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Preliminary video feedback

             I showed the preliminary video to a 15-year-old
             teenage boy in order to get bad feedback on
             what was good and what needed
             improvements within the video. The teenager
             quoted: “good start, enjoyable to watch
             considering there is a murder which makes it
             more thriller – like”.

             The teenager also had things to say that would
             improve the video as a whole in order to
             achieve a great final task. For example he also
             quoted: “Perhaps next time you can use a
             better quality camera as there were signs of
             shots being unfocused, also the it looked quite
             old fashioned considering it was really brown
             and white”


             After analyzing all the feedback from this
             teenager it’s clear to say that the quality of the
             footage could of certainly been improved and
             the contrast on colour correction of the video
             needs to be more modern as though it was
             coming from this set generation. The fact that
             there is a murder in the video does it makes it
             that bit more thrilling which is a plus. All in all I
             have found exactly what I need to achieve a
             good final product.

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Prelim feedback

  • 1. Preliminary video feedback I showed the preliminary video to a 15-year-old teenage boy in order to get bad feedback on what was good and what needed improvements within the video. The teenager quoted: “good start, enjoyable to watch considering there is a murder which makes it more thriller – like”. The teenager also had things to say that would improve the video as a whole in order to achieve a great final task. For example he also quoted: “Perhaps next time you can use a better quality camera as there were signs of shots being unfocused, also the it looked quite old fashioned considering it was really brown and white” After analyzing all the feedback from this teenager it’s clear to say that the quality of the footage could of certainly been improved and the contrast on colour correction of the video needs to be more modern as though it was coming from this set generation. The fact that there is a murder in the video does it makes it that bit more thrilling which is a plus. All in all I have found exactly what I need to achieve a good final product.