsecondary education is quite possibly the most important decision one will make
in their early adulthood. However, these choices and decisions are only as good as the information
on which they are based. So what can schools do to make sure that they remain on the radar for
prospective students? More importantly, what can small private liberal arts colleges, like Salem
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Each step in the system should involve some form of contact that has a "specific action–oriented,
measurable task" (College Recruitment Practices, n.d.). The goals in these systems can range from
simply encouraging a campus visit early in the funnel process, to eventually attempting to get the
applicant to send in their confirmation. These thoughts can be communicated in a variety of ways,
but studies show that there are certain methods of communication that are much more effective. The
most successful methods of contact are mail, telephone, electronic media, and personal contact.
However, an important note is that these methods of communication are only effective if they are
made on the personal level and the prospective student can feel the one–on–one connection building
between them and the people at the institution. It is important for the process to individualized;
throughout the college search process students are likely to become cultured consumers as they filter
through the massive amounts of information that they are bombarded with–this can be very
overwhelming and numerous studies and surveys have found that students are likely to ignore all
forms of communication that are not explicitly directed towards them, personally. The absolute most
effective recruitment technique is for an admissions counselor to visit
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The Pros And Cons Of College Admissions
all of this pressure society puts on teenagers can create mad anxiety. College admissions are highly
selective to add on to this process of stress. With college becoming harder and harder to get in to this
means "more admissions tests, more rigorous classes, more applications, more college tours" (great
schools.org) the stress in students increases creating a non–pleasant experience when applying to
college. Lloyd Thacker says "college admissions should be educational" (great schools. Org) but the
process has just become an unwanted amount of stress that is piled onto all of the other things high
school students are dedicated too. Not only do students have to dedicate time to all of the activities
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You'll find you will begin to connect with schools you adore the most and the ones you don't.
students cannot really change how colleges re accepting and denying students but they can come to
a realization that applying to college and getting accepted is much like a lottery, you never really
know until you have taken the chance but rule out the chances you've got. The last solution for
college admissions stress is a broader solution, have the colleges pay for sat and act score reports,
instead of students paying a load of money to take a rigorous test that may or may not determine
whether or not the student gets into the school they are applying to. Making the college pay for the
test will save the students money and "the colleges are less likely to order the score reports until
decisions are windowed down." (Washingtonpost.com) in the end college can be stressful and if the
student doesn't get accepted into their school do something with the rejection letters, get tighter with
friends and have a burning party of the rejection it could be a freeing experience to all of the stress
that has been built up because of the
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Discrimination in College Admissions
Discrimination in College/University Admissions There can be many factors that determine whether
or not you can get into a college. Do you have the grades, are you involved in your community, have
you been convicted. Many questions like those listed above have been commonly asked to
applicants who apply for major colleges universities. However, you are never asked your ethnicity
during an interview, usually they give you an application to fill out and they have a space that allows
you to check which race you are. Some people feel as though they may have been discriminated
against because of their race or ethnicity. It may be true for some, but not all cases are alike, in the
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Colleges might also look at creating a more diverse campus as a way to prevent those lawsuits,
because if the media starts getting reports of there being an overflow of white students at a college
or university ran by a white man or woman, they look dubious, and just racist, but if they start
accepting more minorities into their school, spreading a little color over the campus, in a sense, then
they look more appealing to applicants who want that diversity in their dream school. Plus it shows
good when schools are being taken to court for discrimination. If they show the statistics, the
numbers, of the racial diversity, then that builds on their case. If they show a pie chart and 75% of
the chart is green, and green represents white for example, then that makes the school look bad,
ultimately allowing a jury to see a possibility of discrimination, but if it's near equal for minorities
and whites, etc. , then it's good for the school. Making their case more believable. Debacles like this
may never end for years to come because we need diversity in public places, without it, it would be
like the Civil Rights era all over again, and we don't need any more violent protests like we have
today. I
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Admission Into College
It is an unfortunate reality of the 21st century that admission into college is no longer a natural and
calm transition made by young students as they enter adulthood. The pressure of competition for
academic excellence escalates rampantly throughout high school and multiplies ten–fold at the
mention of standardized testing and college applications. It leaves students nervously exhausted by
the time that the thought of college presents itself in the first place. The unfortunate reality of the
American educational system as of 2015 is that all students suffer from some degree of admission–
induced anxiety because high school is an environment that fosters in students an overwhelming and
constant consideration for their futures, and it is part ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ...
These thoughts in turn yield anxiety because the ingrained beliefs in the necessity of a perfect
academic track record stick in students' minds. Typically, students are able fall back on emotional
support systems that they build for themselves by focusing on their present selves and their passions
in a healthy manner. It is in becoming so focalized on securing their futures through immense effort
at school that students forget to listen to their mental needs as young adults, and they become far
more vulnerable to school–induced anxiety in the absence of effective emotional support
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College Admissions Essay
College Admissions Essay College is a very important time in anyone's life. It's a time where boys
and girls turn into men and women. It's a time where people learn valuable life skills, and how to
live on their own. Choosing the right college is an incredibly important decision. Colleges come in a
wide variety of shapes and sizes, specialties and strong points, as well as cultures and diversities. As
a senior that will soon be on my way to a college is campus, it is vital for me to figure how I will fit
in with the rest of the student body. As a human I have a unique mindset, just like everyone else,
complete with values and morals that differ from everyone else's. I also have a unique high school
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There are a lot of negative Nancy's out there and I try to be a positive Paul so to speak. I do my best
to keep a smile on my face and make my peers laugh, even if I am not feeling so well myself. I
believe life is a lot easier with a smile on your face and so I try to be that person every day; smiling,
joking, laughing, and trying to make others happy. I try to make a conscious effort to help out people
by holding doors, helping people carry stuff, and helping with academic studies whenever possible. I
believe this is the best way for me to be a positive influence on those around
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College Admission Essay
Maya Angelou once said "My mission in life is not merely to survive, but to thrive; and to do so
with some passion, some compassion, some humor, and some style". I believe that some people are
complacent with mediocrity and therefore do not try to excel to their highest potential. As for me,
furthering my future by attending college will help rise above the horizon of being average. I want
to put my willing, intellectual, open mindedness, and so much more to good use.
I was born and raised in Brooklyn, New York. Living in New York has show me the meaning of a
hard knock life also it has given me gratitude because I have seen and hear more overwhelming
problems than mines.What have you gained from being from New York? How has it made you who
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Being in this school has helped me explore my abilities. I learned how to crochet, and knit from my
8th grade science teacher. My journalism teacher believed in my intelligent and now I take part in
student council. This school have thought a real support system because they want nothing but to
see you be outstanding. How? What are you involved in at school? While attending the School for
Human Rights I have been afforded the opportunity to take college level courses at Brooklyn
College. Participating in College Now provided me with the chance to receive college credits.
