1. Peer feedback
I have gathered peer feedback and have combined the results to give an overall view of what
they liked and what I need to improve. By combining the results it is easier to see what are the
most important parts which need to be improved, therefore I can prioritise these
improvements to get the most important ones done first.

2. 1. Favourite images and connotations.
Water shots
Pull focus
Birds in the sky
Spinning

3. 2. What aspects of the music video
promote the track.
• Lyrics and visuals match
• Location of the video fits well with the lyrics
• Realistic lip syncing
• Lighting, bright and sweet (like the song)

4. 3. How does the video use musical
genre conventions
Acoustic guitar
Location
Country genre- lots of wildlife (mise-en scene)
Shots of the country and sunset fits with the genre

5. 4.Creative use of technical skills
(controlled use of camera; variety of shot
sizes; editing techniques; lip synch; pace
and rhythm)
• Lip sync
• Pace, rhythm good
• Pictures instead of film
• Fading into shots
• Spinning
• Good use of different shots
• Time lapse

6. 5. Areas of
improvement.
Could see film-makers shadow in one shot
Text at the beginning is a bit unclear
Some shots need flows between them

7. Some shots are cut to quickly
Comes to an abrupt stop at the end
Improve the sunset sequence, a tiny bit out of time