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Pitch Feedback
To get feedback from the pitch I interviewed 4
people after they all read my pitch, asking them
for a general response/opinion on what they
thought of it. To make it equal I did 2 boys and 2
girls. I also asked them to be very raw and
honest, even if that meant negative criticism.
Opinion One – Rosie Morgan
• “I feel that your pitch as a very good, unique
idea! Apart from the horror movie ‘The Boy’ I
actually have not heard off many horror films
based under your idea, I think you should go for it
to be honest!”
Opinion Two – Ashley M
• “If I am completely honest and blunt with you I
feel the idea of dolls has been played on a lot for
horror films! I mean there are so many films based
around dolls, Annabelle, Chucky, The Boy?
Honestly it is a really good idea that the doll will
be taking human form but I think you should think
more outside the box!”
Opinion Three – Dione
• “I agree with Ashley to be honest. The idea is
good but I feel that the concept has been over
used a lot which could take away the unique
aspect factor of your work. The fact that the doll
would be in human form does put a twist to the
plot line however!”
Opinion Four – Dione
• “Personally I like the doll being in human form
concept, but when just making a general analysis
of horror films I feel the concept of the antagonist
being supernatural is what is over used. I feel
personally that a human antagonist would actually
be better as it would create a sense of realism,
like this could actually happen – which I find the
ultimate scare!”

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Pitch feedback

  • 1. Pitch Feedback To get feedback from the pitch I interviewed 4 people after they all read my pitch, asking them for a general response/opinion on what they thought of it. To make it equal I did 2 boys and 2 girls. I also asked them to be very raw and honest, even if that meant negative criticism.
  • 2. Opinion One – Rosie Morgan • “I feel that your pitch as a very good, unique idea! Apart from the horror movie ‘The Boy’ I actually have not heard off many horror films based under your idea, I think you should go for it to be honest!”
  • 3. Opinion Two – Ashley M • “If I am completely honest and blunt with you I feel the idea of dolls has been played on a lot for horror films! I mean there are so many films based around dolls, Annabelle, Chucky, The Boy? Honestly it is a really good idea that the doll will be taking human form but I think you should think more outside the box!”
  • 4. Opinion Three – Dione • “I agree with Ashley to be honest. The idea is good but I feel that the concept has been over used a lot which could take away the unique aspect factor of your work. The fact that the doll would be in human form does put a twist to the plot line however!”
  • 5. Opinion Four – Dione • “Personally I like the doll being in human form concept, but when just making a general analysis of horror films I feel the concept of the antagonist being supernatural is what is over used. I feel personally that a human antagonist would actually be better as it would create a sense of realism, like this could actually happen – which I find the ultimate scare!”