Taking the college now class has giving me a understandance of the level of intensity that I will
have to perform at. This college class taught me true mean of studying whether it was by myself or
with a group. What else has being in College Now taught you? I believe that I have a calling to help
others that cannot help them. I am passionate about utilizing my personal time to serve the
community surrounding me. In my high school and church I make desserts for bake sales to raise
funds for school and church use's. I involve myself in my local church by being a part of the
Multimedia Coordinator team. Every year I interact with homeless shelters because my mom and I
cook meals and bring clothes for them. I take pleasure in giving back and helping because I like to
encounter different people and see the diversity. While focusing on my studies I will participate
organization, and club to continue making a change. Connect community service with
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College Admission Essay
Beginning college is like being reborn into the world. You begin your first day with a blank slate,
and a thousand fears to go with it. Last year, I started my new life at Saginaw Valley State
University. As a fresh graduate of New Lothrop High School, I had no idea what to expect from the
world past the cornfields that used to surround me everyday at school. With a deep breath, I
gathered everything I learned from my time at New Lothrop and jumped into my new world. My
past lessons of leadership, responsibility and dedication prepared me for college, but I still have
many more to learn.
As I was beginning my freshman year of college, I could only imagine what it would be like until I
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Currently, I am pursuing a biochemistry major. As a freshman, I predict my future plans will change
as I grow and learn new things about myself, however, right now I plan on using my biochemistry
degree to obtain a job in the genetics field. Genetics has a number of opportunities that are being
created each day for new students who are interested in the mystery that makes all humans unique.
Once I obtain my bachelor of science degree in biochemistry, I have two main options to follow to
continue my education. My first option is to attend the University of Michigan to complete my
masters and PhD in human genetics to become a genetic researcher. My second option is to attend
medical school to become a medical geneticist. Both options are still very wide open, and I hope to
eventually see the right path for me. While waiting for that "eureka" moment, I plan on enjoying my
time at SVSU. I hope to study abroad during my junior year of school, and to become an assistant
researcher for a professor in either the biology or chemistry labs.
I am thankful for the opportunity to apply for your scholarship. College is for learning new things
about the world and yourself, and I hope that I make the most of it. I will always work hard for my
goals, and with your help, I will be one step closer to my
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The Impact of Legacy Status on College Admissions

  • 1. The Legacy Of College Admissions College admissions are simple. They check your GPA and ACT/SAT test scores and see if your scores match their expectations. If you do, they will take you. If you don't, they will reject you. What about if your score is in the middle? What if you don't quite meet their expectations, but you don't really fall below them? Legacy is like a tiebreaker or the cherry on top of the cake, but currently is a very controversial topic. Being a legacy student can cause a significant impact on the admission process. It also gives you a huge advantage over non–legacy students. Being a legacy student has the potential of getting you admitted into the college that you want, even if you don't meet all the requirements. UW should take legacy into ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Not that universities and colleges only do this for money, they also do this for tradition, better reputation, loyal students, and an overall appreciation for the college of the university. Having legacy students at the institution will greatly benefit UW by receiving donations from them. With colleges and universities becoming businesses, "the high rate of monetary support by legacies and their parents is viewed as crucial" for that institution to be financially sound and successful. Moreover, "over three–quarters of legacies have a parent with a high–status occupation, compared to about 62% of students with college degree parents and less than one–third of students with no degree parents." This means that the parents of legacy students are usually wealthier than non– legacies. This also means that with wealthier parents, the chance of a donation or donations to that college or university is most likely to substantially increase. Moving on, "legacies arrive on campus forming a distinct status group that is characterized by an abundance of economic, cultural and social capital." With economic capital, they are more likely to participate in activities and spend more money. And it is what colleges or universities desire, more money. By partaking in college or university activities, the student will grow fonder of it later on and might donate to support the institution. In the ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
  • 2.
  • 3. Sample College Admission All I have ever wanted was the chance to see my dreams come true. Palms sweaty, throat tight, and a sense of accomplishment radiating from my bones, the moment I walked off the stage at my middle school graduation, I knew that that was the beginning of the rest of my life. In high school, the most important goal for me was going to college and pursuing my dream of becoming an artist, then taking that success and finding a way to give back to the community and people that raised me. The Bonner Scholar Program will help me acquire the funds to achieve my goal in the long run. I was never sure what kind of artist I wanted to be but I have always known that no matter what I wanted to showcase my talent to the world. Ever since I was a small child ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... I was never discouraged from wanting to become an artist, my mom would buy me all types of paints and coloring pencils, the amount of paper we owned could fill up the entire apartment. When I was small it was just a hobby, but by the time I entered middle school I realized that if I shoved my heart and soul into getting better at my technique then I could become someone worth talking about. However, when I entered high school I realized that we do not have the kind of financial stability that it takes for me to acquire the learning that I desire. If I cannot work through college and cannot afford my books then I know that all I have worked for will go to waste. So as I said, I was never discouraged from wanting to become an artist, only discouraged from being able to. The only thing that has ever discouraged me from following my dreams has been the cost, and I know that I cannot become the best version of myself without help. And so that is why I want to join the Bonner Scholar Program because I know that I can do all that I have ever dreamed of doing at Allegheny. For students coming from low–income households, myself included, we see higher education as the road to more choices and ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
  • 4.
  • 5. College Admissions Are Pretty Simple College admissions are pretty simple. They check your GPA and ACT/SAT test scores and see if you match their expectations. If you do, they will take you. If you don't, they will reject you. What about if you are stuck in the middle? What if you don't quite meet their expectations, but you don't really fall below them? What's supposed to be a tie breaker or the cherry on top of the cake is now a very controversial topic. Being a legacy student can have a significant impact in the admission process, if you are one. It also gives you a huge advantage over non–legacy students. Being a legacy student has the potential of getting you admitted into the college that you want, even if you don't meet all the requirements. UW should take legacy into ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Not saying that universities and colleges only do this for money, they also do this for tradition, better reputation, loyal students, and an overall appreciation for the college of the university. Having legacy students at the institution will greatly benefit UW by receiving donations from them. With colleges and universities becoming businesses, "the high rate of monetary support by legacies and their parents is viewed as crucial" for that institution to be financially sound and successful. Moreover, "over three–quarters of legacies have a parent with a high–status occupation, compared to about 62% of students with college degree parents and less than one–third of students with no degree parents." This means that the parents of legacy students are usually wealthier than non– legacies. This also means that with wealthier parents, the chance of a donation or donations to the that college or university is most likely to substantially increase. Moving on, legacies arrive on campus forming a distinct status group that is characterized by an abundance of economic, cultural and social capital." With economic capital, they are more likely to participate in activities and spend more money. And that's what colleges or universities want, more money. By partaking in college or university activities, the student will be grow fonder of it later on and might donate to support the institution. In the ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
  • 6.
  • 7. College Admission Process Analysis I agree with the Harvard's proposed changes to the college admission process. Today, people are putting a lot of emphasis on grades, test, and other extracurricular activities. I believe this is not the most important thing we should be worried about. The stress is becoming greater and students are having higher expatiations about the ACTs and SATs. Also, the idea of emphasizing on the community involvement is a great way for colleges to receive a diverse student body. With the stress of ACTs and SATs, it is hard on us, students. Students are having less time to worry about being a kid and more time worry about grades and test. The article talked about teachers having high expectations for students grades, and they need to pull back on their ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
  • 8.
