The Virus by Aidan (2nd Grade)

1. THE VIRUS
AIDAN (4TH GRADE)
SCRATCH PAPER TUTORING

2. There was a computer that never checks
his emails. All of his friends don’t like it
because they think he is angry at them.
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3. One of his friends is a smartphone. He
is upset with the computer, so he sends
him a virus.
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4. When the computer checks his email, he
gets the virus from his friend. A ton of
pop-up windows show up on screen.
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5. The computer can’t see very well
because of all the pop-ups and he runs
into a wall. When he wakes up, he sees a
crack on his screen.
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6. The smartphone felt really sorry and
sent him an anti-virus app, but the
computer didn’t trust him anymore and
would not download it.
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7. One of the friends of the computer and
the smartphone was a tablet. The tablet
felt sad for both of them and wanted
them to be friends again.
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8. The smartphone buys the computer a
new screen and told the tablet to deliver
it to the computer.
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9. After the computer put his new screen
on, he was happy and forgives the
smartphone.
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10. The computer downloads the anti-virus
app sent from the smartphone and all of
the pop-ups went away.
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11. Now, they all become great friends
again. They have a sleepover and play
games all night!
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12. They all went to sleep at 1am when their
batteries died. All of them snuggled
next to the outlet so they could recharge
their batteries.
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