2. First drafts
This draft was made
inspired by the
Mixmag music
magazine contents
page which I
analysed. However
after the feedback I
will change the
background colour
because dark
colours would raise
the expenses of the
magazine printing.
3. Now I have tried
these lighter colours
to for the background
for less expense. My
feedback from this
draft was ”I prefer
the beige one, and to
bring the blue colour
from the front cover
for more synergy.
Also label the
picture!”
Second draft
4. Feedback-
“ Put a picture of
something
related to music
so that it can
been always be
seen; it is a
music
magazine”.
Thirddraft Fourth draft
After looking at
other contents
pages from
music magazines
I could see they
have a bigger
amount of cover
lines. And I also
will try to fill
most of the
gaps.
5. Fourth draft Feedback
video
The feedback was
to add more
colour, to do this
I changed more of
text and footer
line font to blue,
added a header
to bring in the
colour blue,
which creates a
clear, strong
house style.