  • 9. College Admissions Essay Being a Filipino, I grew up in a culture where education is of utmost important. When I entered high school in the Philippines, I was surprisingly surrounded by deep–pocketed students with remarkable talents and intelligence. Not like everybody else, I came from a middle–class broken family but that did not stop me from going to school. Later on, I became friends with some of the popular students in our school, and suddenly, made me part of the top of the food chain. I, then realized, am as good as them, but not better. Thus, I genuinely promised myself that I will do better in college. Coming from a third–world country, it is quite overwhelming to enter college in a first–world country. My whole perception in life has been redefined due to the great opportunities being offered to me. However, it gives me the feeling of uncertainty on how life will turn out after ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Even though it costs a big fortune to earn a degree, I always seize my opportunities to improve myself; to discover my strengths and weakness; and to create new connections with other people. My parents have always told me that earning a degree is one of the most priceless possessions that anyone could have. Likewise, it is our invaluable tool to charm those employers and get the job that we highly desire. However, the effectiveness of a tool actually depends on the person who holds it. Thus, a proper utilization of a hard–earned degree in a targeted field would help me to obtain a valuable career. Certainly, a degree would give me pride and self–satisfaction as well. I can finally face the real world and proudly show it how much capable I am of achieving because I have a degree to prove it. Hence, earning a degree will be the symbol of my accomplishments, and the hard works and sacrifices of my parents, which will bring joy and happiness to my family despite of the daily life ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
  • 10.
  • 11. Graduation Speech : College Admission College Admission ACT, GPA, SAT, and writing ability are some major factors that Simpson college's admissions use when determining if a student will be accepted or not. Like most other school students must meet certain recommendations in these areas to even get accepted. I think that a student's ability to write should be the cornerstone of college admissions it allows the student to state their goals and values, can help be the deciding factor in the admission process, and it can be an opportunity for the students to display information they have learned over the years. When I was applying to Simpson, I felt the process was rather simple and easy. I don't remember any complications with applying. I think that applying to college for me was very simple as I only applied to Simpson College, Iowa State University, Waldorf University, and Cornell College. All four of these educational institutions had almost the same application process. From my experience, I believe that Simpson College has a simple application process. Students must send in their high school transcript along with their ACT or SAT scores and fill out the online application (First Year Students, n.d.). I feel the main purpose of the application is to see how the student will fit in at Simpson and learn the possible interests of the students in order to help expand education, hobbies, and activities. The online application asks simple questions to get most of the basic information about the student applying ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 13. College Admissions Essay Analysis Admissions essays are a critical piece of any student's application process. College admission officers investigate admissions essays for affirmation that an understudy has the capacity compose well and contend a theme in a firm way. The admissions essay you compose speaks to you as a potential student to the staff of the college and layouts your fundamental accomplishments. Admissions essays give forthcoming students a chance to personally present themselves and are, basically, the college's first subjective impression of them. Essay should be personal, convincing and effective. Your essay ought to demonstrate who you are, the place you've been and where you are going. Structures and air pocket sheets can't clarify a lifetime of work and development. ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Online Essay Editing Service experienced proficient editors comprehend the admissions procedure and how to make an essay that makes the best impression conceivable. Essays are an essential part of your application, presumably the hugest. Essays ought to mirror your personality, gifts and intrigues that are not clear from your resume or application. Grammatically erroneous and befuddling opening and determination sentences can bring about a reader to reject even the most persuading application letter. Since reader can choose in a moment regardless of whether to consider your admissions essay important, these sentences should be brief and linguistically sound. Editing serves to make the opening and shutting sentences that will get your admission essay noted, as well as ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
  • 14.
  • 15. College Admissions Flaws On top of exceptional students getting declined, prestigious schools are accepting less qualified students such as legacies, athletes, and minorities, contributing to the flawed system. Rather than admitting students based on their potential to succeed and personal attributes alone, universities often admit slightly inferior candidates in order to increase their diversity population and maintain a dedicated alumni. In A is For Admission, Michele Hernandez mentions some of these discrepancies when explaining that legacies, students with a parent who attended the university, have a forty percent acceptance rate at Dartmouth in comparison with the typical ten percent acceptance rate (183). Additionally, Hernandez further explains that athletes ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Starting in high school, students are not given equal opportunities to excel because of family background. Furthermore, the admissions process itself has its flaws–legacies, minorities, and athletes are being chosen over exceptionally gifted valedictorians. Even after college, the problems do not end; possible joblessness and student debt are unavoidable. On top of these major problems, educators and parents continue to convince kids everywhere that college is the only option to become successful, and choosing another path is heavily looked down upon. The newest generation's life is centered around the climax of college while at the same time, more and more students are unable to attend universities because of cost or rejection, but this is a paradox. The more high schoolers work hard, the more high schoolers will get turned down to their dream schools, and the more the college admissions process effectively become a lottery, leading to "many highly talented, brilliant, creative people thinking they're not" (Robinson). The widespread college problem has no easy fix, nor does it have a single solution. Rather than working to fix the unfixable, adults must stop putting such emphasis on the college pathway, and instead stress that there are other options. The future of the job world is unknown; there is no way to know if an expensive college education is the right choice. College, with all of its flaws, is just one option in preparing for the future; it is not necessarily the best. Therefore, the single word, "college," should stop dividing the academic from the non–academic or the successful from the unsuccessful, and instead be considered a single path in an array of worthy ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 17. The College Admissions Process Too often, today's culture sends young people messages that emphasize personal success rather than concern for others and the common good (Konrath, O'Brien, & Hsing, 2011; Putnam, 2005; Putnam, 2014; Weissbourd & Jones, 2014). And too often the college admissions process–a process that involves admissions offices, guidance counselors, parents and many other stakeholders–contributes to this problem. As a rite of passage for many students and a major focus for many parents, the college admissions process is powerfully positioned to send different messages that help young people become more generous and humane in ways that benefit not only society but students themselves. Yet high school students often perceive colleges as simply valuing their ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 19. College Admission Essay From the very first day of freshmen year in high school, determining what college you will attend is an idea constantly engraved into students' heads. Teachers apply a constant gentle pressure to motivate students to get good grades, become involved in extracurricular activities, and find an area of interest to assist in selecting a college major down the road. Students endure the four years of high school, some working part–time jobs, to afford weekend entertainment, miscellaneous expenses–such as Whataburger after a Friday night football game, or gasoline for their car. However, the requirement to decide between a career and education is only beginning to become a reality for many. Some students decided to take time off after their high school ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... The most prominent benefit being– preparation for my future career (Good Choices Good Life). Attending a university gave me a skill set that would not have been nearly as prominent, had I decided to not continue my higher education. College forces students to build relationships and network– both skills required for success in the workforce. As this network of colleagues eventually is will make an applicant more attractive to an employer. Each assignment completed enhances the students' literacy skills–be it reading, writing, or ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
  • 20.
