This is feedback for our second cut.

2.  The new footage adds more depth to
the video and the overall narrative is
much clearer now.
 The flashback style scenes are effective
and help the narrative to flow.
 The pace of the video and editing
accurately fits the pace of the song (via
the use of fades, slow motion, long takes
etc.)

3.  The shot of Zoe’s eyes is unnecessary and
does not add anything to the storyline, or
even link to the lyrics.
 Some of the shots need the colours
correcting – this would link the shots together
and give the music video continuity and a
clear narrative. For example the internal
shots should have similar colours and lighting,
and the flashback scenes should be different
to ensure there is no confusion for the
audience.