The husband arrives home late from work, and his wife accuses him of being unfaithful with his boss again. They argue, with the wife expressing distrust in her husband and demanding that he leave. The husband tries to downplay the situation and get his wife to calm down and talk in the morning. The screen then goes black as sirens are heard. The document also includes notes from the scriptwriter on changes made, such as reordering lines and changing words to better suit the characters.

1. Scriptdraft
Husband:HoneyI’mhome
Wife:Do youknowwhatthe time is,it’s10:30 where have youbeen?
Husband:At workhoney
Wife:Withyourboss again?You knowI don’ttrustHER!!
Husband:She’s6 yearsolderthan me nothinghappenedlasttime like Itoldyouandnothinghas
happenedthistime either!
Wife:SomehowIdon’tbelieve youandsomehowIdon’ttrustthe wordscomingoutof yourmouth.
I wantyou out
Husband:Your justtiredlet’seatand go to sleepandsettle itinthe morning
Wife:Go to sleepwithyouafteryou’ve beenwithTHAT!Leave NOWandI’dlisten,youknow itwas
a close call last time youupsetme
Husband:You’re beingirrational dear
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The main changesthatI have made inmy scriptwhenputtingitintothe correct formatis the order
of the linesandchanging wordsforexample,Ichanged‘dear’for‘honey’ asIthinkitwouldsuitthe
character more as, ‘dear’sounds toooldfor the characters age.