  • 21. Essay For College Admission Four years ago, as a freshman in highschool, attending a liberal arts school was not important to me or my aspirations. I just knew I wanted to go to a "good" college. I did not learn what liberal arts really was until I was a senior in high school, and even then, it did not play as much of role in my college decision process as it should have. To me, it just meant do I want to learn about more subjects, or just my area of study. I had this form or thinking just one year ago, but now, as a member of a liberal arts institution, I am finding a new appreciation for the importance of a liberal arts education in my life because of the society that we live in today. Upon first arriving to Spelman College my goal was to get good grades; to maintain a at least a 3.5 grade point average ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... I had wanted to be a biology pre–med major since middle school when I learned what a major was. During new student orientation, I changed my major to Health Science because it will give me a broader scope of science while still having a concentration on health care. Biology was too narrow for me and I knew that I would not enjoy just taking biology related courses for my major requirements all four years. As a health science major, I will have a strong background in areas of study like chemistry, microbiology, and public health. Also, since I am pre–med, I have to take physics, organic chemistry, and psychology. As a Spelman student, I have to take a foreign language, a composition class, and an arts class. I have always just had a passion for learning, and not just one specific subject. I enjoy learning about derivatives as well as how Africans migrated from the homeland to all around the world. That is why I am greatful for this liberal arts education. It will not only make me a great competitor in the field of work that I am going in to, but it also encourages and quenches my thirst for ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 23. College Admissions Narrative The day of the ACT has come. I anxiously stumble toward an empty desk. The test proctor glares at me as we begin. The other test takers seem so calm, with their #2 pencils lined up neatly on their desks. All I have are #3 pencils! Even worse: I have showed up to the test in my underwear! As a disclaimer, the above statements never physically occurred. However, nightmares like these seemed to plague my mind during my sophomore and junior year. I knew very little of the ACT at the time; I knew that it lasted about four hours, and that it was a paramount aspect in my college admissions process. The thought of those four hours intimidated me, to say the least. I had no idea what to expect. I felt helpless, I felt anxious, I felt unprepared. Wisconsin ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Writing a good essay requires diligent planning, writing and proofreading; the ACT requires all of the above completed in thirty minutes. Formulating anything more than a decent thesis in the time allotment seemed impossible to me. However, this class broke down the tasks that I needed to accomplish into manageable tasks. After a little bit of practice, a watch, and a couple #2 pencils, I was ready to take on any sort of timed writing with ease. The essay preparation from Wisconsin Test Prep continues to help me with my time management during SAT and AP timed writings. Most importantly, the practice test administered at the end of the class allowed me to experience a realistic ACT environment, and to ready myself for the three and a half hours of critical thinking and rapid circle marking. I was more than a little anxious before the practice exam; I may have understood the concepts, but application of those concepts was its own beast to conquer. As I proceeded through the practice exam, however, I realized that the ACT was not the nightmare that I had expected. It was just a test, and I was armed with the resources to conquer ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 25. Pros And Cons Of College Admissions When people start to look into colleges that they are interested in usually the first thing that they look for are the things that they must have to get into that school. Most of the time we eliminate college from our lists just from knowing the cost of going there. Most people can't afford to get in without scholarships and don't have the resources to obtain those scholarships. Another problem that many students have is a fear of tests, a lot of people taking the SAT's and the ACT's get too stressed out on tests and can't focus, and with this they end up getting a score that doesn't really reflect what they know. Many people just can't focus when it comes to a test room setting even if they know the information on that test. On page one of this article it states that, "A new report released Wednesday and endorsed by more than 80 colleges and universities nationwide is recommending some stunning changes in the application process, including possibly making standardized testing optional or lessening its ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... People from different backgrounds shouldn't have less of a chance to get into good schools just because of where they come from. New reforms for admissions would not only benefit those with less opportunities but also students that can't get in for sports or academics alone. Another problem that people have when they start to consider college is the idea that only the most elite schools are worth looking at when a smaller school or less well known school might be a better fit for what they want out of life. You should pick where you want to go off to college by how well it fits with what you want and need for yourself not what looks best on paper. No matter where you go you should be happy with it and go to do something that you are interested in instead of just going for a job that pays well or one that someone else pushed you ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 27. College Admission Essay Discovering and choosing a college that best suits my needs was a rigorous yet thrilling task. The Fashion Institute of Design and Merchandising clearly came forth as the best choice for me to further my education in design. Being unable to visit the college campus, as I live in New York, I've done lots and lots of research about FIDM, and I realize the institute offers what I hope to gain from my college experience. I've been very interested in Interior Design for a few years and FIDM stands out as the prime institution to gain the knowledge to be a successful designer. As a prospective student of FIDM, I'm expecting to receive the information and resources to become a successful individual in the design community. While attending the college I ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... I'm the polar opposite. I've known for quite some time what I've wanted to do after high school as interior design has been something I've loved for quite some time. With interior design, you have the ability to completely alter someone's life by designing a room or some sort of space for them. At FIDM I would work closely amongst others studying in interior design or other similar majors to take full advantage of my education. With the college being strategically located in the heart of Los Angeles, I would have lots and lots of resources and opportunities as an interior design student and I hope to put them all to great use. After completing my 4–year bachelor's degree I hope to delve right into a job in the interior design/decorating field. Taking advantage of my location, there will be a lot of opportunities job related for me. In 10 or so years I would love to own my own design firm or decorating business, and to be a very successful alumnus of the Fashion Institute of Design and Merchandising. FIDM is who I am and where I want to ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 29. My College Admissions I am in an anomalous situation. I am an immigrant from Venezuela, have been living in the States for 10 years as of September, and am not yet considered a permanent citizen. This has of course circumscribed my options, but it has widened my perspective and encouraged my engagement in academic activities to benefit the rigor of my academic profile. In the ongoing process of striving to overcome my own limitations and deficits, I have grown to value assiduity and diligence. College applications have surfaced, and I am definitely limited. Although, I grateful to have opportunities to be able to attend an institution of higher education and hopeful to fulfill my potential. Recent legislation, like the Maryland Dream Act and contemporary progressive ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Montgomery College is located very close to home and I would not have to pay for housing or a meal plan. If admitted, they cover the full academic cost of attendance, and grant a scholarship to aid in funding whichever University I transfer to after the two years (Montgomery Scholars Admissions). Even though this is a community college, their program is both well rounded and academically rigorous. They require a minimum of 3.5 un–weighted GPA and a 600 on all of the sections of the SAT to qualify for applying (Montgomery Scholars Admissions). They are not as selective as Columbia University or the University of Chicago, but it is a safe choice that offers chemical, aerospace, mechanical, and computer engineering which are the majors that interest me (More Than 130). Apart from harboring an academically challenging atmosphere on campus, Montgomery College is concerned with establishing a bond between the twenty–five students that make up the program. They host bonding activities like the "Sleeping–Bag Retreat" and the "Annual Picnic in the Park" and both encourage and sponsor cultural pride and celebrations (Student Life). My research has brought me to the conclusion that the Scholars Program has not been historically diverse. Although the entire student body of Montgomery College is one of the most diverse of the community colleges in the state, with around 40% minorities, and they, like Columbia University and University of Chicago, seek higher attendance from ethnic minorities (Population Data). Attending Montgomery College would be the most realistic option for me due to their affordable cost, and they superficially suffice my criteria. Following the two years, I would transfer to a school in the state ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 31. Opportunities For College Admissions Throughout my academic career there have been numerous opportunities granted to me. I have been fortunate to have taken all advance placement, honors, and college courses that have been offered. By taking these preparatory classes I have achieved my High School requirements early and earned the privileged to participate in programs such as New Visions and College Connections. These programs allow me to get hands on experience in the field of study that interests me as well as help me obtain additional college credits prior to my freshman year in college. Not only have there been multiple educational opportunities for me during the school year, but I also had the ability to do internships or summer enrichment programs throughout my summers. ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 33. Essay On College Admission Many colleges in the United States (U.S.) take a holistic approach in determining who to accept that will maintain or raise their status as an educational institution. Colleges certainly look at one's intellectual ability through grades, standardized tests and essays, but one's involvement within a community, social and economic background, and other social skills are also considered. The socialization throughout one's life is an important determinant in getting accepted to a college. Applying to a college in the United States from Japan is a unique and uncommon option, but compared to other Japanese students, I had many social factors that intentionally and unintentionally contributed to my college acceptances. At the same time, some aspects–the distinct education and community of Japan–hindered my preparation for American colleges. Although I had limited resources compared to domestic students, numerous social factors, such as the educational experience of my family and myself, the social and cultural capitals exclusive to me, and the social forces of tracking and labeling of a wider community affected my chances of getting into college. The education history of my ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Since a young age, my parents would always push me to study hard, often times helping me out with school work. Their eagerness for me to succeed academically reflected in sufficient school grades, and resulted in college acceptances. Also, my research skills, such as the ability to look up information on the internet was a valuable skill that I have acquired living in my community. Without such a skill, I would not have been able to retrieve information concerning colleges abroad because of my limitation of other resources. The cultural capital that I possess from living in my community helped me get into ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 35. Essay Of College Admission The success and recognition that the school of Literature, Science, and the Arts has received over many decades has drawn me to the belief that this is the designated school for me. I have always dreamt of becoming a Michigan Wolverine and pursuing a college education in the field of biology and psychology. Given the level of difficulty of being accepted into this program, it has only empowered me to work more vigorously than ever before. There are several unique qualities that attract me to this specific undergraduate college: the various programs and majors it offers and the opportunity to be admitted to a higher–level institute within the university. The renowned school of LSA offers more than enough courses to ensure that I'll be successful in my future careers. I'm very fond of the comprehensive studies program for undergraduate students, in case I ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... If perhaps I decide to switch majors, I'll have a wide range of various studies to choose from. In view of, there are more than 3,000 classes available each semester. Lastly, preferred admission supports my interests because it gives me the option of possibly transferring into an upper–level program. This can be a way to enhance my intellectual abilities because it requires me to meet certain prerequisites during my freshman year before getting accepted into an upper–level establishment. The school of LSA is the desired freshman college for me because they seek out students who are looking to tackle tough problems and to impact the world. I would classify myself as being one of those goal–driven students with enough tenacity to never give up. I strongly believe that the University of Michigan can suit my curricular needs because it offers of multitude of programs that are geared toward ensuring that undergraduate students receive more one–on–one attention and that they experience a sleek transition to college ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 37. College Admissions Essay I am a southern bred leader, pursuer, and helper whos mission is to spread peace, love, unity, and respect among many to create a world of cheerfulness and brotherhood. I am Austin William Carricoand this is my story. All my life I have lived in the small town of Crestview and grew up among the wilderness along with its inhabitants. As the town grew exponentially into a vast city, my heart, my mind, and my soul grew with it, learning the ways to help others and slowly turning from a boy to the young man I am today. I now attend Collegiate High School continuing my journey at the ripe age of fifteen, still promoting peace as a mission for others even when I left my former school, Niceville High. Just like many others, I have many interests that define me, but only a handful that descriptively set me apart from everyone else on this planet. One of those interests ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... My devoton to my studies is clearly shown through my participation at Collegiate High School, but I plan to go even further. My goal is to become a doctor, majoring in radiology. I have made straight As throughout my ninth grade year and plan to continue this success well on in my years at the universities I plan on going to. As soon as I finish my schooling here at Collegate High School, I plan on going to the University of Florida to earn my Bachelor's Degree and then from there, I plan on going to an ivy league school, Harvard. From there, I will earn my Doctorate in Radiology and work as a Radiologist in central Florida. This interes, along with the other two that primarily make up me, have shown me light at the end of the tunnel and I plan to exploit it positively in the best way, shape, and fashion with the help of many great friends, teachers, and loved ones that have supported me from the day I was made present in their ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 39. The Competition For Admission Into College The competition for admission into college can be extremely tough, and a gap year, especially a mandatory one, can lead to even greater competition than before. When searching through application upon application, universities tend to look for students who have "passionate involvement in a few in or out of school activities" as well as "out of school experiences including work, community service, youth organizations, religious groups, etc." (IECA, 1). Many universities look out for not only a student's GPA throughout their high school years, but also the extracurriculars and experiences the student has gone through in order to find the handful of applicants that are deemed the "cream of the crop." By adding the mandatory gap year for all students to the educational system, the students who are aiming to be accepted into the top universities of the nation will essentially have another year of school to go through because of their need to have their college application look the most polished and unique out of all the others. Yet a vast majority of the applicants will have similar–looking application forms because of the actions they are all taking to appear as the best. However, that specific "king of the hill" type mindset is what creates the cookie–cutter applicants many universities face today, and the arrival of a mandatory gap year could magnify the problem with more and more students trying to outshine each other in the fight for the top. Gap years allow students to ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 41. How To Be Successful In College Admissions Thank you for your interest in the University of West Alabama! Your hard work during high school has prepared you to be successful in college. Finding your perfect school is a process that cannot be completed over night. The first step in the admissions process is to submit your admissions applicant and learn the acceptance requirements. Each school has different requirements, so make sure to make note of the ACT/ SAT and high school GPA baseline. At the University of West Alabama, we have all of the admissions application available on our website. Submitting your admissions application shows UWA you are interesting in learning more about our institution. A $40 application fee is required before the application can be processed. Completing ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 43. Essay On College Admissions Do College Admissions Properly Ensure the Future? The future is always something many fear, and more so than others at different milestones of life. An example of this is when it comes time for college admissions. Students around the world begin to question their worth through scores and grades. Is this how we want the future of America to be based off of, rather than the content of someone's character? Test scores and grades aren't truly accurate to accept someone into a college because test scores can be inaccurate due to digital systems and databases, humans express themselves in actions, not numbers, and grades are more so a scale of compliance. Often, test scores can be glitchy and inaccurate. In our modern age, students take ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... These can be applied through submission of artwork and videos of performances or showcases. Universities look for students who can succeed on campus to later bring revenue back from their success or bring in prospects. Colleges can't truly choose them if they judge a book by its cover. If we judged some of our current world–shakers based on their academic success, we wouldn't acknowledge and appreciate some of the things we do today. When a person pushes themselves to the next level of education, they deserve to be judged by their character and their human expression. Grades are not enough to show someone's aspirations in life. Test scores are not enough to exhibit someone's aspirations in life. Lastly, grades are often a scale of compliance on the teachers and student's parts. Although we like to believe everyone's education is equal, not everyone has the same opportunities to set themselves apart or understand the material. Teachers that are ready to be on the job every day with the best attitude are the ones that students latch on to and