1. Question 3
What have
you learned
from your
audience
feedback?

2. Average rating
given
Video Comments:
What you expect from an indie music Good-
video? -Excellent use of guitar at the start and end Good
Performance and Good camerawork
-Lots of editing- shows skill
-Good effects used
-Like the range of shots
Yes -Good lip-syncing
No -Good lip syncing, last shot is really good
Bad-
-Not sure of narrative and lyrics
-A bit dark in areas. Shots are too blurry. Some performance
is lacking.
Does lip-syncing look natural? -At some points I think the shots are too long. I think there is
too much walking.
-When the two are singing the shots are vary dark.
-Some shots out of focus
Could have used more editing techniques.
Black and white seems random, not definite story.
Yes
No Possible improvements-
-Some of the narrative
-The mise-en-scene
-Some of the narrative does not make sense.
-Costumes to indie
- Green light to cover whole body not just face.

3. Average rating
given
Digipak
Does my digipak look Comments:
professional?
Good-
-The cover is really good
-Image of band, colours, editing effects on images.
-I like the 3D effect lyric page, images.
Yes -Images are also shots that are within music video
-Has all needed information, good photo of performance.
No -Good images and text
-Fits convention. Good manipulation of images.
Bad-
Would you buy the digipak instead -Photo page is not very good
of the album online? -No album name on cover, looks basic.
-Colour theme
-I don’t like the blue background
-Not exciting
-Credit Block? Missing.
Yes
Possible improvements-
No -Fonts
-Make it more exciting
-Colour scheme

4. Average rating
given
Advert
Does my advert look Comments:
professional?
Good-
-Great use of colour and communication
-Good position of Digipak, font use
-Good images and text
Yes -Got all needed information
-Photo, logos
No -Band name, release date, images
Very good style, looks pretty cool
Bad-
-Basic, nothing stands out
Does the advert attract you to -Don’t like the blue background
have a look at the band and -I don’t like the bright colours, don’t follow the theme
album? -Album name? image of band?
Just slightly plain and minimalist
Possible improvements-
-The colour scheme
Yes -Make it exciting
-Font
No -Background
-Use of images of band
-Put band pictures in.

5. Review of feedback
Overall the feedback as been good but there are
areas where there were suggestions where I could
improve the video and ancillary texts.
Does the music video link For the video a comment that came up a lot was that
with the ancilary texts they did not understand the narrative, I can
understand that as it is hard to think why the main
character is running and walking. If I have a second
chance to redo the video I would plan a narrative
that linked stronger to the lyrics. Such as the lyrics
indicated that the person was upset with his life and
was reflecting what he is doing.
Yes
No The Digipak was liked by the people I asked and most
people thought that it looked professional and slightly
more than half of people I asked said they would go
to a shop and purchase the exclusive Digipak that has
extra content rather than just the online version of the
album
(Above) This shows that the majority of For the advert the I asked people if they thought that
people thought that my music video linked this looked professional as they would expect to see
to my ancillary texts such as the use of this on the shelves in a shop. The majority said yes but
colours and the pictures that I used on the
a few said no that could have been because they did
not like the design or they think that I could change to
Digipak and Avert. This is good as people make it better. The possible improvements that they
can identify the album Digipak with the suggested to improve the advert if I had a chance to
music video. redo it were like slight changes such as the
colours, the font and including more pictures of the
band, I agree with most of what the people had to
say about the advert and the changes could have
been easy and would have not taken too long.