1. Something we could have improved on is the
time management, although my group finished
our documentary before all other groups, I still
believe we could have finished it quicker. We
particularly wasted time deciding what area of
the chess pieces we should focus on and also
our editing, we were fickle when it came to
deciding whether we should keep some
footage or not, but at the end we did get
there. Also we did have to film some last
minute footage which means we could have
maybe planned a little more effectively.
This was completely
unnecessary, by removing
this sentence, the
paragraph sounds a lot
better and more concise
because I waffled with
this.