really want to learn from. Students that listen in class because the teacher is involving them and not just giving the bare minimum, are the ones that stand out. Education standards should change to make sure that teachers are not only giving information but planning how they give out information in an engaging ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 45. Graduation Speech : College Admissions During a typical high school graduation, speeches are given by a select few, notable students. These notable students normally include the two students who earned the highest grade point averages out of all the students in their graduating class – the valedictorian and the salutatorian. Imagine a graduation, however, with no valedictorian or salutatorian speech. Imagine if there was no valedictorian or salutatorian. Imagine if there was no distinction of students ' academic performance during commencement or during the process of college admissions. While it may seem like no big deal – it may sound like a blessing when the length of a graduation ceremony is considered – the impact of a class ranking extends far beyond the privilege of giving a speech on graduation day. Class rankings are a vital component of high schools, and eradicating them would be detrimental to both colleges and students in many ways. Class rankings provide colleges with data needed for evaluating applicants. Some colleges have a plethora of applicants and need a simple way to narrow the pool down, while others use the information for awarding scholarships. Knowing that a student pushed himself or herself to be the best makes the process easier. In a study of 2,175 high schools by the National Association of Secondary School Principals (NASSP), it was found that "the 1,109 college admissions officers who responded to the survey said class rankings are among the four most important factors considered on ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 47. College Admission Essay of reference, I realized I needed fraternity. I realized I needed camaraderie. I realized I needed to be a Whiffenpoof. Early in my college career, I became disenchanted with the difference between what I needed college to be and what college had actually become. Instead of camaraderie, I received mandates from college administrators who directed me to look at the students to the front, back, and both sides of me, and then realize two of those four students would not survive their first semester of college. Instead of harmonious renderings from a place called Mory's. I received dire warnings from faculty members who predicted a mass exodus of students from the pre–med curriculum and eventual acceptance of only a few students into medical school. ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... As I completed my latest poem and wondered if anyone else would ever read it, Lori Green quietly entered the back of the classroom and sat down to recover from her own case of self–inflicted heartburn. Anxious to get her mind off her cooking and curious as to why I was talking to myself, gesticulating, and appearing totally removed from terra firma, Lori approached me. Realizing nothing more serious than poetry was the cause of my aberrant behavior, she introduced herself. Hearing Lori speak to me was like something from one of my wildest fantasies. Lori was a downright, out–and–out, bona fide vision. She was tall and had long, brown hair. Her dark, wavy hair perfectly accented a pair of deep brown eyes that appeared as magnetic fields from which I knew there would be no escape. Her voice was as soft as silk, and it seemed to slide through lips that managed to form all the right words in just the right way. She had a body that was perfectly built for comfort, and legs that started somewhere in the stratosphere before subtly working their way back down to ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 49. Essay On College Admission Growing up in Philadelphia, I am well acquainted with University of Pennsylvania and its campus. I am a frequent flier of Children's Hospital of Philadelphia, so walking through the campus nearly every day, gave me some insight. I remember seeing students sitting and eating lunch on a giant, broken button that is located in the middle of the campus, and I remember the beautiful red library that students would rush in and out of during finals week. I sat on the button statue, and realized, "Yeah, I want to go here." From that day on, I was determined to enter your institution. Now that I'm older, and I realize now that college isn't exactly something you can pick just from sitting on a statue on the campus, I did my research. I am a first generation college student, so I have no background ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Due to this, I had to put my trust in people that have been to college and that could give me some tips on how to pick one. One person I asked was actually my plastic surgeon, Dr. Scott Bartlett, who I believe is a professor at your institution. Of course, since he works there, I'm sure he would give a positive review no matter how bad the school is, but what he said was somewhat relatable, he said, "It just feels right." During this past year, I have been visiting many different colleges in the area, but your visit just stuck with me. I remember the Wharton School the most actually, because I thought it was really interesting how the different business quads would name themselves after a world currency and compete with one another. I'm still secretly cheering the Pesos on, since I think their name sounds the best. Although, I have no interest in business. My real interest is medicine, but on a undergraduate tour, they don't show you the medical school. I walked towards the Perelman anyway and I sat in the park with a pond full of coy fish, slowly feeding pieces of my hoagie I just ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 51. Essay On College Admission I have learned a great deal both through formal and informal education up to this point and am thrilled to embark on my next stage of development. I really see the college search a lot like music. There are a plethora of options out there, but it is a very personal choice which one is right for you. Some like rock, others like pop, but no matter what genre speaks to you most, the favorite choice speaks to people deeply and inspires them tremendously. When I looked at the campus of New Jersey City University I knew my heart was singing for me to go there. Researching the area, the facilities, the programs, and the demographic was like a perfect symphony all coming together at once. I am attending college with the very specific goal in mind to become a mogul in the music industry; therefore I need to engulf myself in the best programs available. In ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... It was back in high school. My second year being in my audio class, we did a project where we were only allowed to use GarageBand and I was working with a first year student who was about to track vocals. You could tell he was nervous, being so new to everyone. So I done everything I could to make him feel more comfortable. I even walked around the facility and sang along with him for a bit. But then he became so open with me and really was able to enjoy himself and thus tracking one great song. And that was it. Moments like that is what made me enjoy myself. There is nothing that I enjoy more than working with people, making people happy, and of course music, and once you combine them together, it becomes one of the most sensational activities someone could do. To be able to sit down and collaborate with a group of people and help them create this beautiful piece of art. Then they will go and put all their faith and trust in you to get really creative and help their art come to ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 53. College Admissions Study Lynch suggests that data compiled by other sources should be studied to reach a fair decision. At the conclusion of the study UC was found not to discriminate based on race. What was not stated; however, was that all applicants were not judged by the same standards. Lynch's ends with an opinion that believes that race still remains an important factor in the admission processes at the UC's (Lynch 1996). Throughout the years and after several protests and other investigations, these universities admitted that there were problems with these admission policies, but never admitted any deliberate wrongdoing to the communities affected. These admissions policies were implemented to improve the racial diversity of student populations. Increasing the ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Affirmative action seeks to rectify the past and current systemic oppression in American society to provide minorities with opportunities to succeed on a level playing field. Although it was born out of the struggle during the Civil Rights Movement, affirmative action has gradually transitioned into its own specific movement, while gaining wide acceptance at universities and among employers in the public and private sector. Affirmative action combats racism on the forefront, attempting to deliver the promise of equal opportunity to those systematically oppressed. Successes of the implementation of affirmative action are white women and people of color have gained access to higher education and professional jobs in such significant numbers that over the last twenty years there has been a dramatic rise in income for a growing number of individuals from these groups. These advances in the progress of minorities in America signals the transition towards a more equal society. The question, however, still remains: is affirmative action justified. Asian Americans are still the primary victims of reverse discrimination in many higher level education institution today. Although fostering diversity is important in forming a more equal and prepared society. unfortunately, structural barriers, as described by Wilson in Being Poor, Black, and American, still exist to hinder the achievement of diversity in the nation's ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 55. College Admissions Admissions plays a large role in the American system of higher education. From the time high school students cross the threshold of adolescence, they are prepped to become "well–rounded" applicants in order to please colleges and give the student a chance at admission. But what exactly is the American admissions system based off of? It's not the black and white world that college applicants hope it will be, with all qualified applicants earning a place at any given university. Instead, the world of admissions is one of many different colors and dimensions that require some