right this has to be my final edit.

1. (Inside Horror)
By
(Mandisi David Sibanda)
(Based on The Final Girls)
Heath Park Productions Presents
Fade IN:

2. INT. CLASSROOM - DAY
We begin inside HP Massacre, which is a film within a
film as Christopher and Cyndi are crouching in the
corridor, while Dan watches it unfold from his computer
screen.
Christopher
(Breathing heavily)
Cindy we need to get to the bottom
floor…that’s the only way out.
They begin to walk towards the staircase.
Dan yawns and slowly begins to fall asleep.
Fade out.
Fade In
INT. SCHOOL CORRIDOR - NIGHT
Dan awakens to find that he is the middle of a corridor
with HP Massacre written in 3D text.
Dan
(Confused)
NO FRICKEN WAY…it can’t be…
He pats himself down and looks around.
Christopher is running then he suddenly bumps into
Dan dropping them both to the ground.
Christopher
(Distressed)
Aaah my wrist
Dan
(sarcastically)

3. Well, I'm sorry for
blocking your way…
He looks at him briefly.
Christopher?
Christopher
(Confused)
Dude how the hell do you
know my name?
Dan
Christopher…no way, I…I…I
can’t believe it’s you.
Christopher
First of all, who are you?
And secondly can you
please! Explain to me
what’s going on here?
Dan
My names Dan and basically
1 minute I'm in my media
class then next thing I'm
in a movie.
Christopher
Well that explains a
lot…anyway we need to find
my friend Cindy, we got
split up.
Clackson sound
OH SHIT, you know what that means
Dan and Christopher
Victor Hemz…
Dan
I think we should get moving. I know
this film of by heart and I think I
know where Cindy is. Ill get both of
you through this film alive.
Fade Out

4. FADE IN
INT. SECOND FLOOR - NIGHT
Dan and Christopher have gone up to the second floor to
find Cindy.
Christopher
So you're telling me that
you know this film off by
heart?
Dan
Ye pretty much.
Christopher
(Sarcastically)
Great
Dan
Right I think she’s in here.
Dan opens the storage cabinet.
Cindy stands up.
Cindy
You sure took your time. And who's he.
Christopher
That’s Dan and he's our best chance of
getting out of here alive.
Dan
Well technically you originally die at that end.
Christopher
(Confused)

5. Wait what!
Clackson Sound
Christopher
(Panicking)
Ok Dan, what’s the plan?
Dan
All right here me out; victor is like
all movie killers…
Fade Out
FADE IN
INT. SECOND FLOOR CORRIDOR. NIGHT
Dan and Cindy wait nervously for Victor Hemz so their
plan can unfold.
Dan
So…how you doing?
Cindy
(Serious)
I don't like you.
Clackson Sound
Dan
(Hesitant)
Right remember the plan.
We don't split up no
matter what.
Victor runs round the corner holding a Baseball bat.
Victor
(Dark)
Grrrr

6. Dan
RUUUUUUUUN…
Cindy
Why are we running like this?
Dan
It’s slow motion.
Fade To
FADE IN
INT. sports hall - night
Christopher is waiting in the school hall for the all
clear from Dan and Cindy.
Christopher
(Confused)
Where are they!
Christopher is holding a rope.
Dan and Cindy Run into the sports hall followed by
Victor.
Dan
Here comes the intense music.
Victor
Get over here.
Victor grabs Dan and throws him across the sports hall.
Dan
(Screaming)
Aaah *holds his ribs*, SHIT.
Victor stumbles over the rope that has been laid out.
Christopher

7. (Pumped)
Gotcha.
Victor gets up slowly and shakes it off.
Victor
Grrrrr
Christopher and Cindy
(Surprised)
OH SHIT…
Christopher
Cindy head down stairs,
I’ll hold him off.
Cindy
(Angry)
Have you completely lost
your mind, I'm not
leaving you.
Christopher
Cindy it’s the only way,
just do it will be
together again soon.
Kisses her.
Cindy Runs towards the staircase.
Christopher
I’m going to regret this.
Runs at victor.
Clackson Sound
Victor hits Christopher with his baseball bat.

8. Victor
(Creepily)
I’m coming.
Fade To
Fade In
INT. STAIRCASE - NIGHT
Cindy is looking for an escape route out of the
building with Victor Hemz approaching behind.
Cindy attempts to open the door.
Cindy
(Panicking)
Oh no, no, nooo. Not now.
Clackson Sound
Victor
You're going to die now.
Just like your friends.
Goes to swing his bat.
Dan and Christopher
HEY VICTOR…
Victor
huh!
Both Dan and Christopher fly kick Victor down the
staircase sending him tumbling to the ground floor.
Cindy
Takes a deep breathe.
Christopher
I told you I’d come back for you.
Dan hugs Cindy.
Dan

9. Here come the end credits
Christopher
We couldn’t thank you enough for
helping us out.
Cindy
And I'm sorry about earlier, you're a
pretty cool guy.
Dan
No Worries…
Flash
Fade Out
Fade IN
INT. CLASSROOM - DAY
Dan is now back at school and what he thinks is the
real world.
Dan
At least things are back to normal
now.
Opens the classroom door to exit.
HP MASSACRE 2…
Clackson Sound
END
Fade Out

10. SCENE INDEX
Fade IN 2
FADE IN 4
INT. Second floor - night 4
FADE IN 5
INT. second floor corridor. Night 5
FADE IN 5
INT. sports hall - night 5
Fade IN 7
INT. Staircase - NIGHT 7
Fade IN 8
Int. classroom - Day 8