exposition into their wants and needs for students. Throughout this particular attempt to shine some light on the admissions process and background, the differences of elitist ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... It is quite easy to see that all the admissions frills and promises from the other forms of colleges have been washed away by necessity. For example, the Athens Tech websitre doesn't have any calls for adventure, just like they don't advertise any minimum SAT scores or grade point averages (Admissions Athens Tech). The community college simply tells people how to apply with no extra attempts to draw in specific students, because they are deeply rooted in the idea that, if the people need job retraining, they will come to us, because that is the community college's primary purpose. It is not exclusive in anyway, letting in students from all walks of like, high school students, high school dropouts, adults, etc. and offering them the possiblity of simply training them for regional specific jobs or letting them gain college credit before they move onto a larger institution. This results in community colleges disregarding the idea that there is a certain student that they are looking for, they simply allow to get the education that they feel is vital to them and their career, which makes admissions into community college the antithesis to that of liberal arts colleges, because the college offers education to as any as possible, not on the critirea of what can they bring to the institution, but how can the institution serve the students in the best way possible in order to secure their ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 57. College Admissions Is Unconstitutional Heidi Cruz believes that allowing race to be part of College admissions is unconstitutional. It is unconstitutional because people should not be judged by the color of their skin but on the level of knowledge they contain. Only allowing white people into certain Colleges is unfair because both groups have the ability to reach a certain level. She strongly believes that the education you receive should be decided on the work you have done and how much effort you put into getting into a college. It seems wrong to have your future put to waste just because you are not white, just because you don't have great opportunities or privileges. It is not necessary to judge students on their appearance, you can't just look at a colored person as if they were nothing. ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... According to Regents of the University of California Blake, "It upheld affirmative action, allowing race to be one of several factors in college admission policy." In other words, race interfered with whether or not you got an education. Amendment 14 states, "...nor shall any State deprive any person of life, liberty, or property, without due process of law..." This proves that race deciding whether or not you get into a college is unconstitutional because any person has the liberty of getting a good education. Skin color or race shouldn't be the key to your success. Life is about succeeding and where you come from should not decide whether or not you get an education. The court can't just deprive someone of their education just because the color of their skin isn't the same as the color of higher class ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 59. College Admissions Officers College admissions officers say the worst essays they read on college applications are self–absorbed recitals of high–school achievements: the what–I–learned–by–working–so–hard–a s–yearbook– editor essay, the I–went–to–Europe–and–learned–how–complex–the–world–is essay and the how– to–solve–world–hunger–and–all–the–other–world–problems essay. The best essays, the officers say, are those that reveal something about the author's personality. They often do it in an originial way, and, usually, read like an entry from someone's diary. Describing what he looked for, one admissions officer said, ''I want to see what makes someone tick.'' Fifty of the best essays selected by admissions officers at top colleges have been collected by two Yale students, Brian Kasbar and Boykin Curry, in a new book, ''Essays That Worked: 50 Essays From ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... '' 'Chill out,' she said. 'Scarecrow, you won't need brains if you take an S.A.T. prep course. Sterling, don't worry; hearts hardly count. Dandelion, you are unlikely to work no matter where you go, but you would not be alone at Harvard. And now you Dorothy. All along you have had the ivy slippers. Nothing can stand in your way. You are going to Brown.' '' And Dorothy (Mr. Cooper) did. A One– Act Musical Among the ''Offbeat Essays,'' Matt Weingarden, a Yale applicant, wrote a one–act musical in which he plays himself. His best friend is named Sponge and a chorus comments on Matt's description of why he wants Yale and why Yale should want him. To the tune of ''When Johnny Comes Marching Home,'' the chorus sings: ''Oh, Matt is applying to Yale on his knees, Accept! Accept! Academically, socially, artistically, he's Adept! Adept! With his sharp sense of humor he knocks us all out, He is the candidate we highly tout And our song may be stale But Matt ought to get into ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 61. Is The College Admissions Standards? Essay It's Hard to be Accepted The college admissions standards in America today are more rigorous and in depth than they have ever been but can also be somewhat unfair. The process of applying can be quite stressful for students and parents alike as they try to successfully weave their way through an expansive application that includes everything from essays to transcripts and so much more. And while the feeling of being accepted leads to true exuberance because of all that hard work (as I can personally attest to), the feeling of being denied can rival it in intensity without a doubt (as I unfortunately can also confirm). As college becomes more and more encouraged in high schools across the nation, and as the number of college applicants continues to grow there will continue to be more of those students who are not accepted to a certain school, granted there is a place for everyone. But this phenomenon brings up a simple question; why? Students are left to ponder why they didn't receive admission in many cases, as no college that I know of gives an actual reason as to why acceptance was granted or denied. Luckily we do have some information supplied by schools and other various sources on what factors are the most important to schools. While we may not like all of what we find when taking a closer look, it is still interesting nonetheless. Let us first take a look at what students must go through to give themselves a chance to meet the admissions standards at ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 63. Letter To College Admission I am writing this letter to inform the Admissions Committee that given an acceptance, I fully intend on attending MSUCHM. After visiting the campus on Interview Day, learning about the University's mission and the Shared Discovery Curriculum, I am fully confident in my decision. Being put through the pressure of college over the last four years, I have benefitted the most by having the opportunity to learn about myself. I learned what motivated me, understood how I learned, and most importantly, what my weaknesses were. Unbeknownst to me on my first day, my college experience has been a means of preparing me academically and emotionally for the challenges of medical school. The HUDA Clinic has served as a conduit for me to understand my ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 65. Marketing and College Admissions For centuries, studying at a university has been a common notion that many young people aspired to. With time, this idea grew to become an expected step in the lives of young adults. Regardless of how regular and expected this life decision may seem, the decision to attend a particular institution to pursue one's postsecondary education is quite possibly the most important decision one will make in their early adulthood. However, these choices and decisions are only as good as the information on which they are based. So what can schools do to make sure that they remain on the radar for prospective students? More importantly, what can small private liberal arts colleges, like Salem College, do to compete with big name public ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Each step in the system should involve some form of contact that has a "specific action–oriented, measurable task" (College Recruitment Practices, n.d.). The goals in these systems can range from simply encouraging a campus visit early in the funnel process, to eventually attempting to get the applicant to send in their confirmation. These thoughts can be communicated in a variety of ways, but studies show that there are certain methods of communication that are much more effective. The most successful methods of contact are mail, telephone, electronic media, and personal contact. However, an important note is that these methods of communication are only effective if they are made on the personal level and the prospective student can feel the one–on–one connection building between them and the people at the institution. It is important for the process to individualized; throughout the college search process students are likely to become cultured consumers as they filter through the massive amounts of information that they are bombarded with–this can be very overwhelming and numerous studies and surveys have found that students are likely to ignore all forms of communication that are not explicitly directed towards them, personally. The absolute most effective recruitment technique is for an admissions counselor to visit ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 67. The Pros And Cons Of College Admissions all of this pressure society puts on teenagers can create mad anxiety. College admissions are highly selective to add on to this process of stress. With college becoming harder and harder to get in to this means "more admissions tests, more rigorous classes, more applications, more college tours" (great schools.org) the stress in students increases creating a non–pleasant experience when applying to college. Lloyd Thacker says "college admissions should be educational" (great schools. Org) but the process has just become an unwanted amount of stress that is piled onto all of the other things high school students are dedicated too. Not only do students have to dedicate time to all of the activities they need to do in order to get in to college ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... You'll find you will begin to connect with schools you adore the most and the ones you don't. students cannot really change how colleges re accepting and denying students but they can come to a realization that applying to college and getting accepted is much like a lottery, you never really know until you have taken the chance but rule out the chances you've got. The last solution for college admissions stress is a broader solution, have the colleges pay for sat and act score reports, instead of students paying a load of money to take a rigorous test that may or may not determine whether or not the student gets into the school they are applying to. Making the college pay for the test will save the students money and "the colleges are less likely to order the score reports until decisions are windowed down." (Washingtonpost.com) in the end college can be stressful and if the student doesn't get accepted into their school do something with the rejection letters, get tighter with friends and have a burning party of the rejection it could be a freeing experience to all of the stress that has been built up because of the ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 69. Discrimination in College Admissions Discrimination in College/University Admissions There can be many factors that determine whether or not you can get into a college. Do you have the grades, are you involved in your community, have you been convicted. Many questions like those listed above have been commonly asked to applicants who apply for major colleges universities. However, you are never asked your ethnicity during an interview, usually they give you an application to fill out and they have a space that allows you to check which race you are. Some people feel as though they may have been discriminated against because of their race or ethnicity. It may be true for some, but not all cases are alike, in the sense that racial discrimination in college applicants ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Colleges might also look at creating a more diverse campus as a way to prevent those lawsuits, because if the media starts getting reports of there being an overflow of white students at a college or university ran by a white man or woman, they look dubious, and just racist, but if they start accepting more minorities into their school, spreading a little color over the campus, in a sense, then they look more appealing to applicants who want that diversity in their dream school. Plus it shows good when schools are being taken to court for discrimination. If they show the statistics, the numbers, of the racial diversity, then that builds on their case. If they show a pie chart and 75% of the chart is green, and green represents white for example, then that makes the school look bad, ultimately allowing a jury to see a possibility of discrimination, but if it's near equal for minorities and whites, etc. , then it's good for the school. Making their case more believable. Debacles like this may never end for years to come because we need diversity in public places, without it, it would be like the Civil Rights era all over again, and we don't need any more violent protests like we have today. I ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 71. Admission Into College It is an unfortunate reality of the 21st century that admission into college is no longer a natural and calm transition made by young students as they enter adulthood. The pressure of competition for academic excellence escalates rampantly throughout high school and multiplies ten–fold at the mention of standardized testing and college applications. It leaves students nervously exhausted by the time that the thought of college presents itself in the first place. The unfortunate reality of the American educational system as of 2015 is that all students suffer from some degree of admission– induced anxiety because high school is an environment that fosters in students an overwhelming and constant consideration for their futures, and it is part ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... These thoughts in turn yield anxiety because the ingrained beliefs in the necessity of a perfect academic track record stick in students' minds. Typically, students are able fall back on emotional support systems that they build for themselves by focusing on their present selves and their passions in a healthy manner. It is in becoming so focalized on securing their futures through immense effort at school that students forget to listen to their mental needs as young adults, and they become far more vulnerable to school–induced anxiety in the absence of effective emotional support ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 73. College Admissions Essay College Admissions Essay College is a very important time in anyone's life. It's a time where boys and girls turn into men and women. It's a time where people learn valuable life skills, and how to live on their own. Choosing the right college is an incredibly important decision. Colleges come in a wide variety of shapes and sizes, specialties and strong points, as well as cultures and diversities. As a senior that will soon be on my way to a college is campus, it is vital for me to figure how I will fit in with the rest of the student body. As a human I have a unique mindset, just like everyone else, complete with values and morals that differ from everyone else's. I also have a unique high school repertoire which encompasses many of my academic ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... There are a lot of negative Nancy's out there and I try to be a positive Paul so to speak. I do my best to keep a smile on my face and make my peers laugh, even if I am not feeling so well myself. I believe life is a lot easier with a smile on your face and so I try to be that person every day; smiling, joking, laughing, and trying to make others happy. I try to make a conscious effort to help out people by holding doors, helping people carry stuff, and helping with academic studies whenever possible. I believe this is the best way for me to be a positive influence on those around ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 75. College Admission Essay Maya Angelou once said "My mission in life is not merely to survive, but to thrive; and to do so with some passion, some compassion, some humor, and some style". I believe that some people are complacent with mediocrity and therefore do not try to excel to their highest potential. As for me, furthering my future by attending college will help rise above the horizon of being average. I want to put my willing, intellectual, open mindedness, and so much more to good use. I was born and raised in Brooklyn, New York. Living in New York has show me the meaning of a hard knock life also it has given me gratitude because I have seen and hear more overwhelming problems than mines.What have you gained from being from New York? How has it made you who ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Being in this school has helped me explore my abilities. I learned how to crochet, and knit from my 8th grade science teacher. My journalism teacher believed in my intelligent and now I take part in student council. This school have thought a real support system because they want nothing but to see you be outstanding. How? What are you involved in at school? While attending the School for Human Rights I have been afforded the opportunity to take college level courses at Brooklyn College. Participating in College Now provided me with the chance to receive college credits. Taking the college now class has giving me a understandance of the level of intensity that I will have to perform at. This college class taught me true mean of studying whether it was by myself or with a group. What else has being in College Now taught you? I believe that I have a calling to help others that cannot help them. I am passionate about utilizing my personal time to serve the community surrounding me. In my high school and church I make desserts for bake sales to raise funds for school and church use's. I involve myself in my local church by being a part of the Multimedia Coordinator team. Every year I interact with homeless shelters because my mom and I cook meals and bring clothes for them. I take pleasure in giving back and helping because I like to encounter different people and see the diversity. While focusing on my studies I will participate organization, and club to continue making a change. Connect community service with ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...
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  • 77. College Admission Essay Beginning college is like being reborn into the world. You begin your first day with a blank slate, and a thousand fears to go with it. Last year, I started my new life at Saginaw Valley State University. As a fresh graduate of New Lothrop High School, I had no idea what to expect from the world past the cornfields that used to surround me everyday at school. With a deep breath, I gathered everything I learned from my time at New Lothrop and jumped into my new world. My past lessons of leadership, responsibility and dedication prepared me for college, but I still have many more to learn. As I was beginning my freshman year of college, I could only imagine what it would be like until I actually experienced it. My first official "college" business ... Show more content on Helpwriting.net ... Currently, I am pursuing a biochemistry major. As a freshman, I predict my future plans will change as I grow and learn new things about myself, however, right now I plan on using my biochemistry degree to obtain a job in the genetics field. Genetics has a number of opportunities that are being created each day for new students who are interested in the mystery that makes all humans unique. Once I obtain my bachelor of science degree in biochemistry, I have two main options to follow to continue my education. My first option is to attend the University of Michigan to complete my masters and PhD in human genetics to become a genetic researcher. My second option is to attend medical school to become a medical geneticist. Both options are still very wide open, and I hope to eventually see the right path for me. While waiting for that "eureka" moment, I plan on enjoying my time at SVSU. I hope to study abroad during my junior year of school, and to become an assistant researcher for a professor in either the biology or chemistry labs. I am thankful for the opportunity to apply for your scholarship. College is for learning new things about the world and yourself, and I hope that I make the most of it. I will always work hard for my goals, and with your help, I will be one step closer to my ... Get more on HelpWriting